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Patch and Ruby

Viewing comments for Chapter 3 "Patch and Ruby Fix Helen's Mews "
Patch is Helen's cat and Ruby is Kenzie's cat

39 total reviews 
Comment from Verna Cole Mitchell
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This is a cute story in a poem. You have a clever twist on words with muse and mews. It would be wonderful if we could find our muses with Meow Mix. Hope you have a great week - covid free!

 Comment Written 19-Aug-2024


reply by the author on 20-Aug-2024
    Hello there Verna, and thank you for this fun review and comments. I love to see so many having fun with these silly cats. I love your meow mix comment. LOL
    Thanks again, my sweet sis and friend.
    Love you, Debi
Comment from LJbutterfly
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It's the thought that counts. Patch and Ruby were lovingly trying to help Helen when she said her muse was broke. When they went on Amazon, I had to stop reading to laugh. I enjoyed reading something light hearted and humorous. Thank you for crafting this delightful spark to my day.

 Comment Written 19-Aug-2024


reply by the author on 20-Aug-2024
    Hi Sweetie, and thank you for this fun review and comments. I love to see so many having fun with these silly cats. And thank you for the Six Stars to help them Fix their mews, LOL.
    Thanks again, my friend.
    Love, Debi
Comment from Carol Clark2
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This is a cute poem that made me laugh. I love the play on words here, Just putting Patch and Ruby together would give Helen lots of 'mews' to write about. She will love your poem! Blessings. Carol

 Comment Written 18-Aug-2024


reply by the author on 19-Aug-2024
    Carol, LOL, I was hoping people would get the part about the mews search came out as meows and that is why they picked the meow mix. Haha. I needed silly and this is always a fun write with the silly cats.

    Thanks for the fun review and comments, dear friend. Love, Debi
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
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Oh my gosh, Debi, what fun!!! Oh, if only little Patch and Ruby, if only...
Well, I'm sure Helen is going to be thrilled when she gets your thoughtful mew gift, and will be back on the road to fixing all her writing ills.

Much love to all,
Rhonda

 Comment Written 18-Aug-2024


reply by the author on 19-Aug-2024
    Hey, Sweetie. I was hoping people would get the part about the mews search came out as meows and that is why they picked the meow mix. Haha. I needed silly and this is always a fun write with the silly cats.
    Thanks for the lovely six stars, Rhonda.
    Thanks for the fun review and comments, dear friend. Love, Debi
reply by davisr (Rhonda) on 19-Aug-2024
    I think I needed silly, too!! It was so cute. I may need a bag of meow mix myself sometimes. I'll keep some in the cabinet...
    Big hugs,
    Rhonda
Comment from Chip Whitley
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"So, Patch on her iPad would Skype
To Ruby, who's the helpful type."

Cats on iPads! I love the idea and imagery of your work. Such cute kitties you have.

 Comment Written 18-Aug-2024


reply by the author on 19-Aug-2024
    Haha, thanks Chip, I was hoping people would get the part about the mews search came out as meows and that is why they picked the meow mix. Haha. I needed silly and this is always a fun write with the silly cats.

    Thanks for the fun review and comments, dear friend. Love, Debi
Comment from Sarah Sandison
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Hey Debbie, I've missed your poems as I've been off here for a while but this is straight up to your usual standard. Lovely easy reading with a beautiful photograph to go alongside. xx

 Comment Written 18-Aug-2024


reply by the author on 19-Aug-2024
    Sarah, how wonderful it is to see you.
    LOL, I was hoping people would get the part about the mews search came out as meows and that is why they picked the meow mix. Haha. I needed silly and this is always a fun write with the silly cats.

    Thanks for the fun review and comments, dear friend. Love, Debi
Comment from nomi338
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This is such a delightful poem to read and review. Those of us who struggle with our muse's occasional appearance and disappearance. I can appreciate the proposed solution that Patch and Ruby proposed. Whether it works or not, I suspect that these two cohorts will be pleased with the Meow Mix.

 Comment Written 18-Aug-2024


reply by the author on 19-Aug-2024
    Hey Nomi, I was hoping people would get the part about the mews search came out as meows and that is why they picked the meow mix. Haha. I needed silly and this is always a fun write with the silly cats.
    Yes, that darn muse can really give us trouble, but I must say Helen doesn't really have that problem. I know you know that but some people think she does. Thanks for having some fun with me, Sweetie.
    Thanks for the fun review and comments, dear BBBB. Love, Debi
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
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It sounds like a good possibility to fix her broken meower, but I doubt it will. Actually, my own cat won't touch Meow Mix. She also doesn't mew ever.

 Comment Written 18-Aug-2024


reply by the author on 18-Aug-2024
    LOL, oh no, Carol, this was when the silly cats didn't know what a muse was and they were trying to figure it out and kept calling it a mews. When they looked up mews, it came back as meows and so they thought that meant that meow mix would fix Helen's mews (muse). Silly, I know, but every once in a while I love to do a Patch and Ruby poem because I like silly in my life.

    I hope you had some fun with it. I sure appreciate the kind comments tho.
    Many hugs and thanks. Love, Debi
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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Cute, cute, and more cute. I am sure Patch and Ruby's solution will surely fix Helen's muse problem. I can't believe it won't. Those two did their best. I enjoyed reading. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 18-Aug-2024


reply by the author on 19-Aug-2024
    Hi Barb, I was hoping people would get the part about the mews search came out as meows and that is why they picked the meow mix. Haha. I needed silly and this is always a fun write with the silly cats.

    Thanks for the fun review and comments, dear friend. Love, Debi
Comment from Teri7
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Debi, This is a very cute and well written poem about Helen's patch and Kenzie's Ruby out to help Helen fix her mews. You used great descriptive words and I could just those two cats working so hard to help! Beautiful picture of the two cats. Thanks for the great big smile today! love and blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 18-Aug-2024


reply by the author on 19-Aug-2024
    Awe, thanks so much Teri, I was hoping people would get the part about the mews search came out as meows and that is why they picked the meow mix. Haha. I needed silly and this is always a fun write with the silly cats.
    And thanks so very much for the fun six stars too, Sweetie.

    Thanks for the fun review and comments, dear friend. Love, Debi

    PS, just wanted to tell you that I will release Tom's poem right away in the morning. I am done and I think you will be pleased.

    Like we discussed a few times, I would like you to look at it right away and see if there are any changes you want made. I tend to hold my breath until I hear something. When I don't hear from someone right away, I assume they didn't like the poem. It is what I do as I put my heart into them and hope they are important enough to look and just tell me if it is ok. I am not worried about you doing that, but some it takes forever to come and look.

    Also I will send you the link for it so you can show Tom or you can show him on the computer. But you do know you don't have to give it to him today just because I released it. You can still wait for his birthday if you want. And don't forget to show him the dear reviews with the well wishes. I sure hope he likes it. Talk to you in the morning. I will release around 6 AM, Central time.