Comment from Sally Law

Excellent

Beautifully penned, dear Geoff. I didn't realize you were such a wonderful lyricist and songwriter. I don't see the photo you described or the song links provided but that's okay. It's wonderful.
Sending you my best today as always and blessings for Christmas,
Sal XOs...

 Comment Written 22-Dec-2020

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reply by the author on 23-Dec-2020

Did you miss the music. I have all these on MP3 if I have an e-mail for you can send. Thanks for coming by.

Comment from robyn corum

Excellent

Geoff,

How did I miss all of these?!! I just read almost three in a row by you - and I didn't see any of them in my message box... Just popping up on me. Strange. But I'm enjoying!

 Comment Written 22-Dec-2020

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reply by the author on 23-Dec-2020

You came in after I got the first one up then I decided to promote the others after I found the music DOES work some don't think it does for some reason. Maybe only on PC? Thanks again.

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is another very well written Christmas carol you have penned my friend. It is a sad thing that the world does not love and respect our Lord like they should. You used very good wording and imagery. I hope you and your wife have a great Christmas! Blessings and Merry Christmas! Teri

 Comment Written 24-Dec-2017

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reply by the author on 24-Dec-2017

Thanks Sis. Doing it all alone today but we don't mind. Let me know if you can hear the music? I think I have an e-mail for you?? If not send me one to sankey48@yahoo.com.au and I can send the MP3 files of all of these.

Comment from Ricky1024

Excellent

This is Love written Richland team as well as imagery it grammar issue so to speak injective content was excellent along with objective content measures were firmly in place thanks for this doctor Ricky 1024

 Comment Written 24-Dec-2017

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reply by the author on 24-Dec-2017

Thanks Ricky,do let me know if you can hear the music over on the Linked church carols page. Other wise write me at sankey48@yahoo.com.au for all the MP3 files.

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written Carol for the real Christmas message we need to hear more and more today to keep us focus on Jesus Christ's purpose in our lives.

Merry Christmas to you and your family.

 Comment Written 24-Dec-2017

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reply by the author on 24-Dec-2017

Thanks Sis do let me know if you were able to hear the music from the old church Carols page.

Comment from mikemagine

Excellent

This too! Very good:-) "Trusting in His Word." Absolutely necessary. I've found that the more I read the Bible, the stronger I feel!

Peace in abundance!

Mike

 Comment Written 31-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 31-Oct-2014

Well I hope you get to heAR THEM oops sorry for caps mad caps lock on this puter. If you don't get to hear them let em know will send link to Carols page on the web site.

reply by mikemagine on 31-Oct-2014

Thanks again for the link!

Comment from Eric1

Excellent

Hi Sankey, this my friend is a beautifully written hymn, telling it just exactly as it should, no hidden extras just basic spiritual words that lift the readers hear as they read.

 Comment Written 31-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 31-Oct-2014

Thanks Eric appreciate you carrying on through after the Introduction. Hope you are able to listen to the music. Someone said I needed to say more in there have to look at that. God Bless.

reply by Eric1 on 31-Oct-2014

Apologies my friend, it should have said 'readers heart' and you are most welcome.

reply by the author on 31-Oct-2014

ha never even noticed the miss I must have understood where you were going hehe. Typo king this way hehe!

Comment from B. Diehl

Excellent

Great lyrics. I was once in a Christian band, so I can totally appreciate poetic lyrics. I am giving you five stars for this one; I can't help myself. Well done.

-B<3<3

 Comment Written 10-Dec-2013

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reply by the author on 10-Dec-2013

Thanks very much appreciate the stars for sure. I got these out for folks who are new friends to check on here. The last one was the newest of all these written in 2002 th9is one was written in the mid seventies.

Comment from MERRY1

Good

Enjoyed the Carol and you are right. Carols by candle light can be anything today as long as they mention christmas. I wondered if the chorus may work better if you left out the (and). it seems to throw the rhyme out of time. Well done though.

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 Comment Written 09-Dec-2013

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reply by the author on 09-Dec-2013

Will have a look and see what I can do it has worked ok for some time already. Did you hear the midi file? Thanks for the review. I wrote this in the seventies as I did most of the other carols there are 4 altogether one I only wrote in 2002.

reply by the author on 09-Dec-2013

Hi I just removed the And I think oyu might be right! Funny how all the reviewers miss different things hehe thanks again. Need to work on the layout a bit don't like the backing of the fonts.

reply by the author on 10-Dec-2013

have a look in here again added an ice picture and fixed the layout.

reply by MERRY1 on 10-Dec-2013

Love the picture. and it is a good song. thanks

reply by the author on 10-Dec-2013

Thanks for coming back I just left a note on one of your pieces I had already reviewed and Senior Moment hit and I forgot hehe.

Comment from MoIronE13

Excellent

Well done my brother. The message is Eternal and brings great joy to the the believer. I have written many a song to the Son of God, our Savior.
It always is a great reflection on the Spirit and gift of salvation. I feel your love for Jesus. "Sing songs of praise to the Lords of Host" that He may know our gratitude of thanksgiving..
Merry Christmas, mate!

 Comment Written 09-Dec-2013

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reply by the author on 09-Dec-2013

Thanks for the lovely review I hope you got to hear the Midi file. Now I have these in a boo9k on here need t work on getting them published

reply by MoIronE13 on 10-Dec-2013

I could in the background.
Nice work..

reply by the author on 10-Dec-2013

That's great

reply by the author on 10-Dec-2013

Sorry about your Cancer I know the KLord is waiting to bless you as you enter His courts in due time. Just been over and reviewed your piece on Earth's deterioration and so on. Lord Bless

reply by MoIronE13 on 10-Dec-2013

No worries mate.
I have been healed by the blood of Christ.
I shall live for eternity in the House of the Lord..

Bless you!

reply by the author on 10-Dec-2013

Look forward to seeing you "over there" my friend.

reply by MoIronE13 on 10-Dec-2013

We will laugh and sing Psalms to the Lord...

reply by the author on 04-Apr-2014

AMEN! That's for sure!