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Solve a crime and fall in love at the same time?
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Comment from
Sarah Probe S.
thanks for an inspiring romance fiction story that has left me captivated until the last paragraph, this would be so interesting for a script,
many kind regards,
Sarah Probe
Comment Written 24-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2024
Thank you for dropping by and leaving this kind review.
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Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
What a crafty, clever way to get Sami's ring size! Lol. It sounds lovely too. I hope nothing goes wrong and they do get engaged soon. I like the idea of having lessons in self defence, it is absolutely necessary for a girl walking out alone to be alert all the time. Especially these days. This was a really good chapter, my friend. Well done! :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 24-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2024
Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from
Begin Again
Sami seems to be adjusting to being home but I hope she doesn't get to comfortable. I think that is Noah's thoughts as well and he is doing his best to teach her to be on the alert at all times. Not a bad idea for all of us these days. And the sapphire ring... I wear two of them (first ring Mike gave me) that should be a lovely story and also hopefully part of Sami's ring.
Smiles, Carol
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Comment Written 24-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2024
Thank you for the kind review.
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