Reminiscing
Viewing comments for Chapter 12 "Chapter 12 Steven and Greg"A collection of short stories
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Comment from jmdg1954
A tiny four month old, swaddled up could realistically resemble a football... especially in a teens mind.
Then, a dog or a baby... both are babe magnets.
But that's just me from the outside looking in.
Good post, Barbara. Fun read.
Cheers,
John
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2024
A tiny four month old, swaddled up could realistically resemble a football... especially in a teens mind.
Then, a dog or a baby... both are babe magnets.
But that's just me from the outside looking in.
Good post, Barbara. Fun read.
Cheers,
John
Comment Written 11-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2024
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He also used our yellow Labrador as a babe magnet, too. Especially when she was a puppy. LOL I'd forgotten about that. I need to share that story. Thank you for the kind review.
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Cool. I'm glad I triggered another thought leafing to a story to share.
Comment from Paul McFarland
Very good stories about child rearing, Barb. I'm sure my wife has a few, also. You use the phrase, "it fell on death ears". This should be , "it fell on deaf ears".
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reply by the author on 11-Dec-2024
Very good stories about child rearing, Barb. I'm sure my wife has a few, also. You use the phrase, "it fell on death ears". This should be , "it fell on deaf ears".
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Comment Written 11-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2024
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Thank you for the catch. I'll fix it immediately. I'm sure your wife also has stories. I think all mothers do.
Comment from papa55mike
Greg was an enterprising young man. He knew there was always a way to exploit the situation. What a wonderfully written chapter. Best of luck with your writing! Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
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reply by the author on 11-Dec-2024
Greg was an enterprising young man. He knew there was always a way to exploit the situation. What a wonderfully written chapter. Best of luck with your writing! Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
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Comment Written 11-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2024
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Thank you for the support.