Comment from Heynonni

Excellent

I like your musing on the cowboy way. In spite of what Willie Nelson says, I prefer cowboys to doctors and lawyers and such. Maybe what the cowboy's women want to change is that their work keeps them indoors while the cowboy enjoys (and suffers from) the great outdoors. One question - in line 3, did you mean to say "as the cowboy 'works' away", rather than as the cowboy "workers" away? Good thoughts - keep it up - gotta do something when the blows too hard to see the field.

 Comment Written 04-May-2010

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reply by the author on 04-May-2010

thanks for the comments i will make the change

Comment from Mariea

Excellent

Loved this one too. The day to day work never stops, but you wouldn't swap it for quids. Just one small 'spag' for u to look at.

3rd line - workers/works

PS. Would u mind if I knew your first name, don't like using pseudonyms.
Have a great day, hugs Mia

 Comment Written 01-May-2010

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reply by the author on 01-May-2010

thanks for the comment Mia

Gary

Comment from Connie C

Excellent

I have read a few of your poems today and must tell you that I really like what you've submitted so far. I'm guessing that this poem, "Change," pretty much says it all when it comes to the life of a cowboy and the women in his life. I think there might be a small error in the last line: either "women" should be "woman" (singular) or "wants" should be "want" if women is indeed plural. But that's a small error, and the whole poem is nevertheless quite good. I'll be looking for more of your poetry. Connie C

 Comment Written 01-May-2010

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reply by the author on 01-May-2010

thanks for the comment Connie

Comment from Frank Fiction

Good

A sometimes funny poem about cowboys and their non-cowgirls. I see a cowboy theme for you, the continuation of the cowboy. I enjoyed it. Thanks.

 Comment Written 30-Apr-2010

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reply by the author on 30-Apr-2010

thank you frank

Comment from jwlee211

Excellent

Ah I am a cowboy and I have to say that country women wouldn't trade us for anything. I like the tribute to the cowboy's work.

 Comment Written 30-Apr-2010

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reply by the author on 30-Apr-2010

thank you

Comment from kintesiegel

Excellent

that's a nice looking, ah, horse, you got there. Women are crazy. I can tell you that because I am one. Maybe we are all nuts. Anyway, this poem is a good one, says what you want. keep writing.

 Comment Written 30-Apr-2010

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reply by the author on 30-Apr-2010

thank you

Comment from Pili Pubul

Excellent

I like this poem , it seems a shorter version ,inspired in your poem "The quest", It must not be easy the life of a cowboy's wife, isolated and hard.

 Comment Written 30-Apr-2010

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reply by the author on 30-Apr-2010

thanks again Pili

Comment from dotti_1965

Good

I love cowboy stories or poems. This one is a different kind of one. It paints a great picture,but it dose not seem to be very smooth when reading.

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 Comment Written 30-Apr-2010

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reply by the author on 30-Apr-2010

Thanks for the comments

Comment from Josipher32

Excellent

deepwater,

"Change" was a very well written western poem. There was good use of rhyming throughout. The imagery presented was clever.

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 Comment Written 30-Apr-2010

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reply by the author on 30-Apr-2010

Thank you