Lonely Hearts Meet
Viewing comments for Chapter 47 "Part one, Chapter 15"Anna and her son escape from a man-made Hell.
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Comment from Betty517
Domestic violence is a very worthy cause! I have not read the beginning of this story but what I have read I liked very much. Great read.
Betty
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Domestic violence is a very worthy cause! I have not read the beginning of this story but what I have read I liked very much. Great read.
Betty
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Tonulak
The scenes were very naturalistic, and were basically scenes of a normal family visit. At the apartment Anna's frustrations become apparent with Troy's lack of romantic attention, which leaves us hanging.
Good prose and dialog.
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The scenes were very naturalistic, and were basically scenes of a normal family visit. At the apartment Anna's frustrations become apparent with Troy's lack of romantic attention, which leaves us hanging.
Good prose and dialog.
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from RebelRose
As usual, another great chapter. I am sure Anna's insecurities will be disspelled by Troy. She is just afraid to trust anyone's feelings for her.
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As usual, another great chapter. I am sure Anna's insecurities will be disspelled by Troy. She is just afraid to trust anyone's feelings for her.
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Anisa-
I enjoyed this! You paint a great picture. It's funny to think about how much thought really goes into hanging a picture.. But it really does! It flowed well :)
Thanks for sharing!
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I enjoyed this! You paint a great picture. It's funny to think about how much thought really goes into hanging a picture.. But it really does! It flowed well :)
Thanks for sharing!
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from BHCameron
Very heartfelt relationships between your characters, and very realistic dialogue. I think you capture the underlying tension that affects Anna, and her indecision - clearly a result of her situation. Thanks for sharing this.
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Very heartfelt relationships between your characters, and very realistic dialogue. I think you capture the underlying tension that affects Anna, and her indecision - clearly a result of her situation. Thanks for sharing this.
Comment Written 10-Jan-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Allison78
I think this is another wonderful chapter in your book! You've made something as simple as hang a picture become compelling and an enjoyment to read!
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I think this is another wonderful chapter in your book! You've made something as simple as hang a picture become compelling and an enjoyment to read!
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from PoetlikePoe
its no wonder why this has been recognized. your story has a great flow and has obviously been well thought out. you paint a great picture with your word choices. nice work.
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its no wonder why this has been recognized. your story has a great flow and has obviously been well thought out. you paint a great picture with your word choices. nice work.
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Comment from mumsyone
Good job, Barbara, and your husband, too, for his artwork. I enjoyed reading this chapter.
"It's your apartment. It goes where ever you want it."
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Good job, Barbara, and your husband, too, for his artwork. I enjoyed reading this chapter.
"It's your apartment. It goes where ever you want it."
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from jadapenn
Hmmm, now the little gremlins are in her mind. But this shows she's slowly letting go of the past and starting to think of other things.
Well done, Barbie. I enjoyed. luv jada
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Hmmm, now the little gremlins are in her mind. But this shows she's slowly letting go of the past and starting to think of other things.
Well done, Barbie. I enjoyed. luv jada
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from bhogg
Hi Barbara - I had to chuckle at your Author notes. The only novel I attempted is something I just got burned out on. I'm still asked if I will bring my character back. Good luck in your decision. I do want to know how this one ends, but old Troy needs to step up to the plate and take a swing! Warm regards, Bill
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Hi Barbara - I had to chuckle at your Author notes. The only novel I attempted is something I just got burned out on. I'm still asked if I will bring my character back. Good luck in your decision. I do want to know how this one ends, but old Troy needs to step up to the plate and take a swing! Warm regards, Bill
Comment Written 10-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
I'm wondering why you guys get sexy female muses. Mine is a female. I think I need a sexy hunky male, don't you?
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Don't know, but big hugs to you! Bill