I Am Not Sure (an acrostic)
Contest entry17 total reviews
Comment from royowen
I think you made a darn good fist of this, but it's true that acrostics were a little more challenging once, I even rhymed them, now I don't write any atall, and I like your multi themed acrostic, it was educational, beautifully written, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2022
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I think you made a darn good fist of this, but it's true that acrostics were a little more challenging once, I even rhymed them, now I don't write any atall, and I like your multi themed acrostic, it was educational, beautifully written, blessings Roy
Comment Written 11-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2022
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Thank you for the great review, Roy. Yeah, I use to actually write acrostic sonnets. It's been a long time though. I appreciate the generous stars, friend. I'm glad you liked this silly piece. Have a great rest of your weekend.
Ron
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Most welcome
Comment from Olivanne Marsh
Amen. :) You did it and it's funny. A great reminder that everything doesn't have to be so self importantly serious, especially when it comes to poetry or acrostic. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2022
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Amen. :) You did it and it's funny. A great reminder that everything doesn't have to be so self importantly serious, especially when it comes to poetry or acrostic. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 11-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2022
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Yes, some folks just take life way too seriously. Thank you for the great review and stars, Olivanne. I'm glad you liked this silly piece.
Ron
Comment from jessizero
I must admit I laughed aloud while reading your acrostic poem. I can't write them, even as a joke. I admire this one. It was funny. Thanks for sharing!
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2022
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I must admit I laughed aloud while reading your acrostic poem. I can't write them, even as a joke. I admire this one. It was funny. Thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 11-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2022
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Thank you for the great review, Jessi. I'm glad you had a chuckle at this silliness. That's all I was really going for. I hope you have a great rest of your weekend.
=]
Ron
Comment from Lloyd T. Okoko
The objective correlative of your work reminisces a protagonist, who "is not sure about training another acrostic."
The work highlights his resolution on the matter etched out in the form of an acrostic poem.
The work earns its texture through its strict compliance with the acrostic poetic format specified for the contest.
Excellent work. Bravo.
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2022
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The objective correlative of your work reminisces a protagonist, who "is not sure about training another acrostic."
The work highlights his resolution on the matter etched out in the form of an acrostic poem.
The work earns its texture through its strict compliance with the acrostic poetic format specified for the contest.
Excellent work. Bravo.
Comment Written 11-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2022
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Thank you for the awesome review, Lloyd. I really appreciate the generous stars, friend. I'm glad you liked this ridiculous piece.
Ron
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Remain Blessed.
Comment from LyndaS
AMEN!!! Hahahaha!!! This was retarded and glorious, dude. I love how you fly in from left field with no idea at all how you're going to do this and deliver a ridiculous masterpiece. Above that, you can't deny the poet in you and throw some of that in as well. Your basic acrostic is very clever and it applies to the whole piece. This will be hard to beat. I'm sure it took a lot of time to do this and IT IS GREAT!!! Very well done and go have another shot. I'm a few in myself. Awesome!! Lynda
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2022
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AMEN!!! Hahahaha!!! This was retarded and glorious, dude. I love how you fly in from left field with no idea at all how you're going to do this and deliver a ridiculous masterpiece. Above that, you can't deny the poet in you and throw some of that in as well. Your basic acrostic is very clever and it applies to the whole piece. This will be hard to beat. I'm sure it took a lot of time to do this and IT IS GREAT!!! Very well done and go have another shot. I'm a few in myself. Awesome!! Lynda
Comment Written 11-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2022
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Hahaha. I'm sure I will. My weekend is finally here. I came up with this dumb title and that was about it. I really had nowhere to go from that. Haha. I had to throw a little bit of craftsmanship in there so the whole thing wasn't just me crying about no subject. Lol. Yes, it took a good bit of time to pull off but I had fun. Thank you so much for the awesome review and giant sixer, Lynda. I hope you have a fantastic rest of your weekend and thank you again.
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Ron
Comment from Jesse James Doty
This is hilarious! You had so much fun with this acrostic that my enjoyment never wavered even though it got ridiculous and silly. I laughed out loud and had a thoroughly good time. Good luck with this contest, you certainly deserve to win!
Jesse
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reply by the author on 11-Jun-2022
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This is hilarious! You had so much fun with this acrostic that my enjoyment never wavered even though it got ridiculous and silly. I laughed out loud and had a thoroughly good time. Good luck with this contest, you certainly deserve to win!
Jesse
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Comment Written 11-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2022
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Thank you for the fantastic review, Jesse. That's all I was really going for, a couple people getting a chuckle out of this silliness. I really appreciate the generous stars and good luck wishes, friend. I'm glad you liked this ridiculous piece. Have a great rest of your weekend.
Ron
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Hello Ron.
Yes, I loved your post.
Enjoy your weekend, too!
Jesse
Comment from Pantygynt
Oh, the magic of a double vodka! It could even make a poet out of Putin. I thought it was great fun and I usually have a great dislike of acrostic poetry.
In the interests of gently flowing euphony I would suggest that the more correct accusative form, 'whom' should be used here:
'If only she might love (who) [whom] he became.'
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reply by the author on 11-Jun-2022
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Oh, the magic of a double vodka! It could even make a poet out of Putin. I thought it was great fun and I usually have a great dislike of acrostic poetry.
In the interests of gently flowing euphony I would suggest that the more correct accusative form, 'whom' should be used here:
'If only she might love (who) [whom] he became.'
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Comment Written 11-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2022
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Ahh, great advice, my friend. I'll go change that right now. I can never seem to get that right between the two. Thank you for the great review and for getting me on the right track, Pantygynt. I'm glad you liked this ridiculous piece. Have yourself a great day.
Ron
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It was refreshingly different,
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I'm glad you liked my take on the contest. Yeah, you don't come across too many like this one. Haha