Writings From the Heart
Viewing comments for Chapter 27 "Let the children play and watch."A book of Poetry & Writing
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Comment from Bellringer
Very well done poem that call us who have young children in the family to invest our time, energy, and attention to their development. We are cautioned not to let the government do our jobs for us. Best wishes, Hector
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2010
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Very well done poem that call us who have young children in the family to invest our time, energy, and attention to their development. We are cautioned not to let the government do our jobs for us. Best wishes, Hector
Comment Written 18-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2010
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thank you Hector
Comment from gramalot8
Deepwater, we can each learn a lot from just the simple act of sitting in the background and observe our children at play. It is said, children imitate what they observe from those around them. Goes along with history repeats itself, don't you agree? Very well done.
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2010
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Deepwater, we can each learn a lot from just the simple act of sitting in the background and observe our children at play. It is said, children imitate what they observe from those around them. Goes along with history repeats itself, don't you agree? Very well done.
Comment Written 18-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2010
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thank you gramalot for this review and comment yes i do agree
Comment from Aletheia
Yes, the children are our future, and we can't and shouldn't ignore them. I like the message in your poem and I thought it was very well written. Nice picture. B :)
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2010
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Yes, the children are our future, and we can't and shouldn't ignore them. I like the message in your poem and I thought it was very well written. Nice picture. B :)
Comment Written 18-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2010
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thank you B for the review
Comment from Sharkey
Well written, the flow is smooth and I did not catch any typos. So true too....we don't seem to be able to just let children be children anymore.
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2010
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Well written, the flow is smooth and I did not catch any typos. So true too....we don't seem to be able to just let children be children anymore.
Comment Written 18-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2010
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thank you for reading sharkey
Comment from RKagan
How very true. The older I get the more I understand the concept of this poem. I read it aloud and it reads really well. It's a heartfelt piece that touches the reader in its honesty. good work
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2010
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How very true. The older I get the more I understand the concept of this poem. I read it aloud and it reads really well. It's a heartfelt piece that touches the reader in its honesty. good work
Comment Written 18-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2010
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thank you RK
Comment from Sacred Heart
Hi Duane,
I love the powerful message
within this poem. Children do
need to be involved and see through
our eyes so they
can learn and grow. Learning what
history can teach is so important to the next
generation. So they can hopefully do a little better
improving on the last one. This is so important.
We old timers surely do need to have
our dreams live on through our children.
You honor them well with this beautifully
written poem. It truly is an honor to read. Smile, Take care my friend, Love Light Patty
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2010
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Hi Duane,
I love the powerful message
within this poem. Children do
need to be involved and see through
our eyes so they
can learn and grow. Learning what
history can teach is so important to the next
generation. So they can hopefully do a little better
improving on the last one. This is so important.
We old timers surely do need to have
our dreams live on through our children.
You honor them well with this beautifully
written poem. It truly is an honor to read. Smile, Take care my friend, Love Light Patty
Comment Written 18-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2010
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thank you Patty for your welcome review and comments
Comment from xxRowanHarperxx
Very cute and emotionally deep poem! I loved it! The rhythm was good and the poem flowed smoothly. Loved this part the most: "Leave them to study history,
We continue to make the same mistakes,
Learn from evolution.
Let the children play.... And watch.
Leave us our hopes and dreams,
With age."
Great poem!
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2010
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Very cute and emotionally deep poem! I loved it! The rhythm was good and the poem flowed smoothly. Loved this part the most: "Leave them to study history,
We continue to make the same mistakes,
Learn from evolution.
Let the children play.... And watch.
Leave us our hopes and dreams,
With age."
Great poem!
Comment Written 18-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2010
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thank you for this review and your welcome comments Rowan
Comment from zoocq
Thank you for your poem. I so enjoy how your see our world, simply, yet so accurately. You make so much sense with your beautiful words.
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2010
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Thank you for your poem. I so enjoy how your see our world, simply, yet so accurately. You make so much sense with your beautiful words.
Comment Written 18-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2010
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thank you for your comments zoocq
Comment from mountainwriter49
I enjoyed the message in your poem and
the call to be involved with our children
and the teaching them of history.
I did note a few SPAGS that, if fixed, would help
the readability of the poem.
Leave them to study history,[.]
We continue to make the same mistakes,[.]
Thanks for sharing.
ray
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2010
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I enjoyed the message in your poem and
the call to be involved with our children
and the teaching them of history.
I did note a few SPAGS that, if fixed, would help
the readability of the poem.
Leave them to study history,[.]
We continue to make the same mistakes,[.]
Thanks for sharing.
ray
Comment Written 18-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2010
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thanks for the review ray
Comment from Thilophian
Dear deepwater,
The poem flows like a river. It speaks of sublime truths with simple vocabulary. Let the children play.... And watch.It's true that many natural qualities are lost in children in the process of socialization and adaptation.
Great work!
Regards,
Thilophian
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2010
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Dear deepwater,
The poem flows like a river. It speaks of sublime truths with simple vocabulary. Let the children play.... And watch.It's true that many natural qualities are lost in children in the process of socialization and adaptation.
Great work!
Regards,
Thilophian
Comment Written 18-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2010
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thank you Thilophian for the review