Comment from dragonpoet

Excellent

Hi Debra,
This poem flows well with its unforced rhymes. It is a warning to those in power that it is lonely at the top if you don't let others help you. If you take everything on yourself, you lose the respect and possible friendship of those around you. Being a pleb can be a good thing. I agree with this.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Good luck with your thirty poems this month.
Joan

 Comment Written 12-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 12-Apr-2023

Thank you so much, Joan, for your lovely feedback and good wishes.
Kindest regards, Debra :)

reply by dragonpoet on 12-Apr-2023

You are most kindly welcome on all accounts, Debra.
Joan

Comment from Alexandra Trovato

Excellent

It's sad to witness someone like this. It makes me think mat with a friend or two the person would change. Maybe we should try to be friends with even people like that. Ok. You go first! Good writing! :))

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 Comment Written 12-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 12-Apr-2023

Hi Alex :)
Thank you so much for your kind and thoughtful feedback. You're right, maybe they could change...let's see - challenge on!
Debra :)

Comment from Heather Knight

Excellent

This is very funny. I'm with you, I'd rather be an underling. I can't stand people who think they are better than others.
Your choice of picture is great. I love the Smurfs.
Thanks for making me smile.

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 Comment Written 12-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 12-Apr-2023

Thanks so much, Maria, and you're welcome!
Glad you enjoyed the read and that it raised a smile!
Hugs, Debra xx