Together Yes!
A boy and a young man team up.14 total reviews
Comment from John Ciarmello
This is an excellent entry for the contest--a short but heartwarming teaching piece about a man and his young friend. I wish you much success with the contest. Best, JohnC
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2022
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This is an excellent entry for the contest--a short but heartwarming teaching piece about a man and his young friend. I wish you much success with the contest. Best, JohnC
Comment Written 09-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2022
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I am so pleased you enjoyed my story, John. Many thanks for your kind praise.
Comment from Theodore McDowell
Great 100-word flash that shows the power of a role model on another person going through similar struggles. Good use of dialogue to push the short piece forward. A friendship was forged. Well done.
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2022
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Great 100-word flash that shows the power of a role model on another person going through similar struggles. Good use of dialogue to push the short piece forward. A friendship was forged. Well done.
Comment Written 09-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2022
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I am delighted by your praise of my story, Theodore. So pleased you liked the dialog.
Comment from jessizero
This was a sweet piece of 100-word flash fiction. It was very moving, and you expressed everything so well in a few words. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
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reply by the author on 10-Jul-2022
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This was a sweet piece of 100-word flash fiction. It was very moving, and you expressed everything so well in a few words. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
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Comment Written 09-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2022
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I am delighted you found my story moving, jessizero. Manny thanks for your kind praise.
Comment from Rachelle Allen
It's not easy to write a story with not just one, but two, sad tales yet bring it to a believably happy ending in just 100 words. This was sweet (but not syrupy) and honest, hopeful, caring and made me feel good. Glad I got to read this today. Nice work.
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reply by the author on 10-Jul-2022
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It's not easy to write a story with not just one, but two, sad tales yet bring it to a believably happy ending in just 100 words. This was sweet (but not syrupy) and honest, hopeful, caring and made me feel good. Glad I got to read this today. Nice work.
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Comment Written 09-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2022
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Thank you so much, Rachelle, for your high praise of my story. I am delighted it made you feel good.