Writings From the Heart
Viewing comments for Chapter 4 "Winds of Change"A book of Poetry & Writing
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Comment from Auroraboreal800
I specially liked the passion and honesty of this beautiful, heartfelt and emotive love poem I enjoyed reading it.
Thanks for sharing... Great job!
reply by the author on 06-May-2010
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I specially liked the passion and honesty of this beautiful, heartfelt and emotive love poem I enjoyed reading it.
Thanks for sharing... Great job!
Comment Written 06-May-2010
reply by the author on 06-May-2010
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thank you for reading Auroraboreal
Comment from Mary Faucheux
I can empathize with the feelings in this poem. I think we have all walked those shores at one time or another in our lives. You did a super job of expressing those fears and hopes.
Mary
reply by the author on 06-May-2010
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I can empathize with the feelings in this poem. I think we have all walked those shores at one time or another in our lives. You did a super job of expressing those fears and hopes.
Mary
Comment Written 06-May-2010
reply by the author on 06-May-2010
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thank you so mush for your comments Mary
Comment from Lou67
This is a very good poem, the words meaningful and the rhyme and flow are simple but effective. It is well presented and well edited with no adjustments needed
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This is a very good poem, the words meaningful and the rhyme and flow are simple but effective. It is well presented and well edited with no adjustments needed
Comment Written 06-May-2010
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thank you
Comment from fionageorge
This is a poignant and profound free flowing free verse poem, with lots of emotion and depth of meaning in the well structured words.
The North Sea is as I remember it from my childhood, cool!
Warmest regards, and thank you for sharing,
Marijke
reply by the author on 06-May-2010
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This is a poignant and profound free flowing free verse poem, with lots of emotion and depth of meaning in the well structured words.
The North Sea is as I remember it from my childhood, cool!
Warmest regards, and thank you for sharing,
Marijke
Comment Written 06-May-2010
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thank you
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
'Winds of Change' is an extremely well-written and gut-wrenching piece. This talented poet asks some rhetorical questions that is impossible for mere mortals to answer. It was a privilege to both read and review a work of this standard.
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'Winds of Change' is an extremely well-written and gut-wrenching piece. This talented poet asks some rhetorical questions that is impossible for mere mortals to answer. It was a privilege to both read and review a work of this standard.
Comment Written 06-May-2010
reply by the author on 06-May-2010
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again thank you for reading
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It was my pleasure.
Kindest regards,
the Duchess
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thank you Duchess
Comment from Vicwhiskey
That's a sad one but very well written. No spag, no organizational notes. So I'll say, good work and let you get on with your day. vw
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That's a sad one but very well written. No spag, no organizational notes. So I'll say, good work and let you get on with your day. vw
Comment Written 06-May-2010
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thank you Vic
Comment from Pili Pubul
If I dare show you my heart, will you cherish the passion it would bring?
Or slowly destroy the life within with promises that will never be.
What had they do to you my friend, to carry so much pain and doubt? It is no guaranty in life ,none. So I wish you to love with total abandon free of fears. This is such a moving and well written poem with your golden pen. Excellent my friend.
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If I dare show you my heart, will you cherish the passion it would bring?
Or slowly destroy the life within with promises that will never be.
What had they do to you my friend, to carry so much pain and doubt? It is no guaranty in life ,none. So I wish you to love with total abandon free of fears. This is such a moving and well written poem with your golden pen. Excellent my friend.
Comment Written 06-May-2010
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Thank you so much for reading Pili
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You welcome, you are becoming one of my favorite poets.
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Thanks Pili i just write what i feel most of the time
Gary
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That you write with total realism and open soul is what touch our emotions. Beside the fact that you have the gift of writing so well.
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thank you pili
Comment from mmichelle97219
Oh to feel like the papercup that has served its purpose. It is just a part of being human, an experiecne we all must have at least once. Good poem.
Michelle
reply by the author on 05-May-2010
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Oh to feel like the papercup that has served its purpose. It is just a part of being human, an experiecne we all must have at least once. Good poem.
Michelle
Comment Written 05-May-2010
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thank you Michelle for reading
Comment from RazberryBullet
Liked these lines especially: Are you: my love, my life, my soul mate? Or do I dare to dream, Can we stand hand in hand at peace with the understanding of time in this moonlight?
Well done!
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Liked these lines especially: Are you: my love, my life, my soul mate? Or do I dare to dream, Can we stand hand in hand at peace with the understanding of time in this moonlight?
Well done!
Comment Written 05-May-2010
reply by the author on 05-May-2010
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thank you Raz for your welcome comments
Comment from Addy García
Congratulations DEEPWATER on your poem is a beautiful work from beginning to end, that the winds of change continue to assist you as you did it because writing is excellent.
thank you for the richness of nature to make a beautiful poem through you and get to all of us when you share your poems on the site.
Let the winds of change that with patience and faith spread, germinate in the minds of many to make changes in your life too.
greetings from Mexico
GARCIA ADDY
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Congratulations DEEPWATER on your poem is a beautiful work from beginning to end, that the winds of change continue to assist you as you did it because writing is excellent.
thank you for the richness of nature to make a beautiful poem through you and get to all of us when you share your poems on the site.
Let the winds of change that with patience and faith spread, germinate in the minds of many to make changes in your life too.
greetings from Mexico
GARCIA ADDY
Comment Written 05-May-2010
reply by the author on 05-May-2010
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thank you Garcia for your most welcome comments