Dark Hearts
Daydreaming15 total reviews
Comment from lyenochka
I'm reading and thinking to myself, she's writing about Dan Vasc again, isn't she? He does seem one who paints "dark-edged hearts" and is chimeric and his singing is powerful! Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2024
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I'm reading and thinking to myself, she's writing about Dan Vasc again, isn't she? He does seem one who paints "dark-edged hearts" and is chimeric and his singing is powerful! Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 31-May-2024
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2024
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No, it's not DV this time.
I love the guy and his music, but he has zero empathy.
The guy I'm talking about has ADHD and talk openly about his mental heath, which I find refreshing.
Thanks for reading.x
Comment from Ric Myworld
Daydreaming is not a bad thing, but so many times we tend to get caught up in the maybes and what-ifs, while missing out on the opportunities of what could truly be real. Afraid to take a chance. Unwilling to put ourselves out there. Holding back, as time marches beyond our grasps. :-) Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2024
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Daydreaming is not a bad thing, but so many times we tend to get caught up in the maybes and what-ifs, while missing out on the opportunities of what could truly be real. Afraid to take a chance. Unwilling to put ourselves out there. Holding back, as time marches beyond our grasps. :-) Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 31-May-2024
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2024
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Very interesting thoughts.
Thanks for this lovely review.
Comment from Nicole Schmidt
This is very strong and emotional and well written. It grab my attention and held it from start to finish. The graphic fits nicely here as well. This is a solid piece of work. Good luck going forward.
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2024
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This is very strong and emotional and well written. It grab my attention and held it from start to finish. The graphic fits nicely here as well. This is a solid piece of work. Good luck going forward.
Comment Written 31-May-2024
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2024
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Thanks so much for your review, Nicole.
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
Sometimes dreams become reality.
It sounds like your narrator has come across a kindred spirit who understands and comforts her. The "nectar on my lips" but unattainable except in dreams. For now.
Nicely penned, Maria. Are you on break from school now? Good to see you around again.
xo
Pam
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reply by the author on 01-Jun-2024
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Sometimes dreams become reality.
It sounds like your narrator has come across a kindred spirit who understands and comforts her. The "nectar on my lips" but unattainable except in dreams. For now.
Nicely penned, Maria. Are you on break from school now? Good to see you around again.
xo
Pam
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Comment Written 31-May-2024
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2024
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I'm on sick leave, Pam. Too much stress. I've always loved my job, but the local government is making it really difficult for us.
At the moment there are demonstrations going on and quite a few teachers are on sick leave like me.
Thanks for your lovely review. xxx
Comment from Sally Law
Gosh, I wish I had a six for this one. It's fabulous! Sometimes dreams are so real as you have written here. A fine entry for the contest, my friend.
Advice from one who knows. Write the poem and create it line-by-line with spaces as you go. If you write the entire poem in a clump and then sub-divide it, you'll end up with this look. I know, I've tried it both ways. I hope this helps you in the future.
Sending you my best today as always and my very best wishes for the contest.
Sal Xo's
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reply by the author on 01-Jun-2024
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Gosh, I wish I had a six for this one. It's fabulous! Sometimes dreams are so real as you have written here. A fine entry for the contest, my friend.
Advice from one who knows. Write the poem and create it line-by-line with spaces as you go. If you write the entire poem in a clump and then sub-divide it, you'll end up with this look. I know, I've tried it both ways. I hope this helps you in the future.
Sending you my best today as always and my very best wishes for the contest.
Sal Xo's
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Comment Written 31-May-2024
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2024
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This is a super-kind review, Sally. Thanks so much.
Do have a lovely Saturday.