Heart Cafted Poems - 2020
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Comment from Vanna1
Your format is new to me. Is this free verse? Interesting theme, but I am not clear on your worship. You say Father, Mother, God ... Sounds like confusion. I like this idea of pondering on our thoughts. A calming piece with a lot of heart. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2020
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Your format is new to me. Is this free verse? Interesting theme, but I am not clear on your worship. You say Father, Mother, God ... Sounds like confusion. I like this idea of pondering on our thoughts. A calming piece with a lot of heart. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 31-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2020
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Vanna, I am a man of deep faith and conviction, however no longer tethered to a traditional religious order, I believe and my Master knows I do, I thank you for your time taken to read and comment on my Free Verse Faith Poem. May the Highest and Best of All that God has to offer you is always at your doorstep.
Comment from rspoet
Hello JLR,
You've written a wonderful poem of faith for the contest
that many on fanstory will relate to.There are messages
that those who are open to, can receive, perhaps an angel
in physical form.
An excellent free verse poem. Best wishes in the contest
and to you and family.
Robert.
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2020
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Hello JLR,
You've written a wonderful poem of faith for the contest
that many on fanstory will relate to.There are messages
that those who are open to, can receive, perhaps an angel
in physical form.
An excellent free verse poem. Best wishes in the contest
and to you and family.
Robert.
Comment Written 31-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2020
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Robert...I so much value your time taken to read and review my free verse poem. Blessings to you and yours always.
Comment from Eternal Muse
That was a truly beautiful poem for the Faith contest. I was really moved by the image of this white swan that a messenger from the angels; and that answered so many questions. This poem brings calm and piece to a soul; I wish you luck in the contest, and thank you so much for sharing.
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2020
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That was a truly beautiful poem for the Faith contest. I was really moved by the image of this white swan that a messenger from the angels; and that answered so many questions. This poem brings calm and piece to a soul; I wish you luck in the contest, and thank you so much for sharing.
Comment Written 31-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2020
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Eternal Muse, I appreciate your awareness of the words and meanings as we all do have messengers some seen some unseen.
Comment from palmart
Your poem is like a huge painting made of infinite brush strokes that spark internal feelings that all readers has in their past. You evidence a great command in driving all of us into your World of Faith, and after reading your writing, compare our internal feelings with those brush strokes!
Artwork is magnificent and makes the aura bigger by colour contrast!
Good job!
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2020
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Your poem is like a huge painting made of infinite brush strokes that spark internal feelings that all readers has in their past. You evidence a great command in driving all of us into your World of Faith, and after reading your writing, compare our internal feelings with those brush strokes!
Artwork is magnificent and makes the aura bigger by colour contrast!
Good job!
Comment Written 30-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2020
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palmart, what a wonderful review and comment, thank you for this validation.
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You´re very welcome, JLR!
I really appreciate your comments!
Have a wonderful weekend!
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"The Master's Messenger", is an extremely well-written, and spiritually-uplifting piece. This talented poet's work, was a pleasure to both read and review. I look forward to seeing your next post.
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2020
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"The Master's Messenger", is an extremely well-written, and spiritually-uplifting piece. This talented poet's work, was a pleasure to both read and review. I look forward to seeing your next post.
Comment Written 30-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2020
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Duchess, I am always appreciative of your time taken to read and comment on my poems. Have a fantastic weekend.
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JLR, as always, you're very welcome.
God bless you, take care and keep safe!
the Duchess
Comment from estory
It was a great poem of finding peace in faith. I liked this image of the dove coming down and lighting on the windowsill, a soft, sublime kind of image, an image of the Spirit gifting you His grace and peace. There's a great soft touch to the rhythm of the language that underscores that theme, alot of these softening 's' sounds that sooth the soul. estory
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2020
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It was a great poem of finding peace in faith. I liked this image of the dove coming down and lighting on the windowsill, a soft, sublime kind of image, an image of the Spirit gifting you His grace and peace. There's a great soft touch to the rhythm of the language that underscores that theme, alot of these softening 's' sounds that sooth the soul. estory
Comment Written 30-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2020
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Estory,thank you for this kind review. I hope you have a splendid weekend.
Comment from evesayshi
In my opinion, I was moved by this read - an "Exceptional" write in smooth and lyrical free verse, describing faith in a personal, spiritually illustrated perspective...
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2020
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In my opinion, I was moved by this read - an "Exceptional" write in smooth and lyrical free verse, describing faith in a personal, spiritually illustrated perspective...
Comment Written 30-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2020
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Eve,I am extremely grateful for your generous six-star review, your validation is so motivational.
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You are very welcome - I'm gratified to learn you found my review noteworthy...Eve
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Hello JLR, this is a most beautiful faith poem in free verse with every line a gem. I got quite carried away while reading it. My favourite line 'I have Angels in my presence...' So beautiful. This has to be a winner - Good Luck and warm wishes - Dorothy x
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2020
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Hello JLR, this is a most beautiful faith poem in free verse with every line a gem. I got quite carried away while reading it. My favourite line 'I have Angels in my presence...' So beautiful. This has to be a winner - Good Luck and warm wishes - Dorothy x
Comment Written 30-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2020
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Dorothy, thank you very much! Have a delightful Weekend.
Comment from Raul1
I like how you have written of your faith in your poetry. Well written. Well done. It is clear and concise. I like how you structured this poem. Excellent work! Thanks for sharing!
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2020
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I like how you have written of your faith in your poetry. Well written. Well done. It is clear and concise. I like how you structured this poem. Excellent work! Thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 30-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2020
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Thanks Raul.
Comment from RShipp
'In the silence I sit....
my heart's desire is to shut-out
the several flittering thoughts.
save, but, just one...'
(What a simple but elegant way to word this.)
Enjoyed.
Best of luck in the My Faith contest.
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2020
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'In the silence I sit....
my heart's desire is to shut-out
the several flittering thoughts.
save, but, just one...'
(What a simple but elegant way to word this.)
Enjoyed.
Best of luck in the My Faith contest.
Comment Written 30-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2020
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I am so pleased that you validate this line and its intended simplicity.