Guided by Faith
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Comment from Teri7
This is another great chapter my friend. Emma needs to wake up or Peggy will take Seth right under her nose! You used great descriptive words and. am so looking for to the next chapter! love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2023
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This is another great chapter my friend. Emma needs to wake up or Peggy will take Seth right under her nose! You used great descriptive words and. am so looking for to the next chapter! love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 12-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2023
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I honestly believe as zero interest in Peggy. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Sanku
Peggy is not exactly a likeable character .She calledAce a'a mangy mutt'.But her jealousy could be a problem for Emma later. The car still continues to be a mystery ...looking forward to reading the next.
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2023
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Peggy is not exactly a likeable character .She calledAce a'a mangy mutt'.But her jealousy could be a problem for Emma later. The car still continues to be a mystery ...looking forward to reading the next.
Comment Written 12-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2023
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Thank you for the kind review. Yes, Peggy is a major problem. I'm wondering if she's stalking Emma. Maybe to see how much time Seth spends with her.
Comment from Pam (respa)
A good chapter, barbara, that deals with a few different issues. I was wondering why Keith takes Emma's phone and then gives it back to her at the beginning. A nice interlude with Emma and Ace. She is starting to relax more, which is a good thing.
Interesting scene with Peggy Barton. She sounds like a piece of work and someone who butts into other people's business and thinks she's more important than she really is. I'm glad Carl put her in her place.
A very good scene between Seth and Emma. They have a good discussion about the person of interest involved with Emma's car, but no luck so far. I think Emma is realizing some of her feelings for Seth and almost gave him a hug. I think Seth would have preferred it if she had. The nightlights were a good idea for her, as well.
Well done. A nice picture of the German Shepherd, too.
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2023
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A good chapter, barbara, that deals with a few different issues. I was wondering why Keith takes Emma's phone and then gives it back to her at the beginning. A nice interlude with Emma and Ace. She is starting to relax more, which is a good thing.
Interesting scene with Peggy Barton. She sounds like a piece of work and someone who butts into other people's business and thinks she's more important than she really is. I'm glad Carl put her in her place.
A very good scene between Seth and Emma. They have a good discussion about the person of interest involved with Emma's car, but no luck so far. I think Emma is realizing some of her feelings for Seth and almost gave him a hug. I think Seth would have preferred it if she had. The nightlights were a good idea for her, as well.
Well done. A nice picture of the German Shepherd, too.
Comment Written 12-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2023
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Thank you for the kind review.
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You are welcome. Could you explain the phone reference in the beginning of my review?
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Emma was going to send a text to Seth and her dad took her phone because he wanted her to go there in person. I think there's a little match making going on. Once she agreed to go to the police station, she took the phone back. I hope this helps.
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Yes, that is a big help. Thanks.
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
Hi Barbara,
This is a good chapter for progressing your story, and giving us insight into the interactions of some of your characters. Seth seems to be building up trust with Emma, both of her and with her.
Ace likes Emma, so that's a good start.
We see Peggy trying to take Seth away from Emma, but Seth shuts that down.
Lots of gifts given around, to Ace, or promises of, to Seth from Emma, to Emma from Seth.
Some mystery building with Seth and his investigation...
Great story,
Rhonda
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2023
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Hi Barbara,
This is a good chapter for progressing your story, and giving us insight into the interactions of some of your characters. Seth seems to be building up trust with Emma, both of her and with her.
Ace likes Emma, so that's a good start.
We see Peggy trying to take Seth away from Emma, but Seth shuts that down.
Lots of gifts given around, to Ace, or promises of, to Seth from Emma, to Emma from Seth.
Some mystery building with Seth and his investigation...
Great story,
Rhonda
Comment Written 12-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2023
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from BermyBye50
Barbara,
You've penned another exceptional chapter in the book Guided by Faith. Your mastery of dialogue is an inspiration to all of us aspiring writers here on Fanstory. Your consistency brings life to the lives of the characters you have created in this well written novel. Your paint a brilliant portrait full of exquisite imagery and majesty with your words choices. I'm very impressed with your creativity in each of your writes.
All the best,
Eugene
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2023
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Barbara,
You've penned another exceptional chapter in the book Guided by Faith. Your mastery of dialogue is an inspiration to all of us aspiring writers here on Fanstory. Your consistency brings life to the lives of the characters you have created in this well written novel. Your paint a brilliant portrait full of exquisite imagery and majesty with your words choices. I'm very impressed with your creativity in each of your writes.
All the best,
Eugene
Comment Written 12-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2023
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
I'll start by saying that I don't like Peggy, and if she doesn't like Seth's animal, she's automatically disqualified from girlfriend status!
I'm one of those impatient people who want a romance to "hurry up and get on with it", but I guess you don't have a book then, lol! At least they are making eye contact and trying to find excuses to be together.
Good chapter, Barbara. I couldn't find anything I'd change.
Pam
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2023
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I'll start by saying that I don't like Peggy, and if she doesn't like Seth's animal, she's automatically disqualified from girlfriend status!
I'm one of those impatient people who want a romance to "hurry up and get on with it", but I guess you don't have a book then, lol! At least they are making eye contact and trying to find excuses to be together.
Good chapter, Barbara. I couldn't find anything I'd change.
Pam
Comment Written 12-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2023
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Thank you for the kind review. If I hurried it, I'd have a short story. LOL
Comment from Melodie Michelle
Congratulations on being RECOGNIZED and this work is really well written with characters that I adored bouncing off one another quite nicely!
Thanks for sharing and may God bless you!
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2023
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Congratulations on being RECOGNIZED and this work is really well written with characters that I adored bouncing off one another quite nicely!
Thanks for sharing and may God bless you!
Comment Written 12-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2023
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Thank you for the kind review.
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Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
This is well-written, and I saw no errors. Peggy is a creepy character as she claims to be Seth's girl and sneaks into his office. Seth and Emma's relationship seems to be growing nicely. She is certainly a breath of fresh air for someone who has to associate with less than pleasant characters.
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2023
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This is well-written, and I saw no errors. Peggy is a creepy character as she claims to be Seth's girl and sneaks into his office. Seth and Emma's relationship seems to be growing nicely. She is certainly a breath of fresh air for someone who has to associate with less than pleasant characters.
Comment Written 11-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2023
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Douglas Goff
Good chapter. They do seem like ywo people who do not know how to move forward with each other, Very good!
You might consider contracting these sentences. You taught me that's how people actually talk.
"Why are you here?"
After a sigh, Seth said, "Sorry. Enough about me. How are you doing?"
I enjoyed this.
D
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2023
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Good chapter. They do seem like ywo people who do not know how to move forward with each other, Very good!
You might consider contracting these sentences. You taught me that's how people actually talk.
"Why are you here?"
After a sigh, Seth said, "Sorry. Enough about me. How are you doing?"
I enjoyed this.
D
Comment Written 11-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2023
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Thank you for the kind review. I'll check those two areas out. I appreciate the help.
Comment from Wendy G
Peggy is a bit audacious! She won't win Seth by that conniving behaviour. I would have thought his sunburn was well past the worst by now, but it does provide an ongoing reason for them to keep meeting. Well written.
Wendy
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2023
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Peggy is a bit audacious! She won't win Seth by that conniving behaviour. I would have thought his sunburn was well past the worst by now, but it does provide an ongoing reason for them to keep meeting. Well written.
Wendy
Comment Written 11-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2023
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Thank you for the kind review.