Seething dust
A poem49 total reviews
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
What a marvelous poem. It is so gently written that it made me think of a peaceful flight within the sky's limits. The eagle is soaring above the clouds trying to find the clear blue sky.
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2022
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What a marvelous poem. It is so gently written that it made me think of a peaceful flight within the sky's limits. The eagle is soaring above the clouds trying to find the clear blue sky.
Comment Written 19-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2022
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Thanks so much Rosemary, for these wonderful comments and a super review , blessings Roy
Comment from Wendy G
This is a fine piece of poetry, and I enjoyed the vivid and powerful thoughts you expressed very well in fine rhyme and metre. Beautiful in its smoothness, with a stunning image to prompt your words.
Wendy
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2022
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This is a fine piece of poetry, and I enjoyed the vivid and powerful thoughts you expressed very well in fine rhyme and metre. Beautiful in its smoothness, with a stunning image to prompt your words.
Wendy
Comment Written 19-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2022
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Thanks Wendy, for these terrific comments and review , blessings Roy
Comment from nomi338
Beautiful words my brother. You really do write masterfully, I could feel the faith borne words that seemed to soar like a majestic bird, I was deeply moved. I have become aware of a growth in your writing since I have been reading your work. It is my belief that you are at the stage of master right here, right now. Congratulations.
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2022
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Beautiful words my brother. You really do write masterfully, I could feel the faith borne words that seemed to soar like a majestic bird, I was deeply moved. I have become aware of a growth in your writing since I have been reading your work. It is my belief that you are at the stage of master right here, right now. Congratulations.
Comment Written 18-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2022
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Thanks Nomi, for these wonderful comments and a super review , blessings Roy
Comment from poetwatch
Onward walks the man searching for what was lost, Roy. We are all weak, but we will not break, for God is with us. I marched through your poem like a soldier of the Almighty. Thank you for sharing this with me. it gives me strength.
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2022
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Onward walks the man searching for what was lost, Roy. We are all weak, but we will not break, for God is with us. I marched through your poem like a soldier of the Almighty. Thank you for sharing this with me. it gives me strength.
Comment Written 18-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2022
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Thanks so much, for these wonderful comments and a super review , blessings Roy
Comment from bob cullen
Only a fool would dare suggest this is your best ever Mr. Owen's, but this really grabbed me. The message, like most of your works offers praise to the Lord, but the flow of this one really rattled bells in my mind. It was so rhythmical. And if it's not the best, it must certainly rate very close to the top. Really, in my eyes it deserved ten stars.
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2022
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Only a fool would dare suggest this is your best ever Mr. Owen's, but this really grabbed me. The message, like most of your works offers praise to the Lord, but the flow of this one really rattled bells in my mind. It was so rhythmical. And if it's not the best, it must certainly rate very close to the top. Really, in my eyes it deserved ten stars.
Comment Written 18-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2022
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Thanks so much Bob, for these wonderful comments and a super review , blessings Roy
Comment from Dawn Munro
Oh, Roy! I have a new favorite among the poems you've scribed, and this jewel is it! But I confess -- I am disappointed. You have yet to publish a book of your poetry! You must!!!!
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2022
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Oh, Roy! I have a new favorite among the poems you've scribed, and this jewel is it! But I confess -- I am disappointed. You have yet to publish a book of your poetry! You must!!!!
Comment Written 18-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2022
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Thanks Dawn, you are very kind my friend, and very generous, thank you, thank you, blessings
Roy
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Not at all -- much deserved. :))
Comment from Laurie Holding
I think God is truly with you as you write, Roy. This is remarkable, as you so often are. Prolific, profound, and professionally presented, I am in awe of your work. Thanks for posting this.
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2022
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I think God is truly with you as you write, Roy. This is remarkable, as you so often are. Prolific, profound, and professionally presented, I am in awe of your work. Thanks for posting this.
Comment Written 18-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2022
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Thanks so much Laurie, for these fine comments and a super review, blessings Roy
Comment from John Ciarmello
beautiful, Roy. Your work always lingers in my thoughts well after I read it. I look forward to that as much as reading and reveling in your poems. Super enjoyable! Best, JohnC
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2022
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beautiful, Roy. Your work always lingers in my thoughts well after I read it. I look forward to that as much as reading and reveling in your poems. Super enjoyable! Best, JohnC
Comment Written 18-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2022
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Thanks so much John, for these fine comments and a super review, blessings Roy
Comment from susand3022
Hi Roy, I'm finding it hard right now not to cry, as I'm sitting here with my father close by, and you're making me think of my last night with my mother. She passed when she was almost 92, hadn't heard well without hearing aids in years, and hadn't seen anything more than shapes and shadows for 6-8 months. On that Saturday night, (she passed on Monday morning) she woke up a bit after midnight, and she could see clearly, she could hear just fine. No help needed. It was a true gift to have that kind of time with her, for those last hours that night. Then her family and friends all arrived... no, not the ones that were alive, all those who had gone before. Her parents, brother, sisters, friends, some names I had heard, others I had no idea who they were, but she did, and was so happy to see them all! If ever anyone needed affirmation of an afterlife, I got one that night. Have a special day, Susan :)
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2022
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Hi Roy, I'm finding it hard right now not to cry, as I'm sitting here with my father close by, and you're making me think of my last night with my mother. She passed when she was almost 92, hadn't heard well without hearing aids in years, and hadn't seen anything more than shapes and shadows for 6-8 months. On that Saturday night, (she passed on Monday morning) she woke up a bit after midnight, and she could see clearly, she could hear just fine. No help needed. It was a true gift to have that kind of time with her, for those last hours that night. Then her family and friends all arrived... no, not the ones that were alive, all those who had gone before. Her parents, brother, sisters, friends, some names I had heard, others I had no idea who they were, but she did, and was so happy to see them all! If ever anyone needed affirmation of an afterlife, I got one that night. Have a special day, Susan :)
Comment Written 18-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2022
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Thank you for sharing Susan, a gift from God to you, giving you hope of beauty to come, thanks for these wonderful comments and special stars, stars, blessings Roy
Comment from Janice Canerdy
When I dwell on the negative, feeling weak and anxious, I begin to pray for the peace an guidance only HE can give my.
Your poem is excellent in every respect--message, rhyme and meter (great,) and wording.
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2022
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When I dwell on the negative, feeling weak and anxious, I begin to pray for the peace an guidance only HE can give my.
Your poem is excellent in every respect--message, rhyme and meter (great,) and wording.
Comment Written 18-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2022
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Thanks so much Janice, for these fine comments and a super review, blessings Roy