Life Goes On
A young girl loses her best friend, Mocha.....26 total reviews
Comment from patmedium
Beauifully told, with deep understanding of what makes a child tick. Thankyou. Good luck with this one. And all good wishes for 2010. Pat.
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2009
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Beauifully told, with deep understanding of what makes a child tick. Thankyou. Good luck with this one. And all good wishes for 2010. Pat.
Comment Written 26-Dec-2009
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2009
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Pat
I am so pleased that you enjoyed the story from a child's viewpoint. Appreciate your kind words..
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My pleasure to read it, dear. Bye.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
AHHH, what a beautifully heartwarming short story. Your characters where well defined. You did a great job with the child. She sounded very natural. I had tears of grief and joy in the same story. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2009
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AHHH, what a beautifully heartwarming short story. Your characters where well defined. You did a great job with the child. She sounded very natural. I had tears of grief and joy in the same story. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 26-Dec-2009
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Barbara
Thanks so much for the kind review as usual. I really appreciate the comments. Smiles to you....
Comment from dmjones
Good story told through the child. You feel lots of emotion in the loss of his dog. I don't think I would change anything. I didn't see any errors. Good luck in the contest.
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Good story told through the child. You feel lots of emotion in the loss of his dog. I don't think I would change anything. I didn't see any errors. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 26-Dec-2009
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Donna
Thanks so much for the wonderful review. I appreciate it very much. Hope you enjoyed Christmas and aren't all worn out...Relax and write me a story...
Comment from AnnaLinda
Begin Again,
This is a endearing and well written short story. Your descriptions are great and the communication between characters are very realistic. It actually reminds me of my niece who had her dog run over a couple of months ago and her and her dad found a new pup for Christmas.
I enjoyed reading this.
Linda
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2009
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Begin Again,
This is a endearing and well written short story. Your descriptions are great and the communication between characters are very realistic. It actually reminds me of my niece who had her dog run over a couple of months ago and her and her dad found a new pup for Christmas.
I enjoyed reading this.
Linda
Comment Written 26-Dec-2009
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Linda
Is my style that evident that you knew who I was? I am flattered! I am very very close to my four legged friends and when my son lost his recently ..our family had a difficult time. He just got a new puppy and it made me think to write this story...I hope your niece is happy with her new puppy too!
Thanks for the kind review...Happy Holidays to you....
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Oh, sorry! I went to your portfolio.
You are welcome!
Comment from Belinda
This little story is so touching. Poor Camille lost her dog, and she's lucky to have such a wonderful and understanding mother. The bright star is the primadonna of this story and the new dog a bonus. Good work!
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2009
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This little story is so touching. Poor Camille lost her dog, and she's lucky to have such a wonderful and understanding mother. The bright star is the primadonna of this story and the new dog a bonus. Good work!
Comment Written 26-Dec-2009
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Belinda
Thank you for the wonderful review. I am glad that you enjoyed the story. My little four legged friends are like family to me and I wanted them to have a special spot in the story.
Comment from MizKat
This is a sweet and touching story. It was a very enjobable read and it is a perfect contribution for the contest. The best to you in it.
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2009
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This is a sweet and touching story. It was a very enjobable read and it is a perfect contribution for the contest. The best to you in it.
Comment Written 26-Dec-2009
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Kat
Thank you so much for the wonderful review. Your comments are always appreciated. Thanks again....
Comment from missy98writer
Writer,
You've written a touching tale of a little girl losing her beloved pet. The story is well written. The dialogue and descriptive scheme are great and propel the story along. The girl isn't only suffering the loss of her dog but her best friend killed by a drunk driver. Your story is terrific with an excellent message. A five star story for the writing prompt.
Missy.
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2009
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Writer,
You've written a touching tale of a little girl losing her beloved pet. The story is well written. The dialogue and descriptive scheme are great and propel the story along. The girl isn't only suffering the loss of her dog but her best friend killed by a drunk driver. Your story is terrific with an excellent message. A five star story for the writing prompt.
Missy.
Comment Written 26-Dec-2009
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2009
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Melissa
So glad that you enjoyed the story..My four legged friends are like my children..The loss of one is traumatic...Thanks for the great review.
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I loved your story.
Melissa.
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Thank you....as always
Comment from Judith Ann
This is a very touching story and only a child could feel for a puppy like your character did. Having lived with dogs all my life I can relate to your story. Very tender and real story here. Thanks for sharing it. It seems like it was pulled from life. -Judy
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2009
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This is a very touching story and only a child could feel for a puppy like your character did. Having lived with dogs all my life I can relate to your story. Very tender and real story here. Thanks for sharing it. It seems like it was pulled from life. -Judy
Comment Written 26-Dec-2009
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Judy
Ah yes...I am a lover of my four legged friends and when my son lost his..it was a tragedy for our entire family...Thank you for reading and enjoying...Smiles
Comment from CCasetta
A lovely, sweet, gentle story. The details, the dialogue are all quite good. Your piece presents very well the perspective of a child in dealing with loss. A great entry for the contest. Good luck. --Curt
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2009
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A lovely, sweet, gentle story. The details, the dialogue are all quite good. Your piece presents very well the perspective of a child in dealing with loss. A great entry for the contest. Good luck. --Curt
Comment Written 26-Dec-2009
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Curt
My four legged friends are like my children to me...when my son lost his little Pug..we all fell apart...Thanks for the great review.
Comment from PaintZeRoseRed
This story reminded me of poor Jack, our little dog... that our mom sent to sleep >:[
Made me want to cry
Good luck with
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2009
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This story reminded me of poor Jack, our little dog... that our mom sent to sleep >:[
Made me want to cry
Good luck with
Comment Written 26-Dec-2009
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PaintZeRoseRed
I am dearly attached to my four legged friends as so are my children...they are members of our family and we were devastated when we lost one. Thanks for the wonderful review and I am so sorry that you lost Poor little Jack...