Heart Crafted Poems - 2022
Viewing comments for Chapter 56 "Ones' Concept of dreams"Musings of an old man - 2022
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Comment from Tom Horonzy
If what you say in your ending is true then why, if they could be warnings, are so many of them forgotten? Spirited back from whence they came without due notice?
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2022
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If what you say in your ending is true then why, if they could be warnings, are so many of them forgotten? Spirited back from whence they came without due notice?
Comment Written 11-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2022
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It is my opinion that often we are not open to asking to remember the content of our dreams. I keep a journal near my bed, and whenever I have something that I remember upon awakening, even if just a snippet, I record and look for synchronistic signs the next days.
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me too
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
' One's concept of dreams ', is an exceptionally well-written and spiritually-uplifting piece. This talented poet's work was a privilege to both read and review. Good luck with the contest. Please let me know how you got on?
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2022
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' One's concept of dreams ', is an exceptionally well-written and spiritually-uplifting piece. This talented poet's work was a privilege to both read and review. Good luck with the contest. Please let me know how you got on?
Comment Written 10-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2022
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Hi Duchess! Thank you so very much, Happy Easter, life is good and I am doing well and I do hope that you are also. 🙏🙏
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Hi my never met friend. You're very welcome. Yes I'm going well and I hope it the same with you
the Duchess 😊😊😊:)))
Comment from Raul1
Dreams are weird but there are people in it who help us and give us advice. So sometimes dreams can be helpful for real life. Excellent work! Thank you for sharing! Good luck!
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2022
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Dreams are weird but there are people in it who help us and give us advice. So sometimes dreams can be helpful for real life. Excellent work! Thank you for sharing! Good luck!
Comment Written 10-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2022
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Raul thank you kind sir!
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You did a good job with your contest entry, Mystery Author.
Your words are well thought out with good examples, and
they create great imagery. Your vision of what dreams are
is interesting. I like the smooth flow, the good rhymes,
and the message of how dreams can help the dreamers.
Best wishes in the contest.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2022
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You did a good job with your contest entry, Mystery Author.
Your words are well thought out with good examples, and
they create great imagery. Your vision of what dreams are
is interesting. I like the smooth flow, the good rhymes,
and the message of how dreams can help the dreamers.
Best wishes in the contest.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 10-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2022
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Dear Jan, thank you very much for this strong validation.
Comment from paige_a
Wow, this is very well done. Your rhyming scheme flows, and the words you chose suit the topic and narrative perfectly. Big bunch of kudos to you for this wonderful poem.
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2022
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Wow, this is very well done. Your rhyming scheme flows, and the words you chose suit the topic and narrative perfectly. Big bunch of kudos to you for this wonderful poem.
Comment Written 10-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2022
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Paige, I am very grateful for your review and comments.
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is a nicely written poem. It has a great flow and rhyme scheme.
Nice photo to compliment your words as well. Very well done. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2022
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This is a nicely written poem. It has a great flow and rhyme scheme.
Nice photo to compliment your words as well. Very well done. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 10-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2022
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Joanne thank you! 🙏🙏
Comment from Susan L. Winters
Wow, I love this.
I enjoy the cadence of it and I love the content. I have never been much of a lover of poems as they often lose my interest; however, this one captured it. (How many times can I use the word "love" :-)
"Souls searching not for illusions buried deep"; What a refreshing way to look at sleep. We are so inundated with illusions in our waking life, to think that through sleep we shed the mask and search for truth. Love that!
"While slumbering bodies and minds don't speak".....wow. What a visual and one I had not articulated before. So, "thank you" for that.
"It matter much to import these vision"...Yes! and again, "Thank you" for them.
You have a beautiful gift and I believe have just changed my mind and interest in poetry.
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2022
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Wow, I love this.
I enjoy the cadence of it and I love the content. I have never been much of a lover of poems as they often lose my interest; however, this one captured it. (How many times can I use the word "love" :-)
"Souls searching not for illusions buried deep"; What a refreshing way to look at sleep. We are so inundated with illusions in our waking life, to think that through sleep we shed the mask and search for truth. Love that!
"While slumbering bodies and minds don't speak".....wow. What a visual and one I had not articulated before. So, "thank you" for that.
"It matter much to import these vision"...Yes! and again, "Thank you" for them.
You have a beautiful gift and I believe have just changed my mind and interest in poetry.
Comment Written 10-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2022
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Wow, back to you! If I can ignite a spark for you to discover poetry buried deep within your heart, what a gift that is for me. 🙏🙏
Comment from Pam (respa)
-It is a great piece of artwork.
-You wrote a good poem with very good examples and rhyme.
-You do a good job describing the various stages of the process.
-I like the opening two lines that establish the premise,
and the line about "souls searching."
-A good questions opens the second verse.
-A good entry; good luck.
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2022
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-It is a great piece of artwork.
-You wrote a good poem with very good examples and rhyme.
-You do a good job describing the various stages of the process.
-I like the opening two lines that establish the premise,
and the line about "souls searching."
-A good questions opens the second verse.
-A good entry; good luck.
Comment Written 10-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2022
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Thank you Pam!
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You are welcome.
Comment from K.L. Rockquemore
I enjoyed reading this creatively written poem. You did a nice job with the prompt and this is a good contest entry. The overall presentation works well and compliments your writing.
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2022
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I enjoyed reading this creatively written poem. You did a nice job with the prompt and this is a good contest entry. The overall presentation works well and compliments your writing.
Comment Written 10-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2022
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Happy Palm Sunday morn K.L., thank you!
Comment from nomi338
In the end the decisions you make will impact the outcome of your every day life. the decision to get out of bed, get dressed and go to work, impacts whether you remain gainfully employed, or not. The decision to eat breakfast, impacts whether you go to work hungry, or not. Every decision is important and necessary for the advancement of life.
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reply by the author on 10-Apr-2022
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In the end the decisions you make will impact the outcome of your every day life. the decision to get out of bed, get dressed and go to work, impacts whether you remain gainfully employed, or not. The decision to eat breakfast, impacts whether you go to work hungry, or not. Every decision is important and necessary for the advancement of life.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 10-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2022
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Happy Easter Season, kind sir!