Writings From the Heart
Viewing comments for Chapter 19 "Her life she must endure"A book of Poetry & Writing
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Comment from Mastery
Hi, Gary. I sense a woman here who married a farmer and was promised all sorts of happy things for the future and is now "trapped" in an existence of work, work, work. Good job if this be the case. One can feel the frustration. Bob
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Hi, Gary. I sense a woman here who married a farmer and was promised all sorts of happy things for the future and is now "trapped" in an existence of work, work, work. Good job if this be the case. One can feel the frustration. Bob
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thank you Bob
Comment from Alexander E Poet
Time changes and things change and I guess we have to change along with them.I thought this was passionate, creative and very well said, I thought it was emotional appeal it was easy to read nice flow, the picture does enhance the quality of the poetry and this poetic piece. well done Well done no errors no mistakes Alexander five S T A R S
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Time changes and things change and I guess we have to change along with them.I thought this was passionate, creative and very well said, I thought it was emotional appeal it was easy to read nice flow, the picture does enhance the quality of the poetry and this poetic piece. well done Well done no errors no mistakes Alexander five S T A R S
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Thank you Alexander
Comment from koyoga
Poignant. This poem is so very true for many
'cowgirls' (aka housewives.) Ah, the things
he promised they would do and now Walmart -
an eye opener, for sure.
Great poem!
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Poignant. This poem is so very true for many
'cowgirls' (aka housewives.) Ah, the things
he promised they would do and now Walmart -
an eye opener, for sure.
Great poem!
Comment Written 29-May-2010
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thank you Koyoga
Comment from patmedium
Excellent, Gary. In fact, I would venture to say exceptional... but you'll have to accept my virtual six! LOL. You demonstrate a true depth of understanding here. Pat.
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Excellent, Gary. In fact, I would venture to say exceptional... but you'll have to accept my virtual six! LOL. You demonstrate a true depth of understanding here. Pat.
Comment Written 29-May-2010
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thank you Pat i can virtual with the best...myfriend Gary
Comment from spiceydog
The composition flows naturally, with an easy rhythm that I imagine resembles this cowgirls easy gait. Your description of everyday life, and the natural evolution of a relationship ring true. 'Endure' has a negative connotation; I really cant tell if our heroine is happy or unhappy. But I guess that also lends authenticity to this portrait. Very well done
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The composition flows naturally, with an easy rhythm that I imagine resembles this cowgirls easy gait. Your description of everyday life, and the natural evolution of a relationship ring true. 'Endure' has a negative connotation; I really cant tell if our heroine is happy or unhappy. But I guess that also lends authenticity to this portrait. Very well done
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thank you spiceydog
Comment from Njorgensen
This poem speaks of cowgirls and the life some must endure, but truth be told it is an example of many a woman's life, cowgirl or not. I found this to be a well thought out, well written poem. You tapped into a subject that many think about and few speak of.
Nice work.
Nancy
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This poem speaks of cowgirls and the life some must endure, but truth be told it is an example of many a woman's life, cowgirl or not. I found this to be a well thought out, well written poem. You tapped into a subject that many think about and few speak of.
Nice work.
Nancy
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thank you Nancy
Comment from Marathonwriter
Hi Duane,
Even though I'm not a cowgirl, I think you just described my life. How I hate to shop at Wal-Mart LOL. I think you did a great job with this poem.
:0)Chris
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Hi Duane,
Even though I'm not a cowgirl, I think you just described my life. How I hate to shop at Wal-Mart LOL. I think you did a great job with this poem.
:0)Chris
Comment Written 29-May-2010
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thank you Chris,, Gary
Comment from LateBloomer
Hello deepwater,
Being a cowgal is not an easy feat and being a mother is even harder, especially in the world we live today.
I felt the sadness from within from the following:
Her life has changed from days of old
when there was just the two
also: Her life she must endure
A poem of sadness and yearning for what use to be.
Regards, LateBloomer
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Hello deepwater,
Being a cowgal is not an easy feat and being a mother is even harder, especially in the world we live today.
I felt the sadness from within from the following:
Her life has changed from days of old
when there was just the two
also: Her life she must endure
A poem of sadness and yearning for what use to be.
Regards, LateBloomer
Comment Written 29-May-2010
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thank you for reading Lb
Comment from cooknnana
This is charming. It reflects, cowgirls or not, the everyday mundanes of life; not necessarily in a bad way. It just contrasts what our young minds dream what our lives will be like and what they truly turn out to be. It makes me smile.
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This is charming. It reflects, cowgirls or not, the everyday mundanes of life; not necessarily in a bad way. It just contrasts what our young minds dream what our lives will be like and what they truly turn out to be. It makes me smile.
Comment Written 29-May-2010
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thank you cook for reading
Comment from fionageorge
Wow, what a sad poem, when someone must 'endure' rather than the stage of life they are in at the moment. Motherhood and all it encompasses are great equalizers.
Well written and emotional, with good flow.
Warmest regards, Marijke
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Wow, what a sad poem, when someone must 'endure' rather than the stage of life they are in at the moment. Motherhood and all it encompasses are great equalizers.
Well written and emotional, with good flow.
Warmest regards, Marijke
Comment Written 29-May-2010
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thank you Marijke