This Arrival
A Valentine Note to valuable friendships17 total reviews
Comment from DALLAS01
This is a beautiful payer of gratitude. You are so fortunate not only to have such a person in your life but to recognize and share her value.
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2012
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This is a beautiful payer of gratitude. You are so fortunate not only to have such a person in your life but to recognize and share her value.
Comment Written 03-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2012
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DALLAS01, thank you ever so much for stopping by to read nad review this offering. Aussie is very special. I hope you have had the chance to read her work.. again thank you.. jlsavell
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you're welcome.
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello jlsavell
Another fantastic composed poem, And what a beautiful tribute to your friend Aussie
These lines brought a very pleasant smile to my face-
they bring with them
a heart that is as genuine as God's rare diamonds
and as warm as God's magnificent sun
Gert
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2012
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Hello jlsavell
Another fantastic composed poem, And what a beautiful tribute to your friend Aussie
These lines brought a very pleasant smile to my face-
they bring with them
a heart that is as genuine as God's rare diamonds
and as warm as God's magnificent sun
Gert
Comment Written 03-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2012
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Gert, thank you once again ever so much. Aussie is a dear and a dear friend to any one that crosses her path.. as you are.. thank you again... jimi
Comment from magicpotwhat
This is so beautiful and I feel so true your words and how you express them are beyond words the picture is beautiful also, this really inspires me, really enjoyable thank you so much. Highly recommend this
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2012
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This is so beautiful and I feel so true your words and how you express them are beyond words the picture is beautiful also, this really inspires me, really enjoyable thank you so much. Highly recommend this
Comment Written 03-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2012
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magicpotwhqat. how are you? Thank you ever so much.. you are always so supportive and generous... once again thank you... jlsavell
Comment from Linda England Bonam
This was a very beautiful poem that you penned here. I absolutely loved the presentation you used, with your gray background and pink font with the pink flowers. Absolutely stunning!
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2012
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This was a very beautiful poem that you penned here. I absolutely loved the presentation you used, with your gray background and pink font with the pink flowers. Absolutely stunning!
Comment Written 03-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2012
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Linda England Bonam, thasnk you ever so much for stoppping by to read and reivew my work. I am honored. jlsavell
Comment from ulster3
Hello, jimi.
This is very well done poetically and it is a thing of beauty. I'm sure Aussie is well deserving of the dedication, and that it will please her immensely. A joyous read.
Warmly, rebecca
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reply by the author on 03-Feb-2012
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Hello, jimi.
This is very well done poetically and it is a thing of beauty. I'm sure Aussie is well deserving of the dedication, and that it will please her immensely. A joyous read.
Warmly, rebecca
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Comment Written 03-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2012
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Rebecca, thank you ever so much It is good to see you and to see you posting more. again thank you... jimi
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Thanks, jimi.
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Thanks, jimi.
Comment from Gungalo
And thus, I find myself thanking God everyday
for sending such an irreplaceable nonpareil into my life,
and forever I will treasure, holding dear,
placing such in its rightful place
The highest pinnacle as one of life's immense joys,
this arrival
A beautiful, beautiful write. Aussie must be beside herself and ready to faint. It's gorgeous girl and your choise of words is very good.
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2012
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And thus, I find myself thanking God everyday
for sending such an irreplaceable nonpareil into my life,
and forever I will treasure, holding dear,
placing such in its rightful place
The highest pinnacle as one of life's immense joys,
this arrival
A beautiful, beautiful write. Aussie must be beside herself and ready to faint. It's gorgeous girl and your choise of words is very good.
Comment Written 03-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2012
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Gungalo, I am at a loss for words.. a total loss, thank you ever so much. I cannot be on here long this afternoon, I have a five mile run and a storm is closing in, but I hope to be on fanstory this weekend to read you beautiful work... again thank you.. jimi
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The pleasure is all mine, Jimi!!
Comment from uniqueauthor
This is a beautiful story in the form of a poem. The imagery is so pwoerful that one can see this child and joy he/she brought in to your life. I enjoyed the read and the picture is so complimentary.
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reply by the author on 03-Feb-2012
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This is a beautiful story in the form of a poem. The imagery is so pwoerful that one can see this child and joy he/she brought in to your life. I enjoyed the read and the picture is so complimentary.
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Comment Written 03-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2012
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uniqueauthor, it is so good to have you fdrop by and read my work. thank you ever so much.. jlsavell
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You're welcome. May peace guid your patways.