Moon Magic
A Roundabout Poem for Potlatch Poetry23 total reviews
Comment from Dawn Munro
Holy smokes! What a challenge, to write one of these! You've done it beautifully, mind you, and you can guess my next comment, I bet... Yes, it's going in my bookcase to enjoy again, and perhaps to sometime try the format!!!
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2023
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Holy smokes! What a challenge, to write one of these! You've done it beautifully, mind you, and you can guess my next comment, I bet... Yes, it's going in my bookcase to enjoy again, and perhaps to sometime try the format!!!
Comment Written 20-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2023
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Bless your heart! I am humbled by such a glowing review.
Comment from lyenochka
Thanks for showing how this form is done. I like the melodic quality about it and you added extra internal rhymes (lutes, flutes, suits, boots) and fun alliteration (forest fief) to bring those magical woodland sprites to life!
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2023
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Thanks for showing how this form is done. I like the melodic quality about it and you added extra internal rhymes (lutes, flutes, suits, boots) and fun alliteration (forest fief) to bring those magical woodland sprites to life!
Comment Written 20-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2023
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Thank you. It's a fun form, I think.
Comment from bob cullen
What a delightful write. There are so many varieties to this poetry I'm attempting to master. I've not seen this one before. And you have presented it so well. The words flow with great melody.
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2023
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What a delightful write. There are so many varieties to this poetry I'm attempting to master. I've not seen this one before. And you have presented it so well. The words flow with great melody.
Comment Written 19-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2023
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Thank you. I look forward to reading yours.
Comment from aryr
This was a wonderful Roundabout, damommy. The picture was phenomenal. There is indeed magic when the moon is full. Very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessings n Hugs!!!
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2023
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This was a wonderful Roundabout, damommy. The picture was phenomenal. There is indeed magic when the moon is full. Very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessings n Hugs!!!
Comment Written 19-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2023
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Thank you. Blessing and hugs coming your way, too.
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You are so welcome, Yvonne.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your club poem was outstanding, Yvonne. I loved everything about
it. The picture was perfect to pair with your words. Those words
painted a picture with every line for readers. I could see this as I
read. Great job with the complex style required. I liked your well-
chosen end rhymes and the internal rhyme of lutes/flutes. The little
clan seemed very happy in their chosen forest home. I believed
the moon will shine down on them favorably every night except
new moon. What a happy place to be. I would love to walk in the
woods if there were some near me. You always give your best on
any poem or story. This is one of your best.
Thanks for participating, Jan
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2023
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Your club poem was outstanding, Yvonne. I loved everything about
it. The picture was perfect to pair with your words. Those words
painted a picture with every line for readers. I could see this as I
read. Great job with the complex style required. I liked your well-
chosen end rhymes and the internal rhyme of lutes/flutes. The little
clan seemed very happy in their chosen forest home. I believed
the moon will shine down on them favorably every night except
new moon. What a happy place to be. I would love to walk in the
woods if there were some near me. You always give your best on
any poem or story. This is one of your best.
Thanks for participating, Jan
Comment Written 19-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2023
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Thank you so much for this glowing review. Wouldn't it be wonderful if we could visit such a place?
Comment from Ben Colder
Your post sings a song of poetry. I see nothing wrong. Shakespeare eat your heart out. Arkie is sending the world her take of existence. Good one. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2023
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Your post sings a song of poetry. I see nothing wrong. Shakespeare eat your heart out. Arkie is sending the world her take of existence. Good one. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 19-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2023
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Awww, bless your heart. Thank you for a most wonderful review!
Comment from GWHARGIS
This was very soothing. My favorite place is walking through the forest. The trees are such magnificent living sculptures. This was a wonderful journey of words that instantly made me feel at ease and relaxed. Thank you for posting this. Gretchen
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2023
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This was very soothing. My favorite place is walking through the forest. The trees are such magnificent living sculptures. This was a wonderful journey of words that instantly made me feel at ease and relaxed. Thank you for posting this. Gretchen
Comment Written 19-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2023
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I love walking in the woods. No better place to be. Thanks for a great review.
Comment from LateBloomer
Hi Yvonne, your poem is beautifully penned with soft and soulful imagery.
I especially liked:
So there it was their life began
in woodlands quite remote
(There are so many places of wonder in our world, and the woods is one of them--quiet and serene. I can understand why people like to hike.)
Perfect photo choice. Well done. A pleasure to read. Keep the blue waters flowing. Xo. M
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2023
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Hi Yvonne, your poem is beautifully penned with soft and soulful imagery.
I especially liked:
So there it was their life began
in woodlands quite remote
(There are so many places of wonder in our world, and the woods is one of them--quiet and serene. I can understand why people like to hike.)
Perfect photo choice. Well done. A pleasure to read. Keep the blue waters flowing. Xo. M
Comment Written 19-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2023
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Thank you. There's nothing better than a walk in the woods!
Comment from mermaids
This is a treat to come across a fantasy poem. Love the feel and flow of your words and how the moon started it all, a forest of little people following a piper. Your use of words appeals to the sensors, music, scenery and a joyful feeling.
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2023
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This is a treat to come across a fantasy poem. Love the feel and flow of your words and how the moon started it all, a forest of little people following a piper. Your use of words appeals to the sensors, music, scenery and a joyful feeling.
Comment Written 19-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2023
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Thank you so much for this!
Comment from royowen
I like this form, it seems to have a very similar flow and meter to a Limerick. I like the theme, the rhyme scheme and the great flow, you're a skilled artisan Yvonne, I'm a sucker to good rhyming poetry, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2023
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I like this form, it seems to have a very similar flow and meter to a Limerick. I like the theme, the rhyme scheme and the great flow, you're a skilled artisan Yvonne, I'm a sucker to good rhyming poetry, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 19-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2023
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Thank you for the compliment. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
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Most welcome