The Legend of Billy Bowfish
How Billy Bowfish got his name19 total reviews
Comment from zanya
A challenging poetic exercise here to be addressed but excellently executed in this poem for the contest -Billy Bowfish is an interesting character, nay, an entrepreneur.
reply by the author on 22-May-2024
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A challenging poetic exercise here to be addressed but excellently executed in this poem for the contest -Billy Bowfish is an interesting character, nay, an entrepreneur.
Comment Written 22-May-2024
reply by the author on 22-May-2024
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Thank you.
Comment from Neonewman
What a fun and refreshing piece you have crafted for your viewers. It certainly enhanced my mood before I head to work. Thank you for sharing your talent.
God bless.
Steve
reply by the author on 22-May-2024
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What a fun and refreshing piece you have crafted for your viewers. It certainly enhanced my mood before I head to work. Thank you for sharing your talent.
God bless.
Steve
Comment Written 22-May-2024
reply by the author on 22-May-2024
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Thank you for this review.
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My pleasure.
Comment from Dawn Munro
"Noone" = no one -- two separate words
The prompt is calling for a 'silly' poem and of course, a fish wearing a bow tie fits the bill.
But yours goes above and beyond, IMO -- I'll be grinning all day.
reply by the author on 22-May-2024
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"Noone" = no one -- two separate words
The prompt is calling for a 'silly' poem and of course, a fish wearing a bow tie fits the bill.
But yours goes above and beyond, IMO -- I'll be grinning all day.
Comment Written 22-May-2024
reply by the author on 22-May-2024
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I will make that correction. Thank you.
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You're very welcome. Best of luck in the contest! :)
Comment from Lakeshia Richardson
I thought this poem was both humorous and heartwarming. I think we all should be like Billy Bowfish and embrace the things that make us stand out and live and lead with our hearts.
reply by the author on 22-May-2024
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I thought this poem was both humorous and heartwarming. I think we all should be like Billy Bowfish and embrace the things that make us stand out and live and lead with our hearts.
Comment Written 22-May-2024
reply by the author on 22-May-2024
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Thank you so much!
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You are welcome, thanks for sharing.
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You are so very welcome, thank you for sharing.
Comment from JanPerry
I really enjoy your attention to detail. Your poem is a winner on every line. You have mastered the silly fish theme with all your funny clothes and nose references. A joy to read, well done.
reply by the author on 21-May-2024
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I really enjoy your attention to detail. Your poem is a winner on every line. You have mastered the silly fish theme with all your funny clothes and nose references. A joy to read, well done.
Comment Written 21-May-2024
reply by the author on 21-May-2024
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Thank you much!
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Thank you much!
Comment from Mia Twysted
That is a lovely story for a child to read. It tells us that we are all different, and that is okay. You can try to change what you see as your flaws and hopefully in doing so you widen yourself to make greater connections.
reply by the author on 21-May-2024
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That is a lovely story for a child to read. It tells us that we are all different, and that is okay. You can try to change what you see as your flaws and hopefully in doing so you widen yourself to make greater connections.
Comment Written 21-May-2024
reply by the author on 21-May-2024
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Thank you very much.
Comment from royowen
What an excellent kiddies poem, this would suit the littlies up to grade two I think, beautifully crafted poem with lots of childlike imagery, flow and good rhyme, which is really what we need for this type of poem. Well done, blessings Roy
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reply by the author on 21-May-2024
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What an excellent kiddies poem, this would suit the littlies up to grade two I think, beautifully crafted poem with lots of childlike imagery, flow and good rhyme, which is really what we need for this type of poem. Well done, blessings Roy
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Comment Written 21-May-2024
reply by the author on 21-May-2024
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Thank you.
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Welcome
Comment from Waterfall Poet
What a great children's poem.
Great continuity and rhyme. I spotted one spelling error which is the first word of line seven. This would be perfect for a children's book. Great job.
reply by the author on 21-May-2024
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What a great children's poem.
Great continuity and rhyme. I spotted one spelling error which is the first word of line seven. This would be perfect for a children's book. Great job.
Comment Written 21-May-2024
reply by the author on 21-May-2024
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Ok, thanks so so much. I will check out the error now!
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Your delightful and imaginative poem beautifully weaves together a wonderful positive message. I think with the rhymes this would be a joy to read aloud to a child. This poem is not only a testament to your creative storytelling but also a touching lesson on finding purpose and joy through helping others. Bravo!
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reply by the author on 21-May-2024
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Your delightful and imaginative poem beautifully weaves together a wonderful positive message. I think with the rhymes this would be a joy to read aloud to a child. This poem is not only a testament to your creative storytelling but also a touching lesson on finding purpose and joy through helping others. Bravo!
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Comment Written 21-May-2024
reply by the author on 21-May-2024
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I appreciate your review and encouragement more than you know!
Thank you!