Writings From the Heart
Viewing comments for Chapter 3 "Fields of stone,"A book of Poetry & Writing
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Comment from dragonpoet
This is a flowing poem about faith and also remembering the dead and imprisoned (in one way or another). With fields of stone I see graveyards not prison walls. But, the picture still goes well with the poem.
I see no errors
Keep writing
dragonpoet
reply by the author on 21-May-2010
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This is a flowing poem about faith and also remembering the dead and imprisoned (in one way or another). With fields of stone I see graveyards not prison walls. But, the picture still goes well with the poem.
I see no errors
Keep writing
dragonpoet
Comment Written 21-May-2010
reply by the author on 21-May-2010
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thank you dragon
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You're welcome deepwater
dragonpoet
Comment from MsRefusenik
This is really beautiful and well-deserving of its "All Time Best" award. It is a poem that reads like a poem--they don't all. I like the sentiment and I very much like the poem. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 21-May-2010
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This is really beautiful and well-deserving of its "All Time Best" award. It is a poem that reads like a poem--they don't all. I like the sentiment and I very much like the poem. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 21-May-2010
reply by the author on 21-May-2010
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thanks again for reading Ms R
Comment from FREE-ONE
DEEPWATER-That was such a true message in poetry and very well executed in thought and delivery...As a retire...you definetly can feel these words and understand that field very well for as we volunteer to serve our Country...we understand the ultimate sacrifice this requires...I felt you did this a great justice in your words...I will salute you also...for this excellent write! Free
reply by the author on 21-May-2010
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DEEPWATER-That was such a true message in poetry and very well executed in thought and delivery...As a retire...you definetly can feel these words and understand that field very well for as we volunteer to serve our Country...we understand the ultimate sacrifice this requires...I felt you did this a great justice in your words...I will salute you also...for this excellent write! Free
Comment Written 21-May-2010
reply by the author on 21-May-2010
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thank you riversa Gary
Comment from honeytree
The art work is very telling, and the words are likewise.
Our soldiers are human and I feel they would be concerned, for their safety.These brave men and women know they are protecting us all from danger.These brave men can lose their lives for all of us, within our world at large.
Great Writing.
Honeytree.
reply by the author on 21-May-2010
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The art work is very telling, and the words are likewise.
Our soldiers are human and I feel they would be concerned, for their safety.These brave men and women know they are protecting us all from danger.These brave men can lose their lives for all of us, within our world at large.
Great Writing.
Honeytree.
Comment Written 21-May-2010
reply by the author on 21-May-2010
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thanks for reading Honey
Comment from Fish
You had a beginning a middle and an end.
This is one thing about writing poems
which writers generally forget or ignore.
Words full of emotions that signify an
actual sequence of events which draws
the reader into a realm that can be
both felt and understood.
Nice! ;) fish
reply by the author on 20-May-2010
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You had a beginning a middle and an end.
This is one thing about writing poems
which writers generally forget or ignore.
Words full of emotions that signify an
actual sequence of events which draws
the reader into a realm that can be
both felt and understood.
Nice! ;) fish
Comment Written 20-May-2010
reply by the author on 20-May-2010
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thank you fish for reading GW
Comment from bluedragon776
I can tell that you possess a deep faith.
I was studying the picture you submitted with this piece. Is it perhaps from WWI or WWII?
I like these lines:
"For He alone forgives our sins
And He returns us to our kin"
Strong and steady poem.
reply by the author on 20-May-2010
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I can tell that you possess a deep faith.
I was studying the picture you submitted with this piece. Is it perhaps from WWI or WWII?
I like these lines:
"For He alone forgives our sins
And He returns us to our kin"
Strong and steady poem.
Comment Written 20-May-2010
reply by the author on 20-May-2010
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thanks for reading blue
Comment from RazberryBullet
Liked these lines especially: I pray for guidance in this storm Knowing this wind will blow me on
This says it all: Fields of stone remember us all We are the ones, who made the call As fields of stone remember the past
The names of the fallen will always last--So true!
Well done!
reply by the author on 20-May-2010
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Liked these lines especially: I pray for guidance in this storm Knowing this wind will blow me on
This says it all: Fields of stone remember us all We are the ones, who made the call As fields of stone remember the past
The names of the fallen will always last--So true!
Well done!
Comment Written 20-May-2010
reply by the author on 20-May-2010
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thank you Raz
Comment from Heynonni
Wow, here's another on of your very good works. It often sounds as if you are channeling the spirits of the country in the 40's when patriotism was high and men were honored for going to fight and mourned for their brave sacrifice. Fields of stones is good reference to either the bright white crosses of Veterans Cemeteries seen or the poem about the 1st WW, Fields of Flanders. I greatly enjoy your work, hope to see lots more.
reply by the author on 20-May-2010
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Wow, here's another on of your very good works. It often sounds as if you are channeling the spirits of the country in the 40's when patriotism was high and men were honored for going to fight and mourned for their brave sacrifice. Fields of stones is good reference to either the bright white crosses of Veterans Cemeteries seen or the poem about the 1st WW, Fields of Flanders. I greatly enjoy your work, hope to see lots more.
Comment Written 20-May-2010
reply by the author on 20-May-2010
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thank you Heynonni again for reading my work GW
Comment from fastdigits
For any who have heard the sounds
of war your words have a certain
haunting quality that rings so true
as they dance down the screen in
emotional sincerity as one has
those fleeting memories that never
leave us.
Well done
reply by the author on 20-May-2010
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For any who have heard the sounds
of war your words have a certain
haunting quality that rings so true
as they dance down the screen in
emotional sincerity as one has
those fleeting memories that never
leave us.
Well done
Comment Written 20-May-2010
reply by the author on 20-May-2010
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thank you fastdigits, Gary
Comment from miss joyce
Perfectly beautiful tribute in memory to those who were called to serve. Some died defending and you have captured many of our emotions as we approach Memorial Day. Thanks, for the lovley words expressing them for us all!
reply by the author on 20-May-2010
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Perfectly beautiful tribute in memory to those who were called to serve. Some died defending and you have captured many of our emotions as we approach Memorial Day. Thanks, for the lovley words expressing them for us all!
Comment Written 20-May-2010
reply by the author on 20-May-2010
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your welcome and thank you for reading Miss J