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My Faith Journey

It has been a difficult journey.

17 total reviews 
Comment from fm wright
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A beautiful and wretching heartfelt piece of non-fiction. It was concise and well thought out. Best wishes with this contest entry. I condone you for sticking to your beliefs and not getting an abortion.

 Comment Written 08-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 08-Jul-2024
    Thank you so much for taking the time to review my work it is appreciate it
reply by fm wright on 08-Jul-2024
    My pleasure.
reply by fm wright on 23-Oct-2024
Comment from jim vecchio
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This is worth way more than the stars I own. Thank you for your honesty which must have been terribly difficult. I accepted Christ shortly after beginning college but went down many paths I hope others never fall prey to. Thank God, He continues to forgive, strengthen sand led us.

 Comment Written 08-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 08-Jul-2024
    Thank you so much for being faithful to review my work. I appreciate it very much.
reply by jim vecchio on 08-Jul-2024
    May God bless your continuing journey with peace, health, and love.
Comment from Daylily
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I love learning about the faith moment of others and yours is exceptionally inspiring. I, too, went forward at age twelve while everyone was singing Just As I Am. However, it was many decades later before I fully understood the part about surrendering. That was when, at age 50, I started attending Bible College and eventually received a Masters in Guidance and Counseling.

My daily Bible verse for this morning is:
Romans 8:38-39 -- "For I am convinced that neither death nor life, neither angels nor demons, neither the present nor the future, nor any powers, neither height nor depth, nor anything else in all creation, will be able to separate us from the love of God that is in Christ Jesus our Lord".

How very appropriate!

Smiles, hugs, and blessings, Lily


 Comment Written 08-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 08-Jul-2024
    Thank you so much for your very kind review. I appreciate it very much.
Comment from judiverse
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This a beautiful story, and I like your telling it in such natural, straightforward manner. I can't help but think how different things are now. I doubt that the Army would have cast you aside like they did you when it turned out you were pregnant. Also, you didn't seem to be aware of some of the basics of sex, not knowing what an abortion was. You were not to blame for what happened to you. You realized there was hope ahead for you and moved on to a wonderful life. Excellent work. Use quotation marks around song title. Last stanza, follow should be followed before Him. Best of luck. judi

 Comment Written 08-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 08-Jul-2024
    Thank you so much for your wonderful review. I also appreciate the fact that you understand what it happened in my life.
Comment from jessizero
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This story almost brought me to tears. You told the story so well, and it was beautiful. Thank you so much for sharing this with us, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 08-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 08-Jul-2024
    Thank you so much for your very kind review. It is much appreciated. I am sorry that it almost brought you to tears.
Comment from GWHARGIS
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It takes real guts to be transparent with our lives and our "mistakes". God forgives us as many times as we need it. He understands us to ur very core. He is never shocked by our actions. This was a wonderful entry and I wish you the best of luck. Gretchen

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 Comment Written 08-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 08-Jul-2024
    Grateful to get such a nice thank you so much.
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
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An excellent entry for the Nonfiction Writing Contest. Life has tested you in many difficult ways, Patricia, but you have faithfully carried on and you will be rewarded. Thanks for sharing this very personal part of your life. Good luck in the contest.

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 Comment Written 08-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 08-Jul-2024
    When I get this, thank you very much