Pastor Blake
A picture of an old home in a wide open paddock12 total reviews
Comment from lancellot
This is a well-crafted poetic story, and I like how the general rhyme is centered around Pastor Blakes name. That was a good idea, as was the format.
If you go int community and the Q&A, you should find the instructions for uploading a picture. It isn't hard. You can practice and play with it from the editor of any post.
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reply by the author on 23-Dec-2024
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This is a well-crafted poetic story, and I like how the general rhyme is centered around Pastor Blakes name. That was a good idea, as was the format.
If you go int community and the Q&A, you should find the instructions for uploading a picture. It isn't hard. You can practice and play with it from the editor of any post.
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Comment Written 23-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2024
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Thank you for that tip. I'll follow up on that. Thank you for stopping by and I hope your Christmas and New Year brings you everything you need.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a touching story Bob and I enjoyed the sentiments of this man who gave his pastoral services to the congregation without moaning about it. He then died in the first world war. How sad this is.
Did you mean Pastor Jake or pastor Blake in the first line, third stanza?
As for posting a picture there is an option when you create your poem right at the top to add a picture, once the page opens, click inside the box and it will give you the option to add a picture from your computer. Good luck with it.
A fine post, love Dolly x x x
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reply by the author on 23-Dec-2024
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This is a touching story Bob and I enjoyed the sentiments of this man who gave his pastoral services to the congregation without moaning about it. He then died in the first world war. How sad this is.
Did you mean Pastor Jake or pastor Blake in the first line, third stanza?
As for posting a picture there is an option when you create your poem right at the top to add a picture, once the page opens, click inside the box and it will give you the option to add a picture from your computer. Good luck with it.
A fine post, love Dolly x x x
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Comment Written 23-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2024
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It commenced as Jake then changed to Blake, I missed one correction. But one mistake for me, is as near to perfection as I ever get. Thank you again Dolly, for yet another very kind review.