A Poet's Plea
write a love poem for me20 total reviews
Comment from Laurie Clayton
Beautifully composed, sensual and romantic
full of gorgeous imagery and emotion.
I'd say this would fill your yen for a
romantic verse very nicely indeed.
Thank you for sharing and have a great festive holiday,
Laurie
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2012
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Beautifully composed, sensual and romantic
full of gorgeous imagery and emotion.
I'd say this would fill your yen for a
romantic verse very nicely indeed.
Thank you for sharing and have a great festive holiday,
Laurie
Comment Written 20-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2012
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Hey you! Great to hear from you! Thank you.
Comment from DALLAS01
As willows woo the window panes
(an aswesome line) This is a beautiful presentation with a variety of great poetic devices that include rhyme, rhythm, alliteration and echoing sounds.
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As willows woo the window panes
(an aswesome line) This is a beautiful presentation with a variety of great poetic devices that include rhyme, rhythm, alliteration and echoing sounds.
Comment Written 20-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2012
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Thanks DALLAS! How wonderful, this is!
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You're welcome.
Comment from yonashalom
This is most excellent my friend. It reads very well like a song. It has a nice steady beat throughout. It is so very peaceful too. I like these lines:
As willows woo the window panes
then sense a silent feather's fall
Very good. :) ~Yona
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2012
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This is most excellent my friend. It reads very well like a song. It has a nice steady beat throughout. It is so very peaceful too. I like these lines:
As willows woo the window panes
then sense a silent feather's fall
Very good. :) ~Yona
Comment Written 20-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2012
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Aw, thank you Yona dear.
Comment from Jean Lutz
Just keep on pouring it out. That is what poetry is all about. Never intended to be kept bottled inside. Here's wishing you the true joy of Christmas and blessings throughout the coming year.
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2012
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Just keep on pouring it out. That is what poetry is all about. Never intended to be kept bottled inside. Here's wishing you the true joy of Christmas and blessings throughout the coming year.
Comment Written 20-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2012
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Hi Jean. This is the third time today I've tried to respond to your review. haha. Thanks for stoppin in.
I've tagged you in a couple songs/videos on Facebook. Hope you get a chance to listen to your musical Christmas cards!
Comment from mshirachot
Jewell..And what a lovely romantic verse this is...one befitting of the lover of our souls!!! I think I share this same romance with the One who is "Oh singer of my deepest songs" and more. It makes me think of some years back when I was single and had to travel...my heart torn between being at home with family and friends...or on my lengthy "date" with just me and my "beloved".
Thanks for indulging in your yearnings and sharing this sweet poem. Well deserving of the six stars. Loved the alliteration, too, especially in this line: "As willows woo the window panes"
Blessings and joyous holiday greetings.
Marsha
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2012
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Jewell..And what a lovely romantic verse this is...one befitting of the lover of our souls!!! I think I share this same romance with the One who is "Oh singer of my deepest songs" and more. It makes me think of some years back when I was single and had to travel...my heart torn between being at home with family and friends...or on my lengthy "date" with just me and my "beloved".
Thanks for indulging in your yearnings and sharing this sweet poem. Well deserving of the six stars. Loved the alliteration, too, especially in this line: "As willows woo the window panes"
Blessings and joyous holiday greetings.
Marsha
Comment Written 20-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2012
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Aw Marsha! Thank you so very much for the six star review and your warm comments. I love your perspective!
Comment from Gungalo
While angels sing and pick up flight
Share the whispers of our night
As memories walk another mile
Our dawn awakens morning's smile
Well it certainly is poetic and leads one to believe this poet does have a plea. A beautiful write for sure girl.
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2012
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While angels sing and pick up flight
Share the whispers of our night
As memories walk another mile
Our dawn awakens morning's smile
Well it certainly is poetic and leads one to believe this poet does have a plea. A beautiful write for sure girl.
Comment Written 19-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2012
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You're too kind. Thanks.
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Smile.
Comment from NadineM
This is beautiful, Jewell. A true romantic you are. Don't try to deny it! haha...
Loved the alliteration and romantic imagery. You are sure to touch a few hearts with your words this evening. Shouldn't this have been entered in a contest??!!
Thanks for sharing this with me. Awesome write...
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2012
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This is beautiful, Jewell. A true romantic you are. Don't try to deny it! haha...
Loved the alliteration and romantic imagery. You are sure to touch a few hearts with your words this evening. Shouldn't this have been entered in a contest??!!
Thanks for sharing this with me. Awesome write...
Comment Written 19-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2012
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Thanks so much my friend. Gosh, wish I could promote this...better get to reviewing, eh? lol
Love you. Thank you for your support and the lovely sixer.
Comment from jlsavell
Oh Jewel, the true visionary you are. You capture the essence of romance as the epitome of the art of writing. You are simple graceful in your pen, alluring in your thoughts, and magical in your visions, take care sweet friend... jimi
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Oh Jewel, the true visionary you are. You capture the essence of romance as the epitome of the art of writing. You are simple graceful in your pen, alluring in your thoughts, and magical in your visions, take care sweet friend... jimi
Comment Written 19-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2012
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HI!! Where you been? Thanks again for the pretty six star review.
This was an old poem, believe it or not that was written in REVERSE! Try reading it from the bottom up. ;)
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I will. Just very busy with life Jewel, very busy,, how have you been
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yeah, me too. It's been awhile since I posted.
Comment from Lobengula
What a beautiful poem, and I'm stuck able only to give you a five, which is infuriating. A hundred stars wouldn't be enough for this treasure. It's the sort of poem to read on a warm Summer's evening at dusk, with the moon just putting in an appearance. Five stars and very well done are all I can give you.
Every good wish, Mike
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reply by the author on 19-Dec-2012
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What a beautiful poem, and I'm stuck able only to give you a five, which is infuriating. A hundred stars wouldn't be enough for this treasure. It's the sort of poem to read on a warm Summer's evening at dusk, with the moon just putting in an appearance. Five stars and very well done are all I can give you.
Every good wish, Mike
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Comment Written 19-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2012
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Thank you Mike! The virtual six is fine.
I truly appreciate your support!
Comment from mountainwriter49
Hello, Poet
You've done a fine job with this beautiful love
poem. The quatrains are strong and the
read is smooth and enjoyable.
A good read tonight!
ray
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reply by the author on 19-Dec-2012
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Hello, Poet
You've done a fine job with this beautiful love
poem. The quatrains are strong and the
read is smooth and enjoyable.
A good read tonight!
ray
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Comment Written 19-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2012
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Thanks mountainwriter