The Truth
An entry for the club challenge15 total reviews
Comment from Tom Horonzy
This is a match for the rules, and you made it much clearer than the organizer for me. Well done. My favorite line was: no holding arms no arms to hold
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2023
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This is a match for the rules, and you made it much clearer than the organizer for me. Well done. My favorite line was: no holding arms no arms to hold
Comment Written 23-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2023
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Thank you very much, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from country ranch writer
Some time we just can not sleep
We end up hearing our own heart best
We have the feeling we're all alone
This wasn't meant to be but still no slrrp
I'd there a cure for this out there or do you even care?
Alone I can not sleep!Monday1/23/2023.
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2023
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Some time we just can not sleep
We end up hearing our own heart best
We have the feeling we're all alone
This wasn't meant to be but still no slrrp
I'd there a cure for this out there or do you even care?
Alone I can not sleep!Monday1/23/2023.
Comment Written 23-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2023
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Thank you very much, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
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Comment from Wendy G
A very nice cascade poem! Your theme is well suited to that format, it flows well, and the lines cascading are woven in with skill. Well done.
Wendy
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reply by the author on 23-Jan-2023
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A very nice cascade poem! Your theme is well suited to that format, it flows well, and the lines cascading are woven in with skill. Well done.
Wendy
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Comment Written 23-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2023
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Thank you very much, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Karyn2
This is so clever in structure and concept! Your words paint such deep emotion and expresses well the silence and absence of a loved one gone. This is really inspired writing. I loved it!
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2023
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This is so clever in structure and concept! Your words paint such deep emotion and expresses well the silence and absence of a loved one gone. This is really inspired writing. I loved it!
Comment Written 23-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2023
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Wow! Thank you so very much, I enjoyed trying this form again and I am so happy you enjoyed it, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from JT traveller
Silence can sometimes be the loudest noise of all. Well constructed cascading poem. I appreciate your style and wording. A well written piece of poetry. Thankyou for sharing your thoughts.
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reply by the author on 23-Jan-2023
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Silence can sometimes be the loudest noise of all. Well constructed cascading poem. I appreciate your style and wording. A well written piece of poetry. Thankyou for sharing your thoughts.
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Comment Written 23-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2023
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Thank you for your very encouraging comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
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Always my pleasure.