Lonely Hearts Meet
Viewing comments for Chapter 42 "Part three Chapter 13"Anna and her son escape from a man-made Hell.
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Comment from robyn corum
She drifted to sleep in the bath tub? Just wondering. This chapter, as you said, doesn't have a cliff hanger, but it was nice for your characters to have a 'rest'! hahaha Good job!
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She drifted to sleep in the bath tub? Just wondering. This chapter, as you said, doesn't have a cliff hanger, but it was nice for your characters to have a 'rest'! hahaha Good job!
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Comment from Derek Monaghan
Very well written indeed! You clearly have an in-depth knowledge of the English language and the ability to use words in such a clever manner that the reader is drawn into the worlds you create. I like the pace of this piece and the very effective use of dialogue. There is tangible loaded emotion which makes this a real page turner. Vet well done indeed! Derek
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Very well written indeed! You clearly have an in-depth knowledge of the English language and the ability to use words in such a clever manner that the reader is drawn into the worlds you create. I like the pace of this piece and the very effective use of dialogue. There is tangible loaded emotion which makes this a real page turner. Vet well done indeed! Derek
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Mariea
Hello Barbara. Another well written piece. Character portrayal and dialogue still consistent. Thorough editing and no clutter.
Hugs Mia
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Hello Barbara. Another well written piece. Character portrayal and dialogue still consistent. Thorough editing and no clutter.
Hugs Mia
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Comment from wiljacro
HI!barbara. This part of the chapter may not have a cliff hanger ending, but, somehow, it still leaves the reader wondering whether Anna's life is really beginning to be more settled or, has Fate got some other trials and tribulations waiting around the corner. Really looking forward to the next piece! wiljacro.
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HI!barbara. This part of the chapter may not have a cliff hanger ending, but, somehow, it still leaves the reader wondering whether Anna's life is really beginning to be more settled or, has Fate got some other trials and tribulations waiting around the corner. Really looking forward to the next piece! wiljacro.
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Comment from womanwriter
Dear Barbara, I am just joining the story - I'll have to go back and get caught up at a later date. If I can figure out how to, I'll put it on my bookshelf. LOL
Nice writing!
Glad you had a nice Thanksgiving, and Welcome home;-)
Thanks for sharing.
Blessings & Hugs,
womanwriter
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Dear Barbara, I am just joining the story - I'll have to go back and get caught up at a later date. If I can figure out how to, I'll put it on my bookshelf. LOL
Nice writing!
Glad you had a nice Thanksgiving, and Welcome home;-)
Thanks for sharing.
Blessings & Hugs,
womanwriter
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Comment from Katchoo_Ledeux
Short chapter, but flowed well. This is a bit different from other styles I'm used to... for instance: "Mom waited dinner. - never heard that expression before, but I get it.
I bet you've got quite the audience here.... you've got romance, drama, overcoming hardships, parental love... good makings for a story. Cheers to you!
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Short chapter, but flowed well. This is a bit different from other styles I'm used to... for instance: "Mom waited dinner. - never heard that expression before, but I get it.
I bet you've got quite the audience here.... you've got romance, drama, overcoming hardships, parental love... good makings for a story. Cheers to you!
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Comment from Allison78
What a wonderful piece of writing you have
Here! I haven't read the previous chapters
But just this really held my attention and
Left me wanting to read more, great job!
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What a wonderful piece of writing you have
Here! I haven't read the previous chapters
But just this really held my attention and
Left me wanting to read more, great job!
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Comment from Readywriter52
Anna seems very happy and safe. It's a good ending to the story. I think Anna has finally found a home while Michael has found grandparents.
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Anna seems very happy and safe. It's a good ending to the story. I think Anna has finally found a home while Michael has found grandparents.
Comment Written 29-Nov-2011
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Comment from kleck140
You bring to the surface a very emotional subject. And you
keep me wondering if Troy and Anna will get together. Sounds as though she found a great friend in this time of need. You describe the picture very carefully. I need to learn how to do that. Thanks for sharing.
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You bring to the surface a very emotional subject. And you
keep me wondering if Troy and Anna will get together. Sounds as though she found a great friend in this time of need. You describe the picture very carefully. I need to learn how to do that. Thanks for sharing.
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Thanks for your quick response.
Comment from rchitwood
I hope there is going to be more to your story.I really enjoy reading your story it draws the reader into the story and holds their interest.Your story has good dialogue and characters.Very well written and I would recommend this to others.Blessings Rita
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I hope there is going to be more to your story.I really enjoy reading your story it draws the reader into the story and holds their interest.Your story has good dialogue and characters.Very well written and I would recommend this to others.Blessings Rita
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Thank you for the kind review.