A Not So Smooth Rendezvous
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Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Great fun! Beautifully told with humour and excellent pace, hooking the reader from the start with your complementary visuals. Just "night(i) ngale will perfect this little romp. A strong contender! Good luck, Debbie
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Great fun! Beautifully told with humour and excellent pace, hooking the reader from the start with your complementary visuals. Just "night(i) ngale will perfect this little romp. A strong contender! Good luck, Debbie
Comment Written 31-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2023
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Thanks for catching my faux pas.
May the Smile be with you throughout your day.
Thanks for commenting.
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
Tom, I clicked on your story for the photography - it caught my eye as your pictures always do, and I wanted to see if they were your photographs - you confirmed that.
Then I get this fantastic story, full of humor and alliteration. What an imaginative thing you have given us, and then allowed us to write the ending. Of course, they lived happily ever after, did they not.
I absolutely love this, Tom:-)
xo
Pam
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Tom, I clicked on your story for the photography - it caught my eye as your pictures always do, and I wanted to see if they were your photographs - you confirmed that.
Then I get this fantastic story, full of humor and alliteration. What an imaginative thing you have given us, and then allowed us to write the ending. Of course, they lived happily ever after, did they not.
I absolutely love this, Tom:-)
xo
Pam
Comment Written 31-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2023
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As for your surmise, I shall not judge what anyone selects for the ending, though you're likely on track. May the SMILE be with you through your day.
Comment from GWHARGIS
I think I like the slapstick tale better than a suave and smooth one. The antics of what could go wrong, did go wrong made for a fun and head shaking read. Good luck in the contest. Gretchen
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I think I like the slapstick tale better than a suave and smooth one. The antics of what could go wrong, did go wrong made for a fun and head shaking read. Good luck in the contest. Gretchen
Comment Written 31-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2023
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If luck be a lady tonight, this will shoot up the polls, unless it is critiques grammatically.
I am glad you enjoyed it. May the SMILE be with you!
Comment from jmdg1954
Oh those hopeful dreams where fantasy takes us.
You left nothing to the imagination, Tom with lines like -
wearing the stingiest string bikini taut against her cheeks. I hoped she would stoop and scoop up a shell, unveiling a most audacious peek. She didn't.
Oh darn it all...
Excellent post.
John
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Oh those hopeful dreams where fantasy takes us.
You left nothing to the imagination, Tom with lines like -
wearing the stingiest string bikini taut against her cheeks. I hoped she would stoop and scoop up a shell, unveiling a most audacious peek. She didn't.
Oh darn it all...
Excellent post.
John
Comment Written 31-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2023
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I am glad you enjoyed it. May the SMILE be with you!
Men. What can comen be without them?
Comment from Eli. Nightingale
If this isn't a winner, I don't know what is. At first, I thought I was reading prose and I was reading it as such, but then I noticed my mind had switched to reading it like poetry...and then I kept going back and forth reading...poetry...no prose...no poetry, prose! I found myself more and more excited, like a kid in a candy store because that is some great work! That sort of work deserves 6 stars.
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If this isn't a winner, I don't know what is. At first, I thought I was reading prose and I was reading it as such, but then I noticed my mind had switched to reading it like poetry...and then I kept going back and forth reading...poetry...no prose...no poetry, prose! I found myself more and more excited, like a kid in a candy store because that is some great work! That sort of work deserves 6 stars.
Comment Written 31-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2023
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Thank you E.
I am glad you enjoyed it. May the SMILE be with you!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a lovely write Tom, full of innocent romance and the reality of life. I enjoyed your wooing and you were successful in the end as women like to come to the rescue of a wounded soldier! Ha ha ha, I really enjoyed this post and I wish I had a six for you but I have just given my last one away! Love Dolly x x x
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This is a lovely write Tom, full of innocent romance and the reality of life. I enjoyed your wooing and you were successful in the end as women like to come to the rescue of a wounded soldier! Ha ha ha, I really enjoyed this post and I wish I had a six for you but I have just given my last one away! Love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 31-Oct-2023
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I am glad you enjoyed it, D. May the SMILE be with you!
I had fun writing it.
Comment from karenina
Oh wow! That is quite the fantasy in poetic motion, Tom! It's great to have fun with these prompts...
No string bikini clad beauties were harmed in the writing of this woulda/coulda/shoulda dream...
Karenina
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Oh wow! That is quite the fantasy in poetic motion, Tom! It's great to have fun with these prompts...
No string bikini clad beauties were harmed in the writing of this woulda/coulda/shoulda dream...
Karenina
Comment Written 31-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2023
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Leave it to you to be as cute as cute can be in the final line of your comment. I am glad you enjoyed it. May the SMILE be with you!
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The SMILE is with me!
And who can't use more smiles in this world?
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Amen
Comment from Douglas Goff
Not quit the Casanova, but whatever gets one toe in the door! Besides, I am 100% certain you are a lot smoother than that.
This was a chuckle! Thank you for sharing, my friend.
D
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reply by the author on 31-Oct-2023
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Not quit the Casanova, but whatever gets one toe in the door! Besides, I am 100% certain you are a lot smoother than that.
This was a chuckle! Thank you for sharing, my friend.
D
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Comment Written 30-Oct-2023
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A man has to do what a man has to do. Asking for a date did nothing for me, but making like S. Holmes, smoking that pipe of his, had her take note.
P.S. Thanks for the comment.
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A man has to do what a man has to do. Asking for a date did nothing for me, but making like S. Holmes, smoking that pipe of his, had her take note.
P.S. Thanks for the comment.
Comment from Wendy G
Lol. You are quite a card with your imagination and hopes, wishes and dreams. My ending is that she fixed your foot and went on her way. Anything else only happens in unrealistic stories. Lol.
Wendy
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Lol. You are quite a card with your imagination and hopes, wishes and dreams. My ending is that she fixed your foot and went on her way. Anything else only happens in unrealistic stories. Lol.
Wendy
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Comment Written 30-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2023
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Thanks as always for your comment. Imaginary friends please more easily than real ones. :-)
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Thanks as always for your comment. Imaginary friends please more easily than real ones. :-)