Guided by Faith
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Comment from lyenochka
Gee, Emma really needs her mom to explain things like that? We, the readers knew! Lol. I guess Seth is really the gentleman and Emma is still rather innocent. Glad she has her mom!
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2024
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Gee, Emma really needs her mom to explain things like that? We, the readers knew! Lol. I guess Seth is really the gentleman and Emma is still rather innocent. Glad she has her mom!
Comment Written 09-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2024
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Emma is extremely innocent. Her parents raised her in a bubble/ Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
I don't really get why two grownups can't talk about their feelings and desires for each other. Seth treats Emma as if she is a 14-year-old backward child when it comes to sexual feelings. In real life, she would get very tired of this very quickly. She has had boyfriends. he has had girlfriends. What gives? Karen
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2024
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I don't really get why two grownups can't talk about their feelings and desires for each other. Seth treats Emma as if she is a 14-year-old backward child when it comes to sexual feelings. In real life, she would get very tired of this very quickly. She has had boyfriends. he has had girlfriends. What gives? Karen
Comment Written 08-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2024
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Emma didn't really have boyfriends. Her parents were overprotective and Seth realizes that. They do talk in the next post.
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I am looking forward to your next installment.:-)
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
Emma and Seth are suddenly getting satisfyingly closer. Of course they won't give in to it without a fight, that would be too easy. Editing looks fine to me. An enjoyable read. kay
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2024
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Emma and Seth are suddenly getting satisfyingly closer. Of course they won't give in to it without a fight, that would be too easy. Editing looks fine to me. An enjoyable read. kay
Comment Written 08-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2024
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from royowen
I must admit as a male who had those experiences as a youth, and latterly as a father and a grandfather of girls, my knowledge helped with protection themselves from themselves and for themselves, somethings are precious, and the purity of a girl is part of that, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2024
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I must admit as a male who had those experiences as a youth, and latterly as a father and a grandfather of girls, my knowledge helped with protection themselves from themselves and for themselves, somethings are precious, and the purity of a girl is part of that, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 08-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2024
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Thank you for understanding.
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Most welcome
Comment from Daylily
This is a lovely romantic chapter and I like the characters of Seth and Emma very much. I am looking forward to reading more. :-)
Just a small typo:
"From himself. I think he left because his feelings or desires for you were so strong, he wasn't too sure he'd be able (to) trust himself if he stayed. He respects you that much."
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2024
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This is a lovely romantic chapter and I like the characters of Seth and Emma very much. I am looking forward to reading more. :-)
Just a small typo:
"From himself. I think he left because his feelings or desires for you were so strong, he wasn't too sure he'd be able (to) trust himself if he stayed. He respects you that much."
Comment Written 08-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2024
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Thank you for the catch. I made the change and appreciated the help.
Comment from Pam (respa)
A very good chapter that develops Seth and Emma's relationship. They had a good evening fixing dinner and playing games. The music led to dancing, and it was nice to see them sharing special moments.
It wasn't to hard to figure out why Seth left, but Emma didn't and felt hurt. It's nice that she can tell her mother personal things and get feedback. I liked the way her mother handled it, honest, but caring. I think Seth was surprised that Emma had called her mother, but he did want to know what she had said.
The ending is good, showing that Emma was having the same feelings, too. Well done.
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2024
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A very good chapter that develops Seth and Emma's relationship. They had a good evening fixing dinner and playing games. The music led to dancing, and it was nice to see them sharing special moments.
It wasn't to hard to figure out why Seth left, but Emma didn't and felt hurt. It's nice that she can tell her mother personal things and get feedback. I liked the way her mother handled it, honest, but caring. I think Seth was surprised that Emma had called her mother, but he did want to know what she had said.
The ending is good, showing that Emma was having the same feelings, too. Well done.
Comment Written 08-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2024
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Thank you for the kind review and understanding.
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You are welcome.
Comment from Sanku
I had missed the previous chapter .so i read both at a stretch.
I liked the mother .What an insight! She is lucky to have such a perceptive mother. I enjoyed the coming closer of the two .The story is moving like a beautiful waltz music...
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2024
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I had missed the previous chapter .so i read both at a stretch.
I liked the mother .What an insight! She is lucky to have such a perceptive mother. I enjoyed the coming closer of the two .The story is moving like a beautiful waltz music...
Comment Written 08-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2024
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Many mothers have that six sense. Mine always did and still does. LOL Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
I admit that, at first, I was wondering how discussing a shopping list and dinner in such detail was doing anything to move the story along, and then the casual evening together ending with the intimate dance answered that question. It's usually Emma I'm talking to - telling her to just allow herself to get closer; this time it was Seth:-)
They're headed in the right direction, taking it slow to be sure of what they're doing.
I only had one correction:
he wasn't sure he'd be able TO trust himself if he stayed. (add to)
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2024
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I admit that, at first, I was wondering how discussing a shopping list and dinner in such detail was doing anything to move the story along, and then the casual evening together ending with the intimate dance answered that question. It's usually Emma I'm talking to - telling her to just allow herself to get closer; this time it was Seth:-)
They're headed in the right direction, taking it slow to be sure of what they're doing.
I only had one correction:
he wasn't sure he'd be able TO trust himself if he stayed. (add to)
Comment Written 08-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2024
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I added to, but the grammar check I need to add too. Not sure about this. Thank you for the help and kind review.
Comment from Sankey
Such a lovely chapter. I can feel romance is getting a lot closer. Keep it coming. You are still my favourite writer. Pray I get my act together and resume writing soon.
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2024
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Such a lovely chapter. I can feel romance is getting a lot closer. Keep it coming. You are still my favourite writer. Pray I get my act together and resume writing soon.
Comment Written 08-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2024
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Nice chapter and a calmer one where you can share happy moments in the intimacy of a house. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2024
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Nice chapter and a calmer one where you can share happy moments in the intimacy of a house. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
Comment Written 08-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2024
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Thank you for the kind review and support.