Secrets in the Wind
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Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
You're torturing me--he's so close to rescuing Annie and then he gets stuck in a ditch. Vivid multi-sensory rendering of the muck and stench. Brilliant chapter.
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2021
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You're torturing me--he's so close to rescuing Annie and then he gets stuck in a ditch. Vivid multi-sensory rendering of the muck and stench. Brilliant chapter.
Comment Written 12-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2021
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Almost there but not quite.... thank you for always reading, enjoying and reviewing. I appreciate it very much.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Gert sherwood
Begin Again
I like how you keep us informed of what is going on with the barrels with false bottom and hauling Drugs
From what I read that the If the truck hauls 220 barrels with each load, we're talking eighteen or twenty million dollars."
You didn't say much about "Human Trafficking in this chapter
Gert
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2021
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Begin Again
I like how you keep us informed of what is going on with the barrels with false bottom and hauling Drugs
From what I read that the If the truck hauls 220 barrels with each load, we're talking eighteen or twenty million dollars."
You didn't say much about "Human Trafficking in this chapter
Gert
Comment Written 12-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2021
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All the people that were rescued from the basement fire were locked down there because they were going to be auctioned. Luckily, they were rescued.
Smiles, Carol
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Thank you Begin Again for you answer of what was going on the with Human Trafficking
Gert
Comment from BethShelby
I thought Hank was going to catch Miguel or that Annie was going to cause a wreck. Even so it looks like a lot of pieces are starting to fall in place. I don't remember much about Miguel's mom. Anxiously awaiting more.
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2021
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I thought Hank was going to catch Miguel or that Annie was going to cause a wreck. Even so it looks like a lot of pieces are starting to fall in place. I don't remember much about Miguel's mom. Anxiously awaiting more.
Comment Written 12-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2021
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Sofia (Miguel's mom) is the woman who lied under oath about Cassidy and that's why Cassidy went to jail. She is an illegal, working with false documents for Mason. He keeps her quite happy.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from lyenochka
Well, at least the sheriff knows now. Since the fire investigator didn't say much, I wonder if he needed to be in the conversation.
While I was impressed with Annie's brave efforts, I think that would have gotten her seriously injured. Too bad it wasn't Miguel who ended up in the muck.
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2021
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Well, at least the sheriff knows now. Since the fire investigator didn't say much, I wonder if he needed to be in the conversation.
While I was impressed with Annie's brave efforts, I think that would have gotten her seriously injured. Too bad it wasn't Miguel who ended up in the muck.
Comment Written 12-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2021
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I had to have the fire investigator there or no one could go into the building. He's the first one! And I can guarantee someone would have told me about it.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Carol Clark2
Great chapter. Now I finally understand why Faith and Annie were living at the ranch. You keep good track of all your characters' relationships & situations, and reveal everything at just the right time. Blessings. Carol
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2021
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Great chapter. Now I finally understand why Faith and Annie were living at the ranch. You keep good track of all your characters' relationships & situations, and reveal everything at just the right time. Blessings. Carol
Comment Written 12-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2021
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thanks, Carol. so many reprimand me for not laying it all out for them upfront, but to me it's like Hansel and Gretal...bread crumbs to keep you wondering land interested in the story.
Smiles, Carol
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If you laid everything out at the beginning, there wouldn't be much of a story to read. I prefer the crumbs. LOL!
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thank you for the smile!!!
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😀😁😂! Have a blessed week.
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Same to you, my friend!
Comment from royowen
What a pity that the bikers happened along, Miguel's number may have been up, and Annie finally might have been rescued, but how Hank's beloved vehicle is trapped and bogged, meanwhile back at the church, they have figured out Miguel is involved, but at this stage, the evidence on Mason Caldwell is only circumstantial. Beautifully written Carol, as always, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2021
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What a pity that the bikers happened along, Miguel's number may have been up, and Annie finally might have been rescued, but how Hank's beloved vehicle is trapped and bogged, meanwhile back at the church, they have figured out Miguel is involved, but at this stage, the evidence on Mason Caldwell is only circumstantial. Beautifully written Carol, as always, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 12-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2021
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Thanks, Roy...I think everything is starting to fall into place and like a puzzle the pieces are coming together. Appreciate the review and as always your kindness.
Smiles, Carol
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You?re a great writer Carol.
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Thank you
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Always my pleasure
Comment from Judy Lawless
You're still keeping us in suspense, Carol, but at least Garth has figured out what's going on. Now he just needs the proof. Well done.
One suggestion: "Hank pushed against the car door and opened (the door) it."
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2021
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You're still keeping us in suspense, Carol, but at least Garth has figured out what's going on. Now he just needs the proof. Well done.
One suggestion: "Hank pushed against the car door and opened (the door) it."
Comment Written 12-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2021
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Thanks Judy for continuing to read and comment on the story. I appreciate your help and the review.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This Chapter 51 of the Mystery and Crime Fiction speaks man's instinct to discover and learn the truth, world goes on as living, mystery has to come out, endeavour goes on, only concerned activates to track truth; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2021
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This Chapter 51 of the Mystery and Crime Fiction speaks man's instinct to discover and learn the truth, world goes on as living, mystery has to come out, endeavour goes on, only concerned activates to track truth; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
Comment Written 12-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2021
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Thank you for taking the time to read and comment on this chapter of my story. I certainly appreciate your thoughts and time.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I really like this story. I am worried about Annie. I know Hank isn't at all happy. LOL
My mama would never forgive me. I can't kill the child." The front tire left the road, and Mason jerked the car back. (I thought Miguel was driving. I know another man's with him, is it Mason or somebody else. This is confusing.)
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2021
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I really like this story. I am worried about Annie. I know Hank isn't at all happy. LOL
My mama would never forgive me. I can't kill the child." The front tire left the road, and Mason jerked the car back. (I thought Miguel was driving. I know another man's with him, is it Mason or somebody else. This is confusing.)
Comment Written 12-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2021
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Thank you for catching my error. It should have been Miguel, and even when I reread it, my brain still said Miguel. But I knew if you told me it was there...it was! I found it and fixed it.
Glad you enjoyed the car chase. yes, Hank is very upset.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Ric Myworld
Another great chapter is a good way to start off my day, now it's time for Chinese seafood. Then the most strenuous part of my day will be over and I can nap on the best until I get too hot. I hope you have a wonderful day!
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reply by the author on 12-Sep-2021
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Another great chapter is a good way to start off my day, now it's time for Chinese seafood. Then the most strenuous part of my day will be over and I can nap on the best until I get too hot. I hope you have a wonderful day!
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Comment Written 12-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2021
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Now, that's a new one for me. Chinese Seafood.... Do you have to catch it before you can eat it... you said it was strenuous!?!? It is getting hot and muggy here too.
I cooked for my granddaughter's birthday yesterday...just gave my son BBQ, and my daughter is on her way to claim mostaccioli. You'd think I was running a restaurant...and I don't get paid. LOL
Enjoy your nap... I've got another chapter to write, I hope!
Smiles, Carol
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Heck, I just need to live closer to you. I know where all the foods at. LOL.
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That's right! I didn't own a catering business for 15 years for nothing. My family thinks it's still up and running. LOL