OL No Name
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Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
We aren't born with a name, so going out without one is just fine. God knows who we all are. Ol' no name went through life doing his own thing, not bothering anyone. I enjoyed your story in a poem, Willie, well done and good luck in the contest. :)) Sandra
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We aren't born with a name, so going out without one is just fine. God knows who we all are. Ol' no name went through life doing his own thing, not bothering anyone. I enjoyed your story in a poem, Willie, well done and good luck in the contest. :)) Sandra
Comment Written 29-Jan-2022
Comment from rspoet
Hello Willie,
You've written a wonderful story in poem for the contest
with the old time feel of a different era.
Excellent rhyming and smooth meter.
I'm glad to see you changed it to all quatrains.
You've captured the loneliness and isolation,
and the sadness that it sometimes leads to.
Well done.
Best wishes in the contest.
Robert
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Hello Willie,
You've written a wonderful story in poem for the contest
with the old time feel of a different era.
Excellent rhyming and smooth meter.
I'm glad to see you changed it to all quatrains.
You've captured the loneliness and isolation,
and the sadness that it sometimes leads to.
Well done.
Best wishes in the contest.
Robert
Comment Written 29-Jan-2022
Comment from Gee
Very nice but very sad Mr. Wille.
I think you did well for the competition.
Thanks for sharing your cowboy poetry with us.
I think this is the first cowboy poem I read.
Good Luck in the contest.
Gee
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Very nice but very sad Mr. Wille.
I think you did well for the competition.
Thanks for sharing your cowboy poetry with us.
I think this is the first cowboy poem I read.
Good Luck in the contest.
Gee
Comment Written 29-Jan-2022
Comment from harmony13
The author's words are heartfelt, sad, descriptive and creative. I thought
about how sometimes we know nothing about someone and they could
be in severe pain. The poem flows and connects well. The artwork goes
well with these words.
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The author's words are heartfelt, sad, descriptive and creative. I thought
about how sometimes we know nothing about someone and they could
be in severe pain. The poem flows and connects well. The artwork goes
well with these words.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2022
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
This is a very well written poem. I sure like the contents of each stanza. It is telling us about a Cowboy that had no name; only he or God knew he was. I have to give you an exceptional rating.
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This is a very well written poem. I sure like the contents of each stanza. It is telling us about a Cowboy that had no name; only he or God knew he was. I have to give you an exceptional rating.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2022
Comment from rjuselius
This is a brilliant story and told so very well with a poem dear Willie! This should do very well in the contest and if i was a western gambler, i might have placed a bet on this.
Thank you for sharing!
Good luck!
Blessings with hugs and kisses my friend!
Rebekka x
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This is a brilliant story and told so very well with a poem dear Willie! This should do very well in the contest and if i was a western gambler, i might have placed a bet on this.
Thank you for sharing!
Good luck!
Blessings with hugs and kisses my friend!
Rebekka x
Comment Written 29-Jan-2022
Comment from jenintorre
I really liked your story in a poem about Ol no name.. it galloped along with very good rhyme and rhythm.
I wish you lots of luck in the competition. Best wishes. Jen.
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I really liked your story in a poem about Ol no name.. it galloped along with very good rhyme and rhythm.
I wish you lots of luck in the competition. Best wishes. Jen.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2022
Comment from Heather Burroughs
Your poem is absolutely beautiful and heartbreaking at the time. The dialogue flowed nicely with the poem. Thank you for sharing your work. Many blessings to you and your loved ones.
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Your poem is absolutely beautiful and heartbreaking at the time. The dialogue flowed nicely with the poem. Thank you for sharing your work. Many blessings to you and your loved ones.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2022
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
People choose to live their lives in different ways and who are we to criticise. I enjoyed the story here Willie, I loved your descriptions in this comprehensive story about this man who lives his life alone and in his own way, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
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People choose to live their lives in different ways and who are we to criticise. I enjoyed the story here Willie, I loved your descriptions in this comprehensive story about this man who lives his life alone and in his own way, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 29-Jan-2022
Comment from jake cosmos aller
very well done. I love the way you weaved the story of an old lonely man in the wild west days of yore. You could easily write a whole series of poems about his life
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very well done. I love the way you weaved the story of an old lonely man in the wild west days of yore. You could easily write a whole series of poems about his life
Comment Written 29-Jan-2022