Song of the Whippoorwills
a two line poetic form11 total reviews
Comment from Tim Margetts
Not a brdy person here, Melissa.
So I have no idea what the devil a whipporwill is, and you had me on rills until I read your authors notes.
Even so, the poem has a nice rhythm to it, I can almost hear the birds call in its simple two line composition.
Tim x
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reply by the author on 17-Jan-2025
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Not a brdy person here, Melissa.
So I have no idea what the devil a whipporwill is, and you had me on rills until I read your authors notes.
Even so, the poem has a nice rhythm to it, I can almost hear the birds call in its simple two line composition.
Tim x
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Comment Written 17-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2025
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You really MUST do a google search and listen to a whippoorwill. I know you will like it :). Thank you, Tim.
Melissa
