Comment from mfowler

Excellent

If your words refer to the scene, I am in agreeance. When a beautiful think is beheld, it's time to stop, take that breath of silence and for just one moment time stands still. Lovely idea. Good luck!

 Comment Written 22-May-2014

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reply by the author on 22-May-2014

Hi Mfowler,

it can refer anything you want it to refer to... it can be a quiet mind... it can be taking time out to smell the roses, but my actual inspiration was the creator of this prompt... Missy98 (Melissa) she was a very special soul that lives on through this contest and the friends that miss her bright light.

Thank you so much for your review and kind comments... most appreciated.

Kindest regards...

Comment from sweetwoodjax

Excellent

this is very well written, mystery writer, you did an excellent job writing this six word poem and the dedication to missy for the one who created the prompt. good luck in the contest

 Comment Written 22-May-2014

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reply by the author on 22-May-2014

Thanks so much sweetwoodjax your comments encouraged and also a thank you for your well wishes, most appreciated... but the main thing... it was Missy's prompt... has it been a year already?

Kindest regards...

Comment from nelliesellie

Excellent

I love the poem. Sometimes silence is the best. Do not let your mind always be busy with analyzing and changing. God created some pretty good things. Learn and accept the good thing first. You will learn you have to change your point of view first. Great work.;

 Comment Written 21-May-2014

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reply by the author on 22-May-2014

Hi Nellieellie,

our creator did it all... now just breathe it in and give praise... thank you so much for a wonderful review... most appreciated.

Kindest regards...

Comment from Dom G Robles

Excellent

A six-word entry poem. The picture of a mountain during a dying day depicts of silence and serenity. It seems that the time stands still and everything not moving... "Breath of silence...time stands still."

 Comment Written 21-May-2014

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reply by the author on 22-May-2014

Thanks Dom, I appreciate your review and comments... take care my friend.

Kindest regards...

Comment from Smoothiecool

Excellent

good luck in the contest

your six words say it all
it connects with the beauty of the picture
just breathe it in as time stands still

cheers...Smoothiecool

 Comment Written 21-May-2014

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reply by the author on 21-May-2014

Hi Smothiecool,

thank so much for your wonderful comments and your well wishes in the contest... it is very appreciated.

Kindest regards...

reply by Smoothiecool on 21-May-2014

most welcome...SC

Comment from donette1914

Excellent

Breath of silence... ~Time stands still...

simply beautiful and breath taken and so creative of these lovely words to a beautiful photo

 Comment Written 21-May-2014

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reply by the author on 21-May-2014

Hi Donette,

thank you for this lovely review, it is most appreciated.

Kindest regards...

Comment from Dean Kuch

Excellent

There are times in our lives when everything seems to go in slow motion, and even stop altogether sometimes. Those quiet, introspective moments of complete solitude as we stand, so small, before the breathtaking sights of mother nature and the world in which we live. Looking out over a vast ocean from the shore, gazing across a vast canyon...sleeping beneath a blanket of twinkling, tranquil stars.

A very lovey poem, and just six short words. Awesome!

 Comment Written 21-May-2014

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reply by the author on 21-May-2014

Hi Dean,

thank you so much for a truly wonderful review, it is appreciated.

Kindest regards...

reply by Dean Kuch on 21-May-2014

It was my pleasure.

Comment from angel123

Exceptional

I enjoyed reading your wonderful, interesting poem. It is well written and it flows well. I like the message. It well thought out.

angel123

 Comment Written 21-May-2014

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reply by the author on 21-May-2014

Hi Angel,

thank you so much for such a wonderful review... very touching and most appreciated.

Kindest regards...

Comment from TAB_that's me

Excellent

Perfect six word poem! It is beautiful and full of imagery in those few words. I wish you the best in the contest.
Teresa

 Comment Written 21-May-2014

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reply by the author on 21-May-2014

Hi Teresa,

thank you for this wonderful review, kindness and good wishes... it is very appreciated.

Kindest regards...

Comment from akulkumol

Excellent

MMagnificent expression in so less words, beautifully to describes scenic beauty of wild nature. Really it feels like time remains standstill at such a moment. Best wishes for the contest.

 Comment Written 21-May-2014

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reply by the author on 21-May-2014

Hi Akulkumol,

thank you for you lovely words of encouragement, a wonderful review and your well wishes... most appreciated.

Kindest regards...