Guided by Faith
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Comment from nomi338
One of the greatest gifts a human can give to another is the gift of forgiveness. No person alive is perfect. We are all at one time or another need to be forgiven for something we did that was ill advised. To forgive is not only scriptural it is a wonderful thing to practice.
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2023
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One of the greatest gifts a human can give to another is the gift of forgiveness. No person alive is perfect. We are all at one time or another need to be forgiven for something we did that was ill advised. To forgive is not only scriptural it is a wonderful thing to practice.
Comment Written 04-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2023
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I agree. I'm glad it came across with Emma.
Comment from GWHARGIS
I love the frustration Seth has being injured. It seemed very appropriate for his personality. I hope you will delve into Peggy's arraignment. That would be very entertaining.
Good action on several fronts in this chapter. Gretchen
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2023
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I love the frustration Seth has being injured. It seemed very appropriate for his personality. I hope you will delve into Peggy's arraignment. That would be very entertaining.
Good action on several fronts in this chapter. Gretchen
Comment Written 04-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2023
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Sorry, I don't it doesn't move the story along. I do state what her punishment is. Thank you for the kind reviw.
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Good enough! Want to see her get her just desserts. She's a naughty girl.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
I can't believe it has only been 26 days since Seth and Emma met. They both changed for the better and it's fun to watch their relationship grow.
Seth is becoming a softy lol. Just kidding. I think he is learning to trust women again, at least one special girl. (*=*)
Great chapter. I can't wait for the second part.
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2023
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I can't believe it has only been 26 days since Seth and Emma met. They both changed for the better and it's fun to watch their relationship grow.
Seth is becoming a softy lol. Just kidding. I think he is learning to trust women again, at least one special girl. (*=*)
Great chapter. I can't wait for the second part.
Comment Written 04-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2023
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I think Emma is winning Seth over but is he winning her over. LOL Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from jmdg1954
I thought the part with Seth reading Shel Silverstein's book was past over to lightly.
(((Seth introduced the book, read it, and then asked, "What are some ways the tree gave?" )))
Other than that, the chapter falls into place with the rest.
Their relationship is a tug of war ... time will tell.
Looking forward to the next time.
John
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2023
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I thought the part with Seth reading Shel Silverstein's book was past over to lightly.
(((Seth introduced the book, read it, and then asked, "What are some ways the tree gave?" )))
Other than that, the chapter falls into place with the rest.
Their relationship is a tug of war ... time will tell.
Looking forward to the next time.
John
Comment Written 04-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2023
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I was afraid of going into too much detail. I will see what I can do about it. Thank you for mentioning it and for the kind review.
Comment from tfawcus
Although I'm coming in late to your story, it's easy to pick up the threads.
I particularly enjoyed the T-shirt scene! So revealing of character.
One small typo to fix: "With one arm there's no way I can tuck in this in."
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2023
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Although I'm coming in late to your story, it's easy to pick up the threads.
I particularly enjoyed the T-shirt scene! So revealing of character.
One small typo to fix: "With one arm there's no way I can tuck in this in."
Comment Written 04-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2023
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I have made this correction. Thank you for catching it. I hope to drop by again. I always enjoy hearing from you.
Comment from Lea Tonin1
You are a prolific writer there is no doubt! A wonderful imagination that creates a serious interesting story. Emma seems to be a lot of things mostly good.
Your characters are quite vibrant and believable with a dialogue I could see happening between anyone. Lots of insight and the icing on the cake for your written work. I hope you have a great night!
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2023
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You are a prolific writer there is no doubt! A wonderful imagination that creates a serious interesting story. Emma seems to be a lot of things mostly good.
Your characters are quite vibrant and believable with a dialogue I could see happening between anyone. Lots of insight and the icing on the cake for your written work. I hope you have a great night!
Comment Written 04-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2023
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Thank you for the encouragement.
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
I thought Carl was coming to TAKE me home.
With one arm there's no way I can tuck in this in - remove an "in"
. . . moved closer as attempted to stretch the T-shirt . . . Add "she" before attempted
It turns out that George is not a bad guy after all, and it's nice that he's rethinking his life for his son's sake. And his. It's never too late, so they say.
Seth and Emma are still feeling their way with each other, which makes perfect sense when I see that they just met 26 days ago. It seems much longer. Geez, a lot has happened in a month to them!
Thanks for sharing another chapter.
xo
Pam
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2023
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I thought Carl was coming to TAKE me home.
With one arm there's no way I can tuck in this in - remove an "in"
. . . moved closer as attempted to stretch the T-shirt . . . Add "she" before attempted
It turns out that George is not a bad guy after all, and it's nice that he's rethinking his life for his son's sake. And his. It's never too late, so they say.
Seth and Emma are still feeling their way with each other, which makes perfect sense when I see that they just met 26 days ago. It seems much longer. Geez, a lot has happened in a month to them!
Thanks for sharing another chapter.
xo
Pam
Comment Written 04-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2023
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Thank you for the help. I have made the changes. I always appreciate reading your reviews.
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
I enjoy these stories of yours. They entertain and they uplift us too. That Ronald is a troublemaker with a capital T. I wonder what you will cook up next. Good work. Karen
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2023
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I enjoy these stories of yours. They entertain and they uplift us too. That Ronald is a troublemaker with a capital T. I wonder what you will cook up next. Good work. Karen
Comment Written 04-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2023
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He will cook up something else. Thank you for the kind review.
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Have a good week. Karen
Comment from Wendy G
Well done. They are learning more and more about each other and there is a certain amount of teasing going on. Seth seems very capable even with children's ministry. Would he really be able to do that in work time? Interesting development re George and Marc!
Wendy
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2023
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Well done. They are learning more and more about each other and there is a certain amount of teasing going on. Seth seems very capable even with children's ministry. Would he really be able to do that in work time? Interesting development re George and Marc!
Wendy
Comment Written 04-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2023
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In the really small time, yes, rarely need police officers, especially during the day. When my husband was in the Army he was CID, Criminal Investigation Division. I used to say, 'crime doesn't happen between 7:30-4:40', the Army's normal business hours. LOL Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from T B Botts
Hello Barbara,
this is an interesting story. It takes a lot of different turns though and I get a little confused. I don't remember Marc or what he did to get into trouble. I did like the story though. It's believable and the dialogue is good. Thanks for sharing.
Have a blessed evening.
Tom
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2023
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Hello Barbara,
this is an interesting story. It takes a lot of different turns though and I get a little confused. I don't remember Marc or what he did to get into trouble. I did like the story though. It's believable and the dialogue is good. Thanks for sharing.
Have a blessed evening.
Tom
Comment Written 04-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2023
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Marc was the driver who caused Emma's car accident, hit and run. He was drunk. Thank you for the kind review.
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Oh thanks for the clarification gal. It's a good story, and getting better as it goes along. Keep up the good work.