Glints of Gold
It takes time to heal20 total reviews
Comment from Jnetgame
Great writing about your what you went through after your mother died and the year you turned thirty-two. I'm glad you were able to work through your feelings with a therapist. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2011
Great writing about your what you went through after your mother died and the year you turned thirty-two. I'm glad you were able to work through your feelings with a therapist. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 07-Feb-2011
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2011
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Thanks so much Jnetgame. I appreciate your kind and encouraging review; and good wishes.
Comment from N.K. Wagner
A very beautiful tribute to your mother and a great piece of insight into survivor's guilt, especially since this is not the manifestation that we normally think of when we hear that term. Very well done. Good luck in the contest. Nancy
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2011
A very beautiful tribute to your mother and a great piece of insight into survivor's guilt, especially since this is not the manifestation that we normally think of when we hear that term. Very well done. Good luck in the contest. Nancy
Comment Written 07-Feb-2011
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2011
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Thanks so much Nancy for your kind and encouraging review. I really appreciate the time you took to read it and send along your comments, as well as your good wishes.
Comment from homebaker23
Another piece that put me in tears. Your piece could really connect to the reader how you suffered all those years and how you missed your mother.
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2011
Another piece that put me in tears. Your piece could really connect to the reader how you suffered all those years and how you missed your mother.
Comment Written 07-Feb-2011
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2011
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Thank you so much homebaker23. I am so pleased that you took the time to read my essay; and send along your touching review. Blessings to you.
Comment from RKagan
THis story is well written and it brought tears to my eyes. I see in your author notes that it is a tribute to your mom. well, you did a great job with it.
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2011
THis story is well written and it brought tears to my eyes. I see in your author notes that it is a tribute to your mom. well, you did a great job with it.
Comment Written 07-Feb-2011
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2011
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Thanks so much for your touching review R. I appreciate your kind comments and encouraging remarks. Best wishes.
Comment from Jeanie Mercer
This touches me profoundly, not only because it is so well written but because it touches a personal nerve. My daughter died at the age of 36, and one of the two little girls she reluctantly left behind was 7 years old at the time, just your age (the other was 10). Both girls have grown into fine young women and each of them retain some of their mother's best qualities, so they are a treasured link of ongoingness for me and others. Some of my deepest grief in this situation has been for the suffering of these precious little granddaughters. I'm so glad you got help and have resolved some of the issues so beautifully. Your last line is very comforting to me: "I will thank her for giving me the best part of her life and loving me like no other." And also the thought that she was your "first true love." My best to you, Jeanie Mercer
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2011
This touches me profoundly, not only because it is so well written but because it touches a personal nerve. My daughter died at the age of 36, and one of the two little girls she reluctantly left behind was 7 years old at the time, just your age (the other was 10). Both girls have grown into fine young women and each of them retain some of their mother's best qualities, so they are a treasured link of ongoingness for me and others. Some of my deepest grief in this situation has been for the suffering of these precious little granddaughters. I'm so glad you got help and have resolved some of the issues so beautifully. Your last line is very comforting to me: "I will thank her for giving me the best part of her life and loving me like no other." And also the thought that she was your "first true love." My best to you, Jeanie Mercer
Comment Written 07-Feb-2011
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2011
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Thank you for your truly beautiful review. My heart goes out for all that your granddaughters missed out on; I can tell you were a strong and loving influence on them and making things easier to be the best of your ability. What a gift you are to them!!! I have come to accept the situation only because I try not to dwell on the many subtle ways my mother would have helped me navigate through life. You'll never know how touched I am by your gracious words Jeanie. Blessings.
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Your words here likewise are a blessing to me. Love, Jeanie
Comment from BethShelby
It has to be very tramatic for a child to lose her mother at such a tender age. I'm glad you got the help you needed to come to terms with her death and deal with the grieving process. This is a well written account of what you dealt with. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2011
It has to be very tramatic for a child to lose her mother at such a tender age. I'm glad you got the help you needed to come to terms with her death and deal with the grieving process. This is a well written account of what you dealt with. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 06-Feb-2011
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2011
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Thanks so much for your kind and encouraging words for my essay Beth. I much appreciate you taking time to read and review!
Comment from Rama Rao
A good tribute to your late mother. I cannot say it made good reading, but it showed how much you loved her. The impressions and feelings one gets at a young age last long.
I wish you good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2011
A good tribute to your late mother. I cannot say it made good reading, but it showed how much you loved her. The impressions and feelings one gets at a young age last long.
I wish you good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 06-Feb-2011
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2011
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Thanks for taking time to send along your excellent review. I much appreciate it.
Comment from DariaRufina
I really liked your memory of your mother,she must have meant a lot to you. Losing someone you love is not something to take lightly. I lost my grandfather in 1988 to lung cancer and he meant the world to me just as your mother must have meant to you.
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2011
I really liked your memory of your mother,she must have meant a lot to you. Losing someone you love is not something to take lightly. I lost my grandfather in 1988 to lung cancer and he meant the world to me just as your mother must have meant to you.
Comment Written 06-Feb-2011
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2011
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I am so very gratified by your wonderful gift of kind words and understanding. My condolences on the loss of your granfather Daria. You have been very generous in granting me that extra star, which I appreciate very much. Blessings.
Comment from iamwrite
Bravo. Very eloquently written. My mother died when she was 43 and I can absolutely relate to your situation. I, too, believed I would die, or perhaps should die, at that same age. This was beautiful.
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reply by the author on 06-Feb-2011
Bravo. Very eloquently written. My mother died when she was 43 and I can absolutely relate to your situation. I, too, believed I would die, or perhaps should die, at that same age. This was beautiful.
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Comment Written 06-Feb-2011
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2011
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Thanks so much for your overwhelmingly lovely review and understanding. I am very honored by your comments. I am truly sorry for your tragic loss iamwrite. So much we'll never know. Blessings.
Comment from mumsyone
This is a nice tribute to your mother. It had to be hard for your to write, I'm sure. It is well written and well edited. I wish you all the best in the contest.
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reply by the author on 06-Feb-2011
This is a nice tribute to your mother. It had to be hard for your to write, I'm sure. It is well written and well edited. I wish you all the best in the contest.
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Comment Written 06-Feb-2011
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2011
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Thanks mumsyone for your considerate and gracious review. I appreciate the good wishes as well.