The Mystery of the Wind
God's mystical motion dancing through the trees.35 total reviews
Comment from Wendy G
Very Biblical thoughts expressed here and your near rhymes mean the ABC flows well. I enjoyed both your words and the presentation image. Well done. Good wishes for the contest.
Wendy
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2023
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Very Biblical thoughts expressed here and your near rhymes mean the ABC flows well. I enjoyed both your words and the presentation image. Well done. Good wishes for the contest.
Wendy
Comment Written 27-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2023
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Tnak you, Wendy. I appreciate your kind review.
John
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
Yes the wind does seem like the breathe of God. I can relate to that concept. Every lesg reminds me of vulnerable life holding on against strong winds at times, but God is there to protect us. Best wishes, :)) Alex
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2023
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Yes the wind does seem like the breathe of God. I can relate to that concept. Every lesg reminds me of vulnerable life holding on against strong winds at times, but God is there to protect us. Best wishes, :)) Alex
Comment Written 26-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2023
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You're so right. God is there in a soft summer breeze as well as the dangerous winds of a fierce storm. He's always there when we need Him. Thanks for your review and best wishes. John
Comment from jake cosmos aller
cool poem about finding God in the wind and in nature. God is everywhere is we have the power to look and the wisdom to find the divine in the everyday life.
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2023
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cool poem about finding God in the wind and in nature. God is everywhere is we have the power to look and the wisdom to find the divine in the everyday life.
Comment Written 26-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2023
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Very well put. I appreciate your insightful review. John
Comment from Pearl Edwards
This is a lovely ABC poem, John and I love your phrasing of 'God's mystical motion dancing'
a symphony in the trees
Beautifully descriptive verse about the wind in the trees.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2023
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This is a lovely ABC poem, John and I love your phrasing of 'God's mystical motion dancing'
a symphony in the trees
Beautifully descriptive verse about the wind in the trees.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 26-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2023
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Thank you, Pearl. I appreciate your kind words and good luck wish. John
Comment from Paul McFarland
This is a very good entry in the ABC Poetry Contest. There are some very nice lines in this poem. "God's breath upon the leaves) is a really nice line.
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2023
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This is a very good entry in the ABC Poetry Contest. There are some very nice lines in this poem. "God's breath upon the leaves) is a really nice line.
Comment Written 26-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2023
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Thanks, Paul. I appreciate your complimentary review. John
Comment from Teri7
John, This I a very nice and very true ABC poem you have penned about the wind. I love when the wind is blowing and I can just lift my face up and feel His gentle touch! Best wishes in the contest. Blessing, Teri
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2023
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John, This I a very nice and very true ABC poem you have penned about the wind. I love when the wind is blowing and I can just lift my face up and feel His gentle touch! Best wishes in the contest. Blessing, Teri
Comment Written 26-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2023
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Thank you, Teri. You're right, it can be a very spiritual thing. There are so many places in nature where we can find God if we're looking. I appreciate your review and blessings to you as well. John
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you are so welcome my friend!!!
Comment from Ben Colder
Yes, Jesus describes the Holy Spirit as the wind blows and not seen but only its results. However, storms obey. His voice is authority. Thank you for sharing your talent. Sending blessing your way.
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2023
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Yes, Jesus describes the Holy Spirit as the wind blows and not seen but only its results. However, storms obey. His voice is authority. Thank you for sharing your talent. Sending blessing your way.
Comment Written 26-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2023
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Thank you, Ben for your very insightful review. Blessings to you as well. John
Comment from estory
Nice little take on the words of Christ: "You not wither the wind comes, or wither it goes." There's a sense of spiritual freedom in the imagery here, of being in the wind, ruffling the leaves of the trees. Moving on in the spirit. estory
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2023
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Nice little take on the words of Christ: "You not wither the wind comes, or wither it goes." There's a sense of spiritual freedom in the imagery here, of being in the wind, ruffling the leaves of the trees. Moving on in the spirit. estory
Comment Written 26-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2023
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Very well put. Your words of spirituality are pure poetry in themselves and are a joy to read. Thank you. John
Comment from ~Dovey
Hi John,
You ABC poem follows all the rules.
The presentation is beautiful, but the yellow words on green were tough to read.
Wishing you all the best in the contest.
Kim
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2023
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Hi John,
You ABC poem follows all the rules.
The presentation is beautiful, but the yellow words on green were tough to read.
Wishing you all the best in the contest.
Kim
Comment Written 26-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2023
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Thank you. I appreciate your review and constructive comments.
Comment from Kaiku
it is funny that I read this today as I am gathering review dolars to enter the upcoming nature 5-7-5 with a work about the wind. I have several and hopefully I pick the right one. Good luck in the ABC prompt.
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2023
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it is funny that I read this today as I am gathering review dolars to enter the upcoming nature 5-7-5 with a work about the wind. I have several and hopefully I pick the right one. Good luck in the ABC prompt.
Comment Written 26-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2023
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Thank you for your review and good luck wish. Good luck to you as well. I'll be looking for your entry. John
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