Veil of Secrets
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Comment from Carol Clark2
I'm glad Garth and Donatelli have finally listened to Eleanor and are willing to become more involved in finding Travis. Althea has definitely chosen the wrong man to trust. I like the way you are keeping the reader informed through the various conversations. Excellent job! Blessings. Carol
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I'm glad Garth and Donatelli have finally listened to Eleanor and are willing to become more involved in finding Travis. Althea has definitely chosen the wrong man to trust. I like the way you are keeping the reader informed through the various conversations. Excellent job! Blessings. Carol
Comment Written 12-Jan-2025
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
Carol,
What a wonderful story. I better hold on to my hat because things are going to go flying. Wow, you have all these plot twist. I am curious of where they are going.
Cecilia
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Carol,
What a wonderful story. I better hold on to my hat because things are going to go flying. Wow, you have all these plot twist. I am curious of where they are going.
Cecilia
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Comment Written 12-Jan-2025
Comment from Wendy G
Another excellent chapter, and I liked the way the sharing of information is clarifying what's going on, for the reader as well. It's rushing towards a dramatic climax! Well done.
Wendy
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Another excellent chapter, and I liked the way the sharing of information is clarifying what's going on, for the reader as well. It's rushing towards a dramatic climax! Well done.
Wendy
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Comment Written 12-Jan-2025
