Apocalyptic Acrostic
Beware of the Signs of The End Times - Have We Arrived?13 total reviews
Comment from Sally Law
I apologize for no six. As a student of the Bible and eschatology, this is spot on down the line. We are nearing the end and the world leaders are arranging the chairs on the Titanic. The Lord is returning! This is not just global warming and a climate crisis. Everything you wrote, is predicted in the Bible. Oh, if folks would just read it.
Sending you my best today as always, and best wishes for the upcoming contest,
Sal :))
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2022
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I apologize for no six. As a student of the Bible and eschatology, this is spot on down the line. We are nearing the end and the world leaders are arranging the chairs on the Titanic. The Lord is returning! This is not just global warming and a climate crisis. Everything you wrote, is predicted in the Bible. Oh, if folks would just read it.
Sending you my best today as always, and best wishes for the upcoming contest,
Sal :))
Comment Written 30-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2022
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Thank you, Sally Law. I appreciate your insight and thoughtful commentary. Thanks for sharing your views and taking the time to read and review my work.
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You are most welcome. Blessings in the contest,
Sal :))
Comment from Leann DS
You wrote this acrostic poem with a unique alliteration technique. I think it worked well because it's stressed the critical words in each line to match up with the idea of the biblical apocalypse.
People all throughout history have been sure that the end times are happening in there time. I keep trying to remember that "near "in our timeline is not "near "for God. I also try to live my life as if I could be gone in the next second. I've heard so many people suspect that this time is the beginning of the end. I'm not saying that I disagree, but only God knows.
Thank you for sharing this thought provoking poem. Hugs and blessings to you.
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reply by the author on 30-Mar-2022
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You wrote this acrostic poem with a unique alliteration technique. I think it worked well because it's stressed the critical words in each line to match up with the idea of the biblical apocalypse.
People all throughout history have been sure that the end times are happening in there time. I keep trying to remember that "near "in our timeline is not "near "for God. I also try to live my life as if I could be gone in the next second. I've heard so many people suspect that this time is the beginning of the end. I'm not saying that I disagree, but only God knows.
Thank you for sharing this thought provoking poem. Hugs and blessings to you.
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Comment Written 30-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2022
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Thank you so much, Leann. I felt driven to invest more time into this particular piece. The concept is always a timely topic due to the drama that we watch unfold on the world scene every day. Thanks for pointing out the alliteration technique because I really wanted to combine the impact of the sound, the words and ideas to form within each line. Thanks for your insightful review and encouragement.
Comment from oliver818
This is a very nice acrostic poem and a great entry for this competition. I know from experience that these are not so easy to write so well done especially given that every line has the same letter! That's really impressive. Thanks for sharing this and best of luck with the competition
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This is a very nice acrostic poem and a great entry for this competition. I know from experience that these are not so easy to write so well done especially given that every line has the same letter! That's really impressive. Thanks for sharing this and best of luck with the competition
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Comment Written 30-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2022
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Wow! Thank you, Oliver. I did spend some time crafting this acrostic. You are correct in that they are challenging to create, especially if you want the words to be in alignment with the message. I appreciate your thoughtful comments.