Party Pooper Pooch
witty animal 5-7-515 total reviews
Comment from Melissa-Dawn-Brown
Nice. Read your piece without taking a good look at the picture but then I read it again and everything made sense. Poignant, cute, and kitchy all at once.
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2013
Nice. Read your piece without taking a good look at the picture but then I read it again and everything made sense. Poignant, cute, and kitchy all at once.
Comment Written 10-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2013
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Thanks! Glad it made sense. Appreciate the positive review ... ;o)
Comment from beccabootie123
too funny and love the picture. dogs gone wild like the girls. well written short sweet and complete. very enjoyable write more of the same would be a great series.
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2013
too funny and love the picture. dogs gone wild like the girls. well written short sweet and complete. very enjoyable write more of the same would be a great series.
Comment Written 10-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2013
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glad you enjoyed this poem and funny pic - and 'woofs gone wild' is kind of a take off from 'girls gone wild' - appreciate all your comments ... ;o)
Comment from SikIrishChik
What a great 5-7-5 poem and illustration is adorable as well....I absolutely love "mutts with woofs gone wild" too cute!
If this is a contest entry you have my vote 100%
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2013
What a great 5-7-5 poem and illustration is adorable as well....I absolutely love "mutts with woofs gone wild" too cute!
If this is a contest entry you have my vote 100%
Comment Written 10-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2013
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Thanks, SikIrishChik - Glad you enjoyed this poem, especially the last line, and the funny pic. - Appreciate all your comments ... ;o) starkat
Comment from notdeadyet
This is a very cute message and the pictures are great, too. I would say it fills the "witty" category very well. This is very well written . Bowing to the constraints of the rules of the contest. The fewer lines allowed, the harder it is to make a point. Good job!
By the way, My granddaughter went to a silly string party once. Each kid had to use silly string to attack some others who were bad guys.The kids were super heroes and the bad guys were the adults, I think.
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reply by the author on 11-Mar-2013
This is a very cute message and the pictures are great, too. I would say it fills the "witty" category very well. This is very well written . Bowing to the constraints of the rules of the contest. The fewer lines allowed, the harder it is to make a point. Good job!
By the way, My granddaughter went to a silly string party once. Each kid had to use silly string to attack some others who were bad guys.The kids were super heroes and the bad guys were the adults, I think.
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Comment Written 10-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2013
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Thanks for the wonderful review and story about your granddaughter using Silly String - I hear it's hard to get out of hair. So glad you enjoyed this poem and funny pic. Appreciate all your comments ... ;o)
Comment from mauial
I loved your witty write and the alliteration you used too. The last line is really a funny play on words, from the girls gone wild. Great job and I think this is one of the better ones I read in this prompt. Hope it wins.
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reply by the author on 11-Mar-2013
I loved your witty write and the alliteration you used too. The last line is really a funny play on words, from the girls gone wild. Great job and I think this is one of the better ones I read in this prompt. Hope it wins.
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Comment Written 10-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2013
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Thanks, mauial - Glad you enjoyed this poem and the play on words. Appreciate all your comments ... ;o) starkat