Hedgerow Tales
Viewing comments for Chapter 11 "A Christmas Story"Book 3 in the Hedgerow Series
78 total reviews
Comment from rspoet
Hello Sandra,
What a wonderful addition to the Hedgerow Gang story poems
with perfect rhymes throughout.
Who knew that mice were so important, even thousands of years ago.
From now on if I find a mouse in the house, I'll banish him to the manger.
Kids should love this new poem.
Well done.
Best wishes to all, including the Hedgerow gang.
Robert
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2021
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Hello Sandra,
What a wonderful addition to the Hedgerow Gang story poems
with perfect rhymes throughout.
Who knew that mice were so important, even thousands of years ago.
From now on if I find a mouse in the house, I'll banish him to the manger.
Kids should love this new poem.
Well done.
Best wishes to all, including the Hedgerow gang.
Robert
Comment Written 16-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2021
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Hello Robert,
I'm so pleased you enjoyed my Christmas story-poem, and even more delighted to know you will look after a mouse if he enters your home. You don't know, he might be looking for something very important! Lol. Thank you for the sixth star award,friend, I really appreciate both the lovely comments and the stars. Warm hugs, my dear friend. :)) Sandra xx
Comment from Cindy Warren
What a wonderful take on the Christmas story! I love how all the animals pitched in to help, even the little mice. Best of luck in the contest. I think you probably have the winner here.
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2021
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What a wonderful take on the Christmas story! I love how all the animals pitched in to help, even the little mice. Best of luck in the contest. I think you probably have the winner here.
Comment Written 16-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2021
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Thank you, Cindy. I'm so pleased you enjoyed my Christmas story. I don't think anyone knew what was happening in the stable before Mary and Joseph arrived!! Lol. Thank you for the best wishes, my friend. Warm hugs. Sandra x
Comment from amahra
AH, that was so sweet. What a fantastic way of introducing the real meaning of Christmas to little kids. I truly enjoyed reading this. Your poem ushers in Christmas in a most beautiful way.
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2021
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AH, that was so sweet. What a fantastic way of introducing the real meaning of Christmas to little kids. I truly enjoyed reading this. Your poem ushers in Christmas in a most beautiful way.
Comment Written 16-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2021
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Aw, thank you so much, Amahra, for your wonderful comments about my Christmas story. I'm so pleased you enjoyed it. And a big hug for the shiny sixth star! Love and hugs, Sandra xx
Comment from LJbutterfly
I absolutely love love love this story. You have been truly blessed with abundant creativity. I especially liked that the little mice listening to the story of Christmas, got to hear that mice played a part. This is a delight to read. Congratulations on being the number one All Time Best for this month.
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2021
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I absolutely love love love this story. You have been truly blessed with abundant creativity. I especially liked that the little mice listening to the story of Christmas, got to hear that mice played a part. This is a delight to read. Congratulations on being the number one All Time Best for this month.
Comment Written 16-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2021
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Aw, thank you so very much for your lovely review, I'm delighted you enjoyed my poem. And a big thank you for the sixth star award, that is so nice of you! Warm hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xxx
Comment from BethShelby
You are a gifted writer. You can right the most amazing novels for adults and for children stories in pome that are designed to entertain as well as teach. I loved this poem.
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2021
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You are a gifted writer. You can right the most amazing novels for adults and for children stories in pome that are designed to entertain as well as teach. I loved this poem.
Comment Written 15-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2021
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What a lovely compliment, Beth, thank you so much! I'm a dark shade of red now!! I'm so pleased you enjoyed this poem, I might be bringing back my Hedgerow friends. Warm hugs, dear friend. :)) Sandra xx
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
' A Christmas Story ', is an exceptionally well-written and heart warming piece. This talented writer's work was a privilege to both read and review. This is definitely a six! Good luck with the contest. My fingers are welded together !!
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2021
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' A Christmas Story ', is an exceptionally well-written and heart warming piece. This talented writer's work was a privilege to both read and review. This is definitely a six! Good luck with the contest. My fingers are welded together !!
Comment Written 15-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2021
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Thank you so much, Duchess! What a lovely review, I'm delighted you enjoyed reading my Christmas story. And I'm sending a big hug for that golden sixth star, that is so kind of you. Warm hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xx
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Sandra your Christmas story was actually a seven, but Tom's never given me one :)))
Warm hugs to you,
the Duchess xx
Comment from Aspiring2Write
This is a wonderful poem Sandra. I love the fictional interaction the animals had with Jesus's birth. So glad you got to the top. Wish you the best in your writing.
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2021
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This is a wonderful poem Sandra. I love the fictional interaction the animals had with Jesus's birth. So glad you got to the top. Wish you the best in your writing.
Comment Written 15-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2021
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Thanks so much, my friend, for your lovely comments. I'm so pleased you enjoyed reading my Christmas story-poem. It was a bit different, wasn't it? LOL. Warm hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xxx
Comment from palmart
Great Poem! Full of details and descriptions that enrich readers in their vision of reality and poetry as well. Your choice in artwork is definitively a great choice. Awards are really deserved. And-for sure- more to come. Thanks for sharing your candid view of Christmas!
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2021
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Great Poem! Full of details and descriptions that enrich readers in their vision of reality and poetry as well. Your choice in artwork is definitively a great choice. Awards are really deserved. And-for sure- more to come. Thanks for sharing your candid view of Christmas!
Comment Written 15-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2021
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I'm so pleased you enjoyed reading my Christmas poem! Thanks so much for the lovely comments and the golden sixth star award, that was so nice of you! Warm hugs, my friend, :)) Sandra xx
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I am so happy to read your comments, Dear Sandra! I am sorry to be so late in this reply but I was a bit away from FS (well, in what connections refer but I am always in contact with poetry and the FS community!!). Health was not that nice this late times (I was suspected of Covid, but I was negative).
Nice to share the "six stars" with you and your inspirations! I really appreciated it.
Have a wonderful week!!
God Bless you!!
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Thank you so much for your words, Dear Sandra! You really touched my heart! Keep up surprising us all!!
Comment from alexisleech
Yet another captivating poem, Sandra, and one that tells the story of Christmas so well - for adults and children alike! You manage to take the reader to the place, so it's as though they are watching the whole scene in their head.
Bravo!
Alexis xxx
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2021
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Yet another captivating poem, Sandra, and one that tells the story of Christmas so well - for adults and children alike! You manage to take the reader to the place, so it's as though they are watching the whole scene in their head.
Bravo!
Alexis xxx
Comment Written 15-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2021
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Thank you so much, Alexis! What a lovely review. I'm so pleased you enjoyed my poem, and a humongous hug for the golden star!!! That was really nice of you. Love and hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xx
Comment from Frank Ball
Expertly done, this charming poem warms a reader's heart. Nothing I see could make it better. We are all charmed by your creative talent. Please be aware that your work is appreciated.
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2021
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Expertly done, this charming poem warms a reader's heart. Nothing I see could make it better. We are all charmed by your creative talent. Please be aware that your work is appreciated.
Comment Written 15-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2021
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What a really lovely thing to say, Frank! You've made my day. I'm delighted you enjoyed my Christmas poem, I do enjoy writing for children. Warm hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xx