Lonely Hearts Meet
Viewing comments for Chapter 66 "Anna's in a coma."Anna and her son escape from a man-made Hell.
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Comment from Fluffyhead
Like the part at end about Anna being special and a fighter. Glad she woke up great work as always. That is cool your hubbie painted that
reply by the author on 17-May-2012
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Like the part at end about Anna being special and a fighter. Glad she woke up great work as always. That is cool your hubbie painted that
Comment Written 16-May-2012
reply by the author on 17-May-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from tc_rego
I like the way the story flows, the dialogue is good and easy to follow. I agree that I feel I am missing a lot of the story so I will go back and read it from the beginning. This is a nice piece. :)
reply by the author on 17-May-2012
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I like the way the story flows, the dialogue is good and easy to follow. I agree that I feel I am missing a lot of the story so I will go back and read it from the beginning. This is a nice piece. :)
Comment Written 16-May-2012
reply by the author on 17-May-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Connie P
Anna is truly a fighter and if anyone can respond to anything while in a coma it would be the cries of their child. Great job on this chapter.
Connie
reply by the author on 16-May-2012
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Anna is truly a fighter and if anyone can respond to anything while in a coma it would be the cries of their child. Great job on this chapter.
Connie
Comment Written 16-May-2012
reply by the author on 16-May-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from gazzagodbod
love the art work Brian did a great job, and though i have just joined you and have missed much of the past entries i enjoyed it thank you gazzaxx
reply by the author on 16-May-2012
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love the art work Brian did a great job, and though i have just joined you and have missed much of the past entries i enjoyed it thank you gazzaxx
Comment Written 16-May-2012
reply by the author on 16-May-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Jen Gentry
Well written as you always are great presentation. I love that Anna comes around by responding to her son it kinda made me cry. Great chapter.
reply by the author on 16-May-2012
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Well written as you always are great presentation. I love that Anna comes around by responding to her son it kinda made me cry. Great chapter.
Comment Written 16-May-2012
reply by the author on 16-May-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from wilburmillicent
Beautifully written, with dialogue that is believable and flows so well. It makes for a very easy read, even though the subject of the piece is quite difficult. You make the characters so real that the reader cares about them from the word go. I look forward to reading some more. Thank you for sharing your work.
reply by the author on 16-May-2012
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Beautifully written, with dialogue that is believable and flows so well. It makes for a very easy read, even though the subject of the piece is quite difficult. You make the characters so real that the reader cares about them from the word go. I look forward to reading some more. Thank you for sharing your work.
Comment Written 16-May-2012
reply by the author on 16-May-2012
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Thank you the the kind review.
Comment from dmt1967
I loved your story the part about the little boy crying for his mum really brought a lump to my throat and broke my heart very well written
reply by the author on 16-May-2012
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I loved your story the part about the little boy crying for his mum really brought a lump to my throat and broke my heart very well written
Comment Written 16-May-2012
reply by the author on 16-May-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from squid152
Margaret, Betty, Troy, are believable characters in this story. I admire you for bringing more awareness to the reality of marriage abuse.
reply by the author on 16-May-2012
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Margaret, Betty, Troy, are believable characters in this story. I admire you for bringing more awareness to the reality of marriage abuse.
Comment Written 16-May-2012
reply by the author on 16-May-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Shirley McLain
I do love this story. I'm glad Anna is starting to come out of her coma. You have done a great job once again and I'm eager to read the next chapter. Shirley
reply by the author on 16-May-2012
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I do love this story. I'm glad Anna is starting to come out of her coma. You have done a great job once again and I'm eager to read the next chapter. Shirley
Comment Written 16-May-2012
reply by the author on 16-May-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from whispersofthesoul
Hiya,
I would love to say you have the behaviour of the family right but I can't but what I can tell you for sure is that the family suffer a damn sight more than the patient. They have to wake up that is if they manage to get a few hours that they 'she' hasn't died then it turns to hope that she's woken, waiting for the moment they are told to come and say good bye, drinking endless cups of vendor coffee holding hands praying when you haven't prayed in years playing favourite sond and cd on loop being told that hearing is the last part of the body to go, machines going awry and been ushered out the room and your physically sick because you think the worst and the patient lies motionless in a locked world- a body that has shut down and has no contact thus no understanding of reality.
I know this because I have been in a coma twice, the longest being 5 months after contracting meningitis twice and I was obsessed about what was going on for them what happened because i didnt know it was blank I woke up thinking it was the next day.
This is really good chapter but was to some extent hard to read. I feel for Anna because it's hard when you come round there are a lot of questions and you can have complications. My only suggestion is that it might be worth having a go of padding it out a bit
Good job looking forward to the next installments xx
reply by the author on 16-May-2012
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Hiya,
I would love to say you have the behaviour of the family right but I can't but what I can tell you for sure is that the family suffer a damn sight more than the patient. They have to wake up that is if they manage to get a few hours that they 'she' hasn't died then it turns to hope that she's woken, waiting for the moment they are told to come and say good bye, drinking endless cups of vendor coffee holding hands praying when you haven't prayed in years playing favourite sond and cd on loop being told that hearing is the last part of the body to go, machines going awry and been ushered out the room and your physically sick because you think the worst and the patient lies motionless in a locked world- a body that has shut down and has no contact thus no understanding of reality.
I know this because I have been in a coma twice, the longest being 5 months after contracting meningitis twice and I was obsessed about what was going on for them what happened because i didnt know it was blank I woke up thinking it was the next day.
This is really good chapter but was to some extent hard to read. I feel for Anna because it's hard when you come round there are a lot of questions and you can have complications. My only suggestion is that it might be worth having a go of padding it out a bit
Good job looking forward to the next installments xx
Comment Written 16-May-2012
reply by the author on 16-May-2012
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Thank you for the kind review and insight.