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No Bones About It

You'll really dig this one...

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Comment from kiwisteveh
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This is the best one of these that I have read - many of them don't deserve the epithet 'witty', but your double dose of word play fills the bill nicely.

Good luck in the contest - this should do well.

Steve

 Comment Written 16-Jun-2014

reply by the author on 16-Jun-2014
    Yeah, that word 'witty' seems to not be a big factor in this one, Steve, but that's what the rules said, so that's what I set out to give them. I suppose the votes will tell in the end if wit truly matters in these contests, or not.

    I'm glad that you liked it, and I appreciate the review, my friend.
Comment from tfawcus
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Excruciating punning here! Very humerus! A real rib-tickler. I reckon she'll get curvature of the spine lumbaring around with that huge bone!

 Comment Written 16-Jun-2014

reply by the author on 16-Jun-2014
    Ha ha, your review is pretty dog-gone humerus itself, Tony. Yeah, poor doggie. At least she'll be happy. Bent, but very happy.

    Thanks for the entertaining review. Much appreciated!
Comment from Smoothiecool
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good luck in the contest

your syllable count spot on

no bones from dig
no bonus

few words portray this well

cheers..Smoothiecool

 Comment Written 16-Jun-2014

reply by the author on 16-Jun-2014
    Thanks, SC. I'll take all of the luck that I can get, my friend, but skill works much better. Well...maybe not.

    Thanks again!
reply by Smoothiecool on 17-Jun-2014
    welcome..SC
Comment from Jackarrie
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A very clever entry into the 5-7-5 Witty animal contest. No bonus for the poor dog who has worked so hard for archaeologist,

Well done, good luck in the contest. Mary

 Comment Written 16-Jun-2014

reply by the author on 16-Jun-2014
    Thank you, Mary. I'm really glad you liked it. I'll never have a bone to pick with you if I keep getting reviews from you like this one, LOL.

    I appreciate it!
reply by Jackarrie on 16-Jun-2014
    Ha ha, I like it.
reply by Jackarrie on 16-Jun-2014
    Ha ha, I like it.
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2014
    ;>}
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
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Hi,

LOL...Your' right I dig it - love this poem, and the the photo is priceless!

Well done. Good luck in the contest.

Cheers,
Keep Smilin'... Jax

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 Comment Written 16-Jun-2014

reply by the author on 16-Jun-2014
    Thanks, Jax. I'm really glad that you liked it. I sure had fun coming up with the idea for it.

    Thanks again!
Comment from Debra White
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Hi :) I think this is a brilliant contender for 1st place in the voting booth. Your play on words are both clever and funny. I like it a lot! Good choice of artwork too. Good luck (although I don't think you'll be needing luck!) kind regards, Debra :)

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 Comment Written 16-Jun-2014

reply by the author on 16-Jun-2014
    Thank you Debra, that's very nice of you. I'm really glad you liked it.