Miranda Chronicles: Teacher's Pet
Viewing comments for Chapter 17 "Babysitting"Miranda finds herself in another situation.
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Comment from BethShelby
This is funny and if it was long, I sure didn't notice it. You are an excellent writer. I wish I had time to sit down and read a whole book you wrote. I'm sure I wouldn't put it down until it was finished. Miranda is one of my favorite characters.
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2024
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This is funny and if it was long, I sure didn't notice it. You are an excellent writer. I wish I had time to sit down and read a whole book you wrote. I'm sure I wouldn't put it down until it was finished. Miranda is one of my favorite characters.
Comment Written 07-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2024
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Thank you so much. I had some fun with this one. Gretchen
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
This was perfectly delightful. It was not heavy handed. Although, without a cast list I don't know why she would do him a favor that might risk her job. And Matt is a first class manipulator. I have known some of those. Well written. Karen
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2024
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This was perfectly delightful. It was not heavy handed. Although, without a cast list I don't know why she would do him a favor that might risk her job. And Matt is a first class manipulator. I have known some of those. Well written. Karen
Comment Written 07-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2024
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Thank you so much, Karen. This was a fun piece to write. Gretchen
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:-)
Comment from royowen
One can't help liking Miranda, she's got a lot of sass, and like Earl's unwashed hands, just a little dirt under her finger nails. She's my kind of girl, and she'll give the sherif a little curry too, she should have been a mother, beautifully written Gretchen, blessings Roy
Typo : Matt looks at the children the(y) blink(s) once.
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2024
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One can't help liking Miranda, she's got a lot of sass, and like Earl's unwashed hands, just a little dirt under her finger nails. She's my kind of girl, and she'll give the sherif a little curry too, she should have been a mother, beautifully written Gretchen, blessings Roy
Typo : Matt looks at the children the(y) blink(s) once.
Comment Written 07-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2024
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Thank you, Roy. Miranda has some unorthodox tactics. Lol. Thank you for this. Gretchen
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Well done
Comment from Sankey
I read the last chapter but sorry I was late. No review. This was interesting read. A couple of small misses. Matt looks at the children the(n) blinks once.
"No[delete space] body's here," Randy says.
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2024
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I read the last chapter but sorry I was late. No review. This was interesting read. A couple of small misses. Matt looks at the children the(n) blinks once.
"No[delete space] body's here," Randy says.
Comment Written 07-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2024
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Thank you so much. Glad you enjoyed this. Gretchen
Comment from Wendy G
Lol. Good story. Very humorous. Sometimes one has to just pull a big bluff. No boy of eight wants to be thought of as a baby, and worse still, have his sister thought to be more mature! Good psychology. Gave me a big smile. Thanks for sharing.
Wendy
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2024
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Lol. Good story. Very humorous. Sometimes one has to just pull a big bluff. No boy of eight wants to be thought of as a baby, and worse still, have his sister thought to be more mature! Good psychology. Gave me a big smile. Thanks for sharing.
Wendy
Comment Written 07-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2024
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Thank you so much, Wendy. I'm glad you enjoyed this. Gretchen
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
This is absolutely delightful. You could separate it out and possibly sell it as a short story. I love it! Have I ever sent you possible web sites with information for marketing your work? Try these free newsletters: Funds for writers, Author's Publish, Worldwide Freelance, and Linked In (although I don't know about this site but there are lots of people who call themselves writers and a few say they are publishers.)
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reply by the author on 11-Nov-2024
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This is absolutely delightful. You could separate it out and possibly sell it as a short story. I love it! Have I ever sent you possible web sites with information for marketing your work? Try these free newsletters: Funds for writers, Author's Publish, Worldwide Freelance, and Linked In (although I don't know about this site but there are lots of people who call themselves writers and a few say they are publishers.)
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Comment Written 06-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2024
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Thank you, Carol. I'm glad you enjoyed this. I will check out those newsletters. I appreciate this. Gretchen
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I think I need to leave my Grandkids with Miranda for an hour! She might sort them out. I enjoyed her solution to these awkward kids who question everything. I take my Grandkids on my run with me sometimes when I am tasked with looking after them. The one time, my Granddaughter who is now 11 dragged her feet, would not cooperate and hid in the park which almost gave me a heart attack! I loved your post Gretchen, love Dolly x x x
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reply by the author on 11-Nov-2024
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I think I need to leave my Grandkids with Miranda for an hour! She might sort them out. I enjoyed her solution to these awkward kids who question everything. I take my Grandkids on my run with me sometimes when I am tasked with looking after them. The one time, my Granddaughter who is now 11 dragged her feet, would not cooperate and hid in the park which almost gave me a heart attack! I loved your post Gretchen, love Dolly x x x
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Comment Written 06-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2024
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Kids seem to specialize in pushing buttons. Lol. I'm glad you got a kick out of this. Thank you so much. Gretchen