Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

I love seeing the moon in the morning and it often makes an appearance and brings a sense of peace to our world, I enjoyed your 5-7-5 Steve, simply magical, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 18-Dec-2022

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reply by the author on 19-Dec-2022

Thanks, Dolly, it's a lovely time of the day. Did you know there's aspecial word for a poem about the dawn, Aubade, from the French for dawn. One of my favourite ones is by Phillip Larkin and has Aubade as its title.

Steve

Comment from jessizero

Excellent

I keep counting that second line as eight syllables, but I could be wrong. Your poem does read as peaceful. Thank you so much for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 18-Dec-2022

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reply by the author on 18-Dec-2022

Thank you. You are the fifth reviewer but the first to spot the error! Fixed now.

Steve

Comment from Mario PIERRE

Excellent

This poem is very well thought out. It contains all thr elements of a serene night fading and cycling now to a beautiful, calm morning where all is good.
Great poem.
Mario

 Comment Written 18-Dec-2022

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reply by the author on 18-Dec-2022

Thanks for the kind words.

Steve

Comment from Ricky1024

Excellent

This is a 5-7-5 Contest entry speaks highly Peace and Peace on Earth with a blue sky.
Well written rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and flowed well with No Grammar Issues.
Thanks for sharing and good luck with your contest entry.
Doctor Ricky 1024

 Comment Written 18-Dec-2022

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reply by the author on 18-Dec-2022

Thanks, Ricky - glad you enjoyed.

Steve

Comment from Karyn2

Excellent

I enjoyed the peace and stillness that this moonlit night conveys. A really lovely 5-7-5. Nature, peace, reflection pure beauty. Well done. Best wishes for contest.

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 Comment Written 18-Dec-2022

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reply by the author on 18-Dec-2022

Thanks, Karyn. We could all use a little peace and the time of year is appropriate.

Steve

Comment from prettybluebirds

Excellent

I love your choice of words in the poem. Reading it made me feel peaceful. It is beautiful and the artwork is a perfect fit for the writing. I wish you tons of luck in the contest.

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 Comment Written 18-Dec-2022

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reply by the author on 18-Dec-2022

Thank you. We could all use a little peace and the time of year is appropriate.

Steve