Guided by Faith
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Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Finally getting to the conclusion. Wow, I like the video. It brings Seth and Emma dancing in the story. Emma is such a shy woman that I'm glad she finally came out with the answer.
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2024
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Finally getting to the conclusion. Wow, I like the video. It brings Seth and Emma dancing in the story. Emma is such a shy woman that I'm glad she finally came out with the answer.
Comment Written 11-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2024
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Emma was a fun character to write. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from forestport12
Nothing like a good love story well told. Loved the exchange of dialogue between the two love birds. Little tension there over her not feeling deserving enough for true love. Once again, I marvel how you craft dialogue throughout to move the plot along and keep my childish attention span.
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2024
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Nothing like a good love story well told. Loved the exchange of dialogue between the two love birds. Little tension there over her not feeling deserving enough for true love. Once again, I marvel how you craft dialogue throughout to move the plot along and keep my childish attention span.
Comment Written 11-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2024
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Thank you for the encouragement. I honestly appreciate it.
Comment from T B Botts
Hello Barbara,
I enjoyed reading this chapter. It seems like things are starting to gel for everyone involved. It's always good to clear the air. I'm uncertain as to why Seth would have wondered if Emma loved him or not. She allowed him to stay with her overnight and they've kissed a fair amount. Perhaps he's just afraid it's too good to be true. Thanks for sharing this.
Have a blessed day.
Tom
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2024
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Hello Barbara,
I enjoyed reading this chapter. It seems like things are starting to gel for everyone involved. It's always good to clear the air. I'm uncertain as to why Seth would have wondered if Emma loved him or not. She allowed him to stay with her overnight and they've kissed a fair amount. Perhaps he's just afraid it's too good to be true. Thanks for sharing this.
Have a blessed day.
Tom
Comment Written 11-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2024
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Seth has been hurt and still a little unsure of himself when it comes to women. LOL Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from lyenochka
They finally got on the same page and were able to affirm their love for each other! Hooray! I guess each had some legitimate issues to overcome about their own insecurities.
I'll be traveling, too, so I hope I can get your final chapter reviewed! Great job with the book!
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2024
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They finally got on the same page and were able to affirm their love for each other! Hooray! I guess each had some legitimate issues to overcome about their own insecurities.
I'll be traveling, too, so I hope I can get your final chapter reviewed! Great job with the book!
Comment Written 11-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2024
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Thank you for the kind review. I'll pray for traveling mercies.
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I'll pray for yours, too! 💖🙏 Airplane rides are more unsettling now due to the news!!
Comment from damommy
I'm glad Emma cleared up how she feels about Seth. About time. He still hasn't got around to proposing. But I'm afraid when he does, that will be the end of the story!
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2024
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I'm glad Emma cleared up how she feels about Seth. About time. He still hasn't got around to proposing. But I'm afraid when he does, that will be the end of the story!
Comment Written 11-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2024
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Thank you for the kind review. Final chapter coming up, next week.
Comment from Ric Myworld
Even as old as I am I almost always shy away from all the mushy stuff, and dislike most of the television shows and books which I find too graphic. But you have a special touch, showing all the moods and feeling without taking out a touch of sweet and innocent. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2024
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Even as old as I am I almost always shy away from all the mushy stuff, and dislike most of the television shows and books which I find too graphic. But you have a special touch, showing all the moods and feeling without taking out a touch of sweet and innocent. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 11-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2024
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Thank you for the compliment. I have a male reviewer who swears it's too old fashioned for anybody to read and enjoy. I truly appreciate your words.
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Stick to your guns! Which I'm sure you will. I'm no angel and never have been, but the constant need for vulgarity in art and entertainment saddens me. :-)
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It does me too. I'm not changing. I honestly feel I'm right. I am published and sell books. Am I on the best seller list. No, but if one has to write garbage to get there, I don't want to be there.
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Good for you!
Comment from Chloe Tully
That was good writing I liked how well written it is. And the detail at the end with each character and their description is great job keep writing can't wait for the last chapter's
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2024
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That was good writing I liked how well written it is. And the detail at the end with each character and their description is great job keep writing can't wait for the last chapter's
Comment Written 11-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2024
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Mustang Patty
Hi, Barbara,
I'm SO glad that Emma finally told Seth she loved him. But I do understand why she waited so long. In light of her father's recent death, she probably didn't know up from down.
You've done a great job of portraying the emotions here.
Thank you for sharing - I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Have fun at your son's house,
~patty~
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2024
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Hi, Barbara,
I'm SO glad that Emma finally told Seth she loved him. But I do understand why she waited so long. In light of her father's recent death, she probably didn't know up from down.
You've done a great job of portraying the emotions here.
Thank you for sharing - I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Have fun at your son's house,
~patty~
Comment Written 11-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2024
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Thank you for the kind review and the encouragement.
Comment from royowen
Oh yes, We've come to the penultimate chapter to the story, and the touching scene that we all look forward to has come, and the feisty Emma, and the upright love of her life Seth, has finally, were they profess their love for one another has happened, beautifully written, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2024
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Oh yes, We've come to the penultimate chapter to the story, and the touching scene that we all look forward to has come, and the feisty Emma, and the upright love of her life Seth, has finally, were they profess their love for one another has happened, beautifully written, blessings Roy
Comment Written 11-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2024
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Thank you for the kind review.
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Welcome
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
Boy, talk about pressure! Seth is really getting it, lol:-)
It's nice that they finally did what they said they were going to do - talk it out! Seth didn't propose yet, but now that he knows Emma loves him, I think there will be a special moment in the near future.
Barbara, I saw a few nits along the way, but didn't take the time to point them out because I didn't want to be taken out of the story. I know you're particular, so maybe read it through again slowly - you'll see them.
Looking forward to the proposal:-)
xo
Pam
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2024
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Boy, talk about pressure! Seth is really getting it, lol:-)
It's nice that they finally did what they said they were going to do - talk it out! Seth didn't propose yet, but now that he knows Emma loves him, I think there will be a special moment in the near future.
Barbara, I saw a few nits along the way, but didn't take the time to point them out because I didn't want to be taken out of the story. I know you're particular, so maybe read it through again slowly - you'll see them.
Looking forward to the proposal:-)
xo
Pam
Comment Written 11-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2024
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Thank you for the kind review. I will reread again. My novels go through three editors before my publisher gets it in his hands.