Lonely Hearts Meet
Viewing comments for Chapter 27 "Part four, Chapter 8"Anna and her son escape from a man-made Hell.
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Comment from robyn corum
Another good work. I will miss reading your posts on a more regular basis, but I hope you will have many bright, shiny faces to mold and shape and enjoy. Thanks for the 'trips' away from home! robyn
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2011
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Another good work. I will miss reading your posts on a more regular basis, but I hope you will have many bright, shiny faces to mold and shape and enjoy. Thanks for the 'trips' away from home! robyn
Comment Written 17-Aug-2011
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from dbmccarter
This is a good addition to the story. The mother-in-law is a very real character. Your facts in the notes are so interesting and alarming.
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2011
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This is a good addition to the story. The mother-in-law is a very real character. Your facts in the notes are so interesting and alarming.
Comment Written 17-Aug-2011
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from DonandVicki
A continuing tale of woe and abuse. I was captivated through out the story. You have a way of keeping the reader riveted and wanting more. Don
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2011
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A continuing tale of woe and abuse. I was captivated through out the story. You have a way of keeping the reader riveted and wanting more. Don
Comment Written 17-Aug-2011
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from JBCaine
Barbara-
As usual, nothing to correct. Darn you teachers, taking away all our critical fun!
Very nicely done. Rich characters, and an engaging story.
JBCaine
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2011
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Barbara-
As usual, nothing to correct. Darn you teachers, taking away all our critical fun!
Very nicely done. Rich characters, and an engaging story.
JBCaine
Comment Written 16-Aug-2011
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from RebelRose
Boy, there is no end to what Bobby will do. Selling her car was real sneaky. Thank goodness her lawyer was there to handle it and it was convenient that Mrs. Rodgers was there with her checkbook. Another great chapter. Well written with good dialogue.
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2011
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Boy, there is no end to what Bobby will do. Selling her car was real sneaky. Thank goodness her lawyer was there to handle it and it was convenient that Mrs. Rodgers was there with her checkbook. Another great chapter. Well written with good dialogue.
Comment Written 16-Aug-2011
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from quashdog
That bed must have awful memories for her, she is better off sleeping on the floor. I see now where Booby's bad ass personality came from. His mother is a super bitch. Good chapter Barbara, I'll be looking for the next one.
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2011
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That bed must have awful memories for her, she is better off sleeping on the floor. I see now where Booby's bad ass personality came from. His mother is a super bitch. Good chapter Barbara, I'll be looking for the next one.
Comment Written 16-Aug-2011
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from pickthorn
Another interesting chapter of this ongoing saga of Anna and her effort to break free from her ex-husband, Bobby. believe that there will be more firworks in the ensuing chapter. Bobby doesn't seem the type to go away quietly.
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2011
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Another interesting chapter of this ongoing saga of Anna and her effort to break free from her ex-husband, Bobby. believe that there will be more firworks in the ensuing chapter. Bobby doesn't seem the type to go away quietly.
Comment Written 16-Aug-2011
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from jclark
Another wonderful chapter with lots of sub plots to engage the reader. I look forward to the next chapter and am anxious to see how Anna fares.
Judy
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2011
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Another wonderful chapter with lots of sub plots to engage the reader. I look forward to the next chapter and am anxious to see how Anna fares.
Judy
Comment Written 16-Aug-2011
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Writeaway...
You held my attention right from the very start Barbara the first line made me shudder. A very chilling tale, I could not find any SPAG errors, I look forward to the next chapter, keep writing!! :)
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2011
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You held my attention right from the very start Barbara the first line made me shudder. A very chilling tale, I could not find any SPAG errors, I look forward to the next chapter, keep writing!! :)
Comment Written 16-Aug-2011
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
School already? Doesn't seem possible, but after this hot summer, fall will seem like a blessing!!! Another well written chapter.
Women who leave their batterers are at 75% greater risk of severe injury or death than those who stay.
That is a very sobering statistic. Thanks for continuing with this story-I'm sure it has helped bring this silent epidemic out into the open~Debbie
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2011
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School already? Doesn't seem possible, but after this hot summer, fall will seem like a blessing!!! Another well written chapter.
Women who leave their batterers are at 75% greater risk of severe injury or death than those who stay.
That is a very sobering statistic. Thanks for continuing with this story-I'm sure it has helped bring this silent epidemic out into the open~Debbie
Comment Written 16-Aug-2011
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.