Honey, I'm Home...
10 Word Flash Fiction Story17 total reviews
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is cute, mystery writer, makes you ask the question who slammed the door, him or her, lol. cute dialogue about a marital disagreement. good luck in the contest
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2013
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this is cute, mystery writer, makes you ask the question who slammed the door, him or her, lol. cute dialogue about a marital disagreement. good luck in the contest
Comment Written 29-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2013
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Thank you
Comment from w.j.debi
Oh this is so sad. Hopefully, they make up. There is such a story behind these few words. Well done with the prompt. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2013
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Oh this is so sad. Hopefully, they make up. There is such a story behind these few words. Well done with the prompt. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 29-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2013
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Lol, I agre, thanks for the stars.
Comment from Cindy Warren
I wonder what he did to make her so mad. It must have been awful! You did manage to tell a story in ten words, tho some must be left to the imagination. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2013
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I wonder what he did to make her so mad. It must have been awful! You did manage to tell a story in ten words, tho some must be left to the imagination. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 28-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2013
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thanks for the great review
Comment from adewpearl
I love the dialogue. I guess the person answering the door wasn't as into him as he was into her. LOL
Strong verbs, good plot that tells me all I need to know :-) Brooke
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2013
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I love the dialogue. I guess the person answering the door wasn't as into him as he was into her. LOL
Strong verbs, good plot that tells me all I need to know :-) Brooke
Comment Written 28-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2013
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Thanks, and this is a compliment coming from you.
Comment from Carole Rosa
To the author of the writing prompt entitled, "Honey, I'm Home." This is a sweet story about bitter truth! It is my opinion that you did an excellent job of writing a complete story in 10 words. I didn't think it could be done. Carole
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2013
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To the author of the writing prompt entitled, "Honey, I'm Home." This is a sweet story about bitter truth! It is my opinion that you did an excellent job of writing a complete story in 10 words. I didn't think it could be done. Carole
Comment Written 28-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2013
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LOL, Thanks again, and I know your talent, You can also.
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??????? I wonder who you are! Hugs. Carole
Comment from Val Crisson
Ouch, though I'm not sure this a complete story we get message. I like the use of dialogue in this very interesting contest.
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reply by the author on 28-Oct-2013
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Ouch, though I'm not sure this a complete story we get message. I like the use of dialogue in this very interesting contest.
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Comment Written 28-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2013
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Thank you
Comment from Matthew M.
That's how it used to be at my house. However, that's when it's time to get a dog. They will always show that they missed you. Even Michael's Vick's dogs missed him.
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reply by the author on 28-Oct-2013
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That's how it used to be at my house. However, that's when it's time to get a dog. They will always show that they missed you. Even Michael's Vick's dogs missed him.
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Comment Written 28-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2013
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True, what they say... mans best friend, always loyal.