Another Pretty Face
Viewing comments for Chapter 34 "Chapter 14; part three"Can love survive small town gossip?
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Comment from Jonez08
Hi Barbara, so glad these two are communicating. I believe that is a key ingredient for a lasting relationship.I look forward to the seeing how things will play out. So happy to hear you're better.
How do I know you won't hurt one of us?" She studied her hand holding the rest of the croissant. "Especially Cassie. She's not your flesh and blood."
(after all he's done and proven time and time again, I'm speechless that she would even consider this. I'm not convinced that she's ready for a stable, committed relationship. After what she's gone through, maybe she needs more time to build on a loving relationship.She seems a bit unstable.)
Cassandra
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2011
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Hi Barbara, so glad these two are communicating. I believe that is a key ingredient for a lasting relationship.I look forward to the seeing how things will play out. So happy to hear you're better.
How do I know you won't hurt one of us?" She studied her hand holding the rest of the croissant. "Especially Cassie. She's not your flesh and blood."
(after all he's done and proven time and time again, I'm speechless that she would even consider this. I'm not convinced that she's ready for a stable, committed relationship. After what she's gone through, maybe she needs more time to build on a loving relationship.She seems a bit unstable.)
Cassandra
Comment Written 25-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2011
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I wish more women would consider that possiblity before getting involved with a man. As a first grade teacher I see it often where their boyfriends injure a child.
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I agree with you wholeheartedly, especially in this day and age, but not when the man loves you, risk his life for your child, tries to please you in every way, willing to accept your terms as long as he can be in your life. Of course, I may be the only one who thinks this way.
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I agree with you wholeheartedly, especially in this day and age, but not when the man loves you, risk his life for your child, tries to please you in every way, willing to accept your terms as long as he can be in your life. Of course, I may be the only one who thinks this way.
Comment from bhogg
Reaching an end to your wonderful story which is kind of bittersweet. This has been an incredibly engaging romance with a mixture of tension and drama. How will you top this one? It will indeed be fun to see! Always warm regards, Bill
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2011
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Reaching an end to your wonderful story which is kind of bittersweet. This has been an incredibly engaging romance with a mixture of tension and drama. How will you top this one? It will indeed be fun to see! Always warm regards, Bill
Comment Written 25-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2011
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Thank you for your encouragement. I am playing around with two possiblities. It may be a flip of a coin which one I go with.
Comment from Jack Canada
Extremely well written and for not being my favorite genre of fiction I have to admit I enjoyed this post. Thank you for expanding my boundries.
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2011
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Extremely well written and for not being my favorite genre of fiction I have to admit I enjoyed this post. Thank you for expanding my boundries.
Comment Written 25-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2011
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Thank you for your kind words and the review. I appreciate both.
Comment from Paula Andrea Pyle
You are no doubt an incurable romantic tot he nth degree. I found your story to endearingly well delivered with the dialogue adding style and flavor.
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2011
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You are no doubt an incurable romantic tot he nth degree. I found your story to endearingly well delivered with the dialogue adding style and flavor.
Comment Written 25-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2011
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Thank you for the kind review. Some of my faithful male reviewers have accused me of being an emotional female. HUMMMMM>>
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maybe so...
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
"You were angry with Roy and I watched you repeatedly slug him. (maybe a comma after Roy would make this more clear)
Very well written and deals with some powerful emotions in a tactful manner. Glad to hear you are feeling better and will keep you in my thoughts and prayers. Debbie
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2011
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"You were angry with Roy and I watched you repeatedly slug him. (maybe a comma after Roy would make this more clear)
Very well written and deals with some powerful emotions in a tactful manner. Glad to hear you are feeling better and will keep you in my thoughts and prayers. Debbie
Comment Written 25-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2011
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Thank you for your kind review. I will check that comma.
Comment from moyramouse
Hi Barbara, really loved this chapter. I could see it being acted out on the screen as well. Your characters were well developed and the conversation was entirely believable and flowed. I'm going to step back in time and read your earlier posts so I can read the beginning of the story. x moyramouse
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2011
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Hi Barbara, really loved this chapter. I could see it being acted out on the screen as well. Your characters were well developed and the conversation was entirely believable and flowed. I'm going to step back in time and read your earlier posts so I can read the beginning of the story. x moyramouse
Comment Written 25-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2011
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from Auroraboreal800
GREAT Chapter! We can fell love in the air... We're going to miss Sara and Joe...
Thanks for the author's notes; glad to hear your iron count is up!
Blessing for you dear Barbara,
Alba
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2011
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GREAT Chapter! We can fell love in the air... We're going to miss Sara and Joe...
Thanks for the author's notes; glad to hear your iron count is up!
Blessing for you dear Barbara,
Alba
Comment Written 25-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2011
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Thank you for your kind review and support.
Comment from Patrick G Cox
Hi Barbara,
Good ending to your ongoing story here, it seems that at last the lady is letting go her prejudices ...
Good news as well that your anemia is correcting.
Patrick
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2011
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Hi Barbara,
Good ending to your ongoing story here, it seems that at last the lady is letting go her prejudices ...
Good news as well that your anemia is correcting.
Patrick
Comment Written 25-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2011
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Thank you for your kind review and support.
Comment from patmedium
ONLY 24 pages left? ... I sincerely hope they're not all going to be as maple syrup sickly sweet as this one, dear friend ... or I might just abandon ship! It was ok ... I am not criticising ... just saying that I don't read romances! LOL. xxx
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2011
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ONLY 24 pages left? ... I sincerely hope they're not all going to be as maple syrup sickly sweet as this one, dear friend ... or I might just abandon ship! It was ok ... I am not criticising ... just saying that I don't read romances! LOL. xxx
Comment Written 25-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2011
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Not a problem. Sara will end up causing Joe one more problem, go figure. Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from Nanashirley
It is a good chapter and the characters are so real. I think the the problems are so rear it is hard to believe it is a fiction. I saw no need for editing.
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2011
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It is a good chapter and the characters are so real. I think the the problems are so rear it is hard to believe it is a fiction. I saw no need for editing.
Comment Written 25-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2011
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Thank you for your kind review.