Thirty (hopefully) Poems for April
Viewing comments for Chapter 24 "Just Seven More"A loose attempt at NaPoWriMo 2023
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Comment from royowen
Yes, it's hard, until I actually posted two poems a day, I never know how hard it was, but the discipline needed, when you're a full time mum like you, that is hard, easier when one retires, so well done, a mission in life is a good thing, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 02-May-2023
Yes, it's hard, until I actually posted two poems a day, I never know how hard it was, but the discipline needed, when you're a full time mum like you, that is hard, easier when one retires, so well done, a mission in life is a good thing, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 01-May-2023
reply by the author on 02-May-2023
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Thank you so much, Roy, for your kind feedback and encouragement.
Best wishes as always, Debra :)
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Most welcome
Comment from lyenochka
Really? I thought you got through it all! Thanks for continuing to hit the seven. Did the last two poems get into your book? I could have sworn I saw some posts that should have been added to the book.
You're doing great!
reply by the author on 02-May-2023
Really? I thought you got through it all! Thanks for continuing to hit the seven. Did the last two poems get into your book? I could have sworn I saw some posts that should have been added to the book.
You're doing great!
Comment Written 01-May-2023
reply by the author on 02-May-2023
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Thank you so much, Helen, for your kind feedback and encouragement. I've included every poem I wrote in April into the book, and I'm definitely short! Thanks for the suggestions though, I appreciate it ;)
Best wishes as always, Debra :) x
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice artwork and presentation, Debbie.
-Kudos to you for wanting to complete the book.
-Your notes are appreciated.
-I liked your poem with effective imagery and rhyme.
-A great concluding line!!!!
reply by the author on 02-May-2023
-Very nice artwork and presentation, Debbie.
-Kudos to you for wanting to complete the book.
-Your notes are appreciated.
-I liked your poem with effective imagery and rhyme.
-A great concluding line!!!!
Comment Written 01-May-2023
reply by the author on 02-May-2023
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Thank you so much, Pam, for your kind feedback and encouragement. Glad you enjoyed the read!
Best wishes as always, Debra :)
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You are very welcome, Debra.
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
That is such a cute post. And no wonder you couldn't finish with your family commitments. Such a trial! I need to take a deep breath between posts. Best of luck with the remaining seven. No-one's going to chastise you with that charming little verse! Best wishes to you and your lovely family! Debbie
reply by the author on 02-May-2023
That is such a cute post. And no wonder you couldn't finish with your family commitments. Such a trial! I need to take a deep breath between posts. Best of luck with the remaining seven. No-one's going to chastise you with that charming little verse! Best wishes to you and your lovely family! Debbie
Comment Written 01-May-2023
reply by the author on 02-May-2023
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Thank you so much, Debbie, for your kind feedback and encouragement. I'll get there.... I will. I will!
Best wishes, Debra :)
Comment from shelley kaye
LOL! you can do it! this poem was a great motivator with hopeful words choices and smooth rhyme and flow
very cute pic and colour presentation, too
thank you for sharing
shelley
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reply by the author on 02-May-2023
LOL! you can do it! this poem was a great motivator with hopeful words choices and smooth rhyme and flow
very cute pic and colour presentation, too
thank you for sharing
shelley
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Comment Written 01-May-2023
reply by the author on 02-May-2023
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Thank you so much, Shelley, for your kind feedback and encouragement.
Best wishes, Debra :)
Comment from Sally Law
The prize is in finishing the book. You have a beautiful book so far and this has added one more chapter. The art is lovely too. A wonderful addition as you go along. Sending you my best today as always.
Sal XOs
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reply by the author on 02-May-2023
The prize is in finishing the book. You have a beautiful book so far and this has added one more chapter. The art is lovely too. A wonderful addition as you go along. Sending you my best today as always.
Sal XOs
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Comment Written 01-May-2023
reply by the author on 02-May-2023
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Thank you so much, Sal, for your kind feedback and encouragement. I appreciate it!
Best wishes as always, Debra :) x