Opening Ceremony
The symphonic visuals of daybreak... (a 3-6-9 poem)21 total reviews
Comment from Nicki.B
Ah no such a pity you didn't get to submit this as a contest entry, it's so good! You certainly have a way with setting the scene wonderfully! I blame my blondness at times too for my forgetfulness haha!
I am so glad you shares it all the same for us to enjoy.
Have a great day, well done!
Best Wishes
Nicki
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Ah no such a pity you didn't get to submit this as a contest entry, it's so good! You certainly have a way with setting the scene wonderfully! I blame my blondness at times too for my forgetfulness haha!
I am so glad you shares it all the same for us to enjoy.
Have a great day, well done!
Best Wishes
Nicki
Comment Written 04-Nov-2024
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
Beautifully written piece. I'm sorry you didn't get to enter it in the 3-6-9 contest but I'm glad we still had the chance to read it. Your words are so vibrant. I can almost feel the warmth of the sun as it spreads over the land. The picture you chose is perfect for the presentation. Thanks for sharing.
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Beautifully written piece. I'm sorry you didn't get to enter it in the 3-6-9 contest but I'm glad we still had the chance to read it. Your words are so vibrant. I can almost feel the warmth of the sun as it spreads over the land. The picture you chose is perfect for the presentation. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 04-Nov-2024
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hello Yvette.
This is a fresh perspective on your creative process, crafting an ethereal poem about a familiar routine from a unique angle. You depict it as more than a sunrise, which is fitting. Very nicely done. Too bad you missed the contest entry.
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Hello Yvette.
This is a fresh perspective on your creative process, crafting an ethereal poem about a familiar routine from a unique angle. You depict it as more than a sunrise, which is fitting. Very nicely done. Too bad you missed the contest entry.
.Z
Comment Written 04-Nov-2024
Comment from June Sargent
Such a lovely performance that deserves a standing ovation! This is a beautiful ode to the dawn of a new day that brings opportunities and joy. Well said.
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Such a lovely performance that deserves a standing ovation! This is a beautiful ode to the dawn of a new day that brings opportunities and joy. Well said.
Comment Written 04-Nov-2024
Comment from Dawn Munro
Your poem evokes much imagery, yet the picture you chose is lovely too. I especially loved that closing line -- indeed a sunrise does seem to crown the horizon, especially when there is nothing hindering those gorgeous rays of sunlight.
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Your poem evokes much imagery, yet the picture you chose is lovely too. I especially loved that closing line -- indeed a sunrise does seem to crown the horizon, especially when there is nothing hindering those gorgeous rays of sunlight.
Comment Written 04-Nov-2024
Comment from royowen
What a marvellous 3/6/9 Yvette, we have missed your skilful work, and your unserring articulation of descriptive and free flowing and highly expressive language, well done, blessings Roy
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What a marvellous 3/6/9 Yvette, we have missed your skilful work, and your unserring articulation of descriptive and free flowing and highly expressive language, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 04-Nov-2024
Comment from lyenochka
Beautiful poem with 3-6-9 verses that bring us from dawn to full sunrise. I could just hear Edvard Grieg's music playing "Morning's melodic sonata starts". Great musical metaphor that makes us "hear" the sunrise!
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Beautiful poem with 3-6-9 verses that bring us from dawn to full sunrise. I could just hear Edvard Grieg's music playing "Morning's melodic sonata starts". Great musical metaphor that makes us "hear" the sunrise!
Comment Written 04-Nov-2024
Comment from Sankey
A lovely poem, accompanied by an excellent piece of artwork that goes well with it. Thanks for sharing. You are all getting me thinking I must get back to writing again.
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A lovely poem, accompanied by an excellent piece of artwork that goes well with it. Thanks for sharing. You are all getting me thinking I must get back to writing again.
Comment Written 04-Nov-2024
Comment from Rachelle Allen
This was a luscious symphony of images and emotions interwoven, like strings among the brass and winds, into a masterpiece. Melodic, rhythmic and evenly paced with the romping 3-6-9 X 3. Glorious!
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This was a luscious symphony of images and emotions interwoven, like strings among the brass and winds, into a masterpiece. Melodic, rhythmic and evenly paced with the romping 3-6-9 X 3. Glorious!
Comment Written 03-Nov-2024
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
This is beautiful. Your choice of words gives a sense of warmth. I think you've perfectly captured a sunrise. Wonderful word choices. Keep up the fantastic work; your ability to paint such a serene picture is truly delightful!
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This is beautiful. Your choice of words gives a sense of warmth. I think you've perfectly captured a sunrise. Wonderful word choices. Keep up the fantastic work; your ability to paint such a serene picture is truly delightful!
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Comment Written 03-Nov-2024